Hollywood What If

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LastGod

MC seems like a sleezy grease ball. overweight untalented loser. Hes using other peoples talent to get ahead and most likely will screw up and ruin it at some point. the ONLY thing that i can say he has going for him is he is hard working. But the whole feel of the novel is sleazy like i need a shower. not fun and cool excited to see him become famous.

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Luicfer_2807

Keep it up. Nice Work man. Write more chapters so your novel can be found in the fan fiction section. I think it is going to be a great story.

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CodeSpectre

So far so good. Tbh it's too early to judge but it does have a lot of potential.

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Albanian_Gamer

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Cosmic_Witcher

So far so good, u could add more behind the scenes craftbuilding, like Hollywood king, btw u could change genre to movie for more views, Hope u continue to update this novel 😊

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William_Dante

It’s amazing story, but I see a problem almost every chapter. You have to make movies so can you please add the audience reaction so the story can be longer I don’t want this novel to finish too quickly

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ComradeAlexy

My first review. This story is really good. In it, the Protagonist really goes through the hard way to make a good film. This is also not about dependence on the system because it does not exist.The man just returned to the Past and works on films himself without anyone's help. One of my favorite works at the moment. If something is written by a translator because it is weak in English (

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Siuuu

This is one of the better Hollywood novels , but for me it has quite slow pacing.I hope that author will add extra things related to Hollywood except movie making like creating netflix or other Money making things.

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Albanian_Gamer

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Mr_Aryan_Pradhan

good novel man just keep writing it and give us more chapters

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KAAL23

When Are you going to Upload New Chapters Author.

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Tim_QQQ

the drama is very poorly written. especially the the judges and his ex-wife, the dialogue is so unrealistic it broke all immersion. this happens again and again, none of the antagonists act like real people and the romance is terrible.

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Bast_Zahir

A great story keep it up, my ony complaint is that it doesnt have more than 100 fhapters.

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Fito

well the novel is not bad, but it follows the same formula as other hollywood novels, although it is still very early where the story is going.

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SageRaOne_7

Usually i write a detailed review But this is good .................. there are many miniscule mistakes but the story is engaging So /// i recommend it.

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Mister_Robot

It's a great attempt by the author. It's hard to believe they started learning English grammar at 18. They should be proud of themself for coming so far. I envy and appreciate such dedicated and talented ppl. That being said, the plot of this story is quite good and I don't have any complaints regarding grammar. What's offputting to me is the Main character. He's such an unlikable and irritating person. He keeps repeating how scared he is of women after his ex wife cheated on him and tried to ruin his life, yet he doesn't stop simping. I don't like harem but it would make more sense if he had casual flings and one night stands instead of clinging on to Reese Witherspoon and reminding the readers how he's intimidated by a relationship with a woman. Make him gay instead or asexual but ffs stop repeating the same thing. I love how the mc swims against the tides to complete his films and make them successful, however the story always is a stalemate when he turns into a simp.

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Aiden_silvereye

Imagine a 60 year old man working his whole life on film Sat/ film making but act like he has seen props and film star first time. Even after seeing harsh reality of Hollywood he saw actor and actress his role model after he return in the past Like a youth who just enters the society

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Brian70707

dropped at 7 chapters Author could easily explain why he knows word for word everything from a script The author could easily have made it an alternate reality that removes most of the issues he/she doesn't people commented about this myself included and Author DOESN'T RESPOND TO ADDRESS THEM

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Azazel_0919

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