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/Meanwhile…/
/Chatter!/
"... Please… No pushing, there's enough for everyone…"
"I think…" Dale mumbled as he looked at the crowd in front of him
'If I'm not careful they'll pull my gauntlets and helmet off even though they're strapped in place...'
'These people, I thought they had food but aren't they a bit too eager?'
'Some of them seem sick... I won't get any diseases, right?'
'I don't mind helping but if I get contaminated...'
Somewhere in the middle of their settlement, a large crowd gathered around Dale with Children, Adults, and even the Elderly moving around chaotically as they tried to converse with the Knight as he handed over items from his inventory to whoever he could.
Some of the Children moved next to him, taking a spot beside him without a care in the world as they ate whatever he gave them… But Dale was grateful for that.
Read it, please?
I'll be bringing back double editing.
As you know, I used to edit every chap twice for consistency, but I stopped due to chap size and price.
I couldn't have every chapter be over 2.5K words long and cost over 4-5 fast passes...
I would like some feedback on the price, did it increase too much or is still manageable?
I would like to know since I'm unsure if the price increases even after I post the chapter.
If they do, then I won't really be able to keep this, otherwise no one will be able to read it consistently...
But if it doesn't, then the chapters can go back to being bigger and more consistent.
Thank you for reading!