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I genuinely loved this story. Not gonna lie. I shed more than a few tears at the end.
best revenge book I have ever read it's one of the first books that made me cry as well so I rate it 10/5 stars
I just finished this and its now one of my favorites.At first i was a bit hesitant because the racist thing but when i read it i think it happend only one time or so and it even brought tears in my eyes few times because the Mc is sacrificing himself many times,makes others hate him and pretends to be a dog to the celestial dragons for decades just so they dont get suspicious and become fleet admiral so he has more power and can gain more allies and plan things better so he has so much willpower to do that and thats why they didnt suspect him.I really recommend you read this fic and the other of the author both are really enjoyable.
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One of the best fanfics I have ever read.It made me very towards the end but no matter what it was awesome.I plan to use this as an inspiration for my own novels. Thank U.
This is one of the best one piece fanfic I have read, so wholesome. I would recommend everyone to try it out. It will be really difficult to find a good one piece ff after this.I would really appreciate it If anyone can recommend me any fanfic as good as this for One piece, Naruto, Bleach, Harry Potter or GOT.
The only thing I can say, want to say, and will say is that this is a big banger.
One of the best OP fanfics I have ever read and I have read dozens! A reality check for the crazy bloody world of one piece where friendship and laughter cannot overcome everything, except if Galan does his magic and makes this world a place where normal citizens can believe in happy endings! Thanks for your hard work and amazing story Mr. Author! (btw it is mindblowing how you can end a OP fanfic in under 200chaps without it being just some summery of the Original)
This story is pretty dark but it was so worth it..................... ........................... ...................... .................. .............. ........... .......
Wow just wow... The story has bin a real experiance i felt like i was galan while reading. I felt like the ending was a bit rushed due to how the author did not make the fight scene or anything.
This is a piece of art I'm liking it more than the real one piece man it's amazing it's just i wanted him to at least have inner peace of mind i was really sad reading it and it's very realistic i love it and thank you author for this masterpiece ❤️❤️❤️💕💕😔💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥🔥😊
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first I'm sorry if my English is bad I'm not a native speaker and English is not my second league as someone that read this novel till the end what I like about this novel is the mc not always killing someone for solving the problem the mc always uses his brain for solving his problem Mc event pretending to be a dog of the celestial dragon so he can destroy the world's government and my advice is if you don't know about politics and love to see mc solve his problem by killing then this novel is not for you
Good fanfic, mc focus on his goals and siding with marine till the end, though there's too much tragedy at least mc have happy ending. Don't know if it's MTL or not but for me if it readable then I'm good. Also I think author nerfed 5 elder intelligence too much and a bit rushed in latest chapter and not explored enough mc prowess.
The story is really good. The start its kind of lacking but it turns really good in the middle. although in my opinion it decays in quality a little bit in the end it's still an extremely good read.
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An amazing fanfiction World building and character interactions are on point and very well thought out. Backstories and past experiences are taken into account throughout the whole story. Loved how the characters evolved and how their personalities developed(from MC existence) without straying from their cannon counterparts, like Whitebeard. I loved the fact that even if there is ''character development'' it doesn't feel too forced and doesn't change the characters at they're base (talking about Galan). Also loved that the pacing isn't dragged out to the point where the story becomes filled with things like plot holes, training arcs, too much redundancy and others. There is only one moment that left me confused and that is when he went on a transphobic tangent for a whole paragraph?? Doesn't take away from the great story but still unnecessary.
Ok so I just finished reading this novel till the end. if your looking for a short answer of wether or not this is worth the read then yes. Long answer. Characters have depth to them even if that character fades into the background, during their short screen time you are shown different little quirks of theirs. World building is good, author did a good job with creating a picture of what the Mc was doing throughout the seas (won't spoil what he was doing). MC had very real 'emotions' and his mental state was completely messed up as it should be considering what happened early on. This helped made the readers or at least myself justify MC's cruel decisions at times. So if you like a very dark antihero who has a strong passion for his type of justice, then this is definitely for you. One more thing, there's reviews stating that MC or other characters are too homophobic for their liking. well all I have to say is grow up. if you think MC is homophobic, then your not wrong as he definitely is 100%, not surprised really considering what he experience, which makes him 100% justified to be homophobic. The other characters that's 'homophobic' that they mentioned? well let's just say that the author captured what sailors do best. Talk like sailors as they are part of the military being marines. Plus it's not even that bad as it slowly dies off at the halfway mark when canon starts as marines stop speaking like sailors like in the anime due to a certain reason to help improve their image. Anyway overall best one piece ff I've read, one of my favourite FF overall and gotta say loved that ending not the extra, just seemed fitting how the whole thing culminated and ended the way it did.
Hello there! So, this a good fanfic, it has a good development of characters. The author has managed to flesh out Galan as a credible character. Its no Harem (Always good) and the world is explored but too shallow for my taste (I know that One Piece has many things that arent explored but.... this is a fanfic). The end seems a little rushed and predictable, it has a good rush of emotions but it could be much more. Thanks author for the good time!
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this is great if you are gonna do another one piece what if pls try coin it with a DF this time great strong and sad but good? ending
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Overall a very excellent story would 100% recommend the only thing I didn’ like was the ending I do not care about how it eneded just felt a little bit rushed to me
I genuinely loved this story. Not gonna lie. I shed more than a few tears at the end.
best revenge book I have ever read it's one of the first books that made me cry as well so I rate it 10/5 stars
I just finished this and its now one of my favorites.At first i was a bit hesitant because the racist thing but when i read it i think it happend only one time or so and it even brought tears in my eyes few times because the Mc is sacrificing himself many times,makes others hate him and pretends to be a dog to the celestial dragons for decades just so they dont get suspicious and become fleet admiral so he has more power and can gain more allies and plan things better so he has so much willpower to do that and thats why they didnt suspect him.I really recommend you read this fic and the other of the author both are really enjoyable.
Revelar spoiler One of the best fanfics I have ever read.It made me very towards the end but no matter what it was awesome.I plan to use this as an inspiration for my own novels. Thank U.
This is one of the best one piece fanfic I have read, so wholesome. I would recommend everyone to try it out. It will be really difficult to find a good one piece ff after this.I would really appreciate it If anyone can recommend me any fanfic as good as this for One piece, Naruto, Bleach, Harry Potter or GOT.
The only thing I can say, want to say, and will say is that this is a big banger.
One of the best OP fanfics I have ever read and I have read dozens! A reality check for the crazy bloody world of one piece where friendship and laughter cannot overcome everything, except if Galan does his magic and makes this world a place where normal citizens can believe in happy endings! Thanks for your hard work and amazing story Mr. Author! (btw it is mindblowing how you can end a OP fanfic in under 200chaps without it being just some summery of the Original)
This story is pretty dark but it was so worth it..................... ........................... ...................... .................. .............. ........... .......
Wow just wow... The story has bin a real experiance i felt like i was galan while reading. I felt like the ending was a bit rushed due to how the author did not make the fight scene or anything.
This is a piece of art I'm liking it more than the real one piece man it's amazing it's just i wanted him to at least have inner peace of mind i was really sad reading it and it's very realistic i love it and thank you author for this masterpiece ❤️❤️❤️💕💕😔💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥🔥😊
Very good i like ,keep goingo keep goingo !!Very good i like ,keep goingo keep goingo !! Very good i like ,keep goingo keep goingo !! Very good i like ,keep goingo keep goingo !! Very good i like ,keep goingo keep goingo !!
first I'm sorry if my English is bad I'm not a native speaker and English is not my second league as someone that read this novel till the end what I like about this novel is the mc not always killing someone for solving the problem the mc always uses his brain for solving his problem Mc event pretending to be a dog of the celestial dragon so he can destroy the world's government and my advice is if you don't know about politics and love to see mc solve his problem by killing then this novel is not for you
Good fanfic, mc focus on his goals and siding with marine till the end, though there's too much tragedy at least mc have happy ending. Don't know if it's MTL or not but for me if it readable then I'm good. Also I think author nerfed 5 elder intelligence too much and a bit rushed in latest chapter and not explored enough mc prowess.
The story is really good. The start its kind of lacking but it turns really good in the middle. although in my opinion it decays in quality a little bit in the end it's still an extremely good read.
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An amazing fanfiction World building and character interactions are on point and very well thought out. Backstories and past experiences are taken into account throughout the whole story. Loved how the characters evolved and how their personalities developed(from MC existence) without straying from their cannon counterparts, like Whitebeard. I loved the fact that even if there is ''character development'' it doesn't feel too forced and doesn't change the characters at they're base (talking about Galan). Also loved that the pacing isn't dragged out to the point where the story becomes filled with things like plot holes, training arcs, too much redundancy and others. There is only one moment that left me confused and that is when he went on a transphobic tangent for a whole paragraph?? Doesn't take away from the great story but still unnecessary.
Ok so I just finished reading this novel till the end. if your looking for a short answer of wether or not this is worth the read then yes. Long answer. Characters have depth to them even if that character fades into the background, during their short screen time you are shown different little quirks of theirs. World building is good, author did a good job with creating a picture of what the Mc was doing throughout the seas (won't spoil what he was doing). MC had very real 'emotions' and his mental state was completely messed up as it should be considering what happened early on. This helped made the readers or at least myself justify MC's cruel decisions at times. So if you like a very dark antihero who has a strong passion for his type of justice, then this is definitely for you. One more thing, there's reviews stating that MC or other characters are too homophobic for their liking. well all I have to say is grow up. if you think MC is homophobic, then your not wrong as he definitely is 100%, not surprised really considering what he experience, which makes him 100% justified to be homophobic. The other characters that's 'homophobic' that they mentioned? well let's just say that the author captured what sailors do best. Talk like sailors as they are part of the military being marines. Plus it's not even that bad as it slowly dies off at the halfway mark when canon starts as marines stop speaking like sailors like in the anime due to a certain reason to help improve their image. Anyway overall best one piece ff I've read, one of my favourite FF overall and gotta say loved that ending not the extra, just seemed fitting how the whole thing culminated and ended the way it did.
Hello there! So, this a good fanfic, it has a good development of characters. The author has managed to flesh out Galan as a credible character. Its no Harem (Always good) and the world is explored but too shallow for my taste (I know that One Piece has many things that arent explored but.... this is a fanfic). The end seems a little rushed and predictable, it has a good rush of emotions but it could be much more. Thanks author for the good time!
goooooooooood i love your fan fiction thanks and thanks thanks thanks ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
this is great if you are gonna do another one piece what if pls try coin it with a DF this time great strong and sad but good? ending
Revelar spoiler Overall a very excellent story would 100% recommend the only thing I didn’ like was the ending I do not care about how it eneded just felt a little bit rushed to me
really good, kind of fast paced but the mc is incredibly well fleshed out