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For now one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read, I like that the MC goes straight to what he set out to do, killing off important characters in the story taking into account the consequences but being smart enough to hide it, what I like most is the fact that the author doesn't lengthen the plot trying not to kill off the MC's obstacles just because they're from the main cast.
Até agora achei muito interessante sua fanfic.... geralmente o pessoal faz um copiar colar, são raros os autores que constroem o mundo de uma forma diferente, uma pena que tem pouco capitulos, espero que não abandone e nem force um harem, varias mulheres é bom de se ver em um anime mas chato de se ler em uma historia....
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
I can give this story 4* for how unique and fresh it is. But story is only one perspective. Like beside kidnapped Naruto the MC killed the genin of team 8, which is the heir of their respective clans but there is no reaction of them in this story. Surely, Konoha in turmoil after that. Oh well, it is just my opinion. it would be good fanfiction if the author show general perspective. If continue like this, just edit the summary with self insert MC. It was interesting at first but I won't continue to read this. Thank you for the translation.
For now one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read, I like that the MC goes straight to what he set out to do, killing off important characters in the story taking into account the consequences but being smart enough to hide it, what I like most is the fact that the author doesn't lengthen the plot trying not to kill off the MC's obstacles just because they're from the main cast.
Até agora achei muito interessante sua fanfic.... geralmente o pessoal faz um copiar colar, são raros os autores que constroem o mundo de uma forma diferente, uma pena que tem pouco capitulos, espero que não abandone e nem force um harem, varias mulheres é bom de se ver em um anime mas chato de se ler em uma historia....
Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
I can give this story 4* for how unique and fresh it is. But story is only one perspective. Like beside kidnapped Naruto the MC killed the genin of team 8, which is the heir of their respective clans but there is no reaction of them in this story. Surely, Konoha in turmoil after that. Oh well, it is just my opinion. it would be good fanfiction if the author show general perspective. If continue like this, just edit the summary with self insert MC. It was interesting at first but I won't continue to read this. Thank you for the translation.