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BEST YU-GI-OH FANFIC EVRRRRRFFFFFFF. HEHEHEHEHEHEH PLEASE UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY THO
I love this story very much, the author was able to add a new character in the world without affecting the fun of the story, besides not repeating the original story in a way that makes the decision feel bored.
Revelar spoiler
It's the best Yugioh fic. There are a few oversights in some card effects, but I don't expect someone to write down an entire card game flawlessly, and the author has acknowledged them, so it isn't a constant repeat. Only other thing is the mc having the whole stuttering thing gets a little old but it isn't a huge problem since she speaks just fine during duels. Very good.
although I don't know much about yu-gi-oh, I enjoy the fic there's not really any problem that stick out so yeah it's a great fic
I read 70 chapters in 2 days. So I liked the story. MC reminds me of Komi-san and that makes the story more beautiful for me. I have a prejudice against female FMLs in FFs because some writers ignore the story and only write love stories obsessed with the handsome boy. People in the comments said that it is not like that and I agree after reading it. A nice story that mostly focuses on duels and continues its comedy between chapters. Misunderstandings also make the story enjoyable. I liked what the author did in the beginning, describing not only the names of the cards but also their descriptions and appearances. But I guess he stopped after the first volume. Luckily other readers upload photos of the cards. The part where the story broke for me will be spoilers, so if you are thinking of reading it, heed the warning. The Yu-Gi-Oh! Bonds Beyond Time volume completely ended my love of reading. Because I honestly hoped that Mc would go to see the future with Yusei, yes it doesn't fit Mc's character and arc order but... I was really sad that Yumi and Yuno couldn't spend more time together. Because with my love for Komi-san, I really liked the friendship between these two girls. I hope the author expands the story even more with Gx and 5D's. (Translated from Turkish to English.)
Great story so far @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@9
The duels are good, and the writing is pretty good too. However, what really bothers me is the MC's personality. The whole shy, withdrawn, and soft-spoken thing was alright in the beginning, but became annoying later on. But what REALLY bothers me, is that the MC is helpless. She'll go through a duel with a powerful enemy and come out on top only to cower and think things like: "Please don't hurt me...are they going to hurt me?" It's frustrating and makes me lose all respect I have for them. And it happens pretty often.
Hello, I am Duck's duel composer and beta reader. I hope u guys enjoying Duck's fic. I promise I will try my best to craft the most enjoyable duels as long as Duck is still believing in me (yes this is shameless review)
its niceㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
[Review Update] Writing Quality 4/5: Simply Outstanding and Simple to read! Rarely any mistakes toward grammar and wording! But those don't interfere at all! Stability of Updates 5/5: I will leave this one here. Story Development 5/5: I think you would want to read this. Character Design 5/5: I have no problems with the character designs! All of the original characters are depicted accurately and on-point in their dialogue! The main character is also v e r y lovable, I love the concept!!!! World Background: Classic Yu-Gi-Oh setting if you are familiar with the series! I expect additional areas the author might provide!
Just casually throwing my power stones here. Yep, nothing to see here, except a good fanfic.
Absolutely amazing work. I binge read this the entire night and most of the day and so can say that I want MORE! More Yuna and Kaiba cute moments, more duels, more. Amazing work.
Somehow I knew Mai would end up joining the Doma organization. Even if she didn't get the Shadow Realm treatment from Marik since she was eliminated before she could even participate in the Battle City finals I would think such a result would leave her bitter couple with being overshadowed by Yugi, Joey, Kaiba and now Yuna in the eyes of others could possibly result in her going to Doma.
This is being written at the time Pegasus is dueling Yuna, but so far, I like the story, but I don't really think I can really truly enjoy it. I like the fact that the the MC is a pretty introverted person compared to fics where the MC is very out there and charismatic, but I'm not really into the bit of how she has a passive expression and only speaks 1-3 words at a time like she's Yugioh Komi-san (which may just be the inspiration, idk) but when she's alone, she can rant aloud to the duel system and such. It's just that I'm sure even shy people can speak more than a handful of works at a time, which she is able to apparently do with ease during a duel, but it's a like a switch once she's done, so it's just really weird compared to her just being naturally timid but able to hold a conversation. And of course, bringing a string of cards from essentially the future eras of Yugioh into DM. While I get the rationale behind in, if you were gonna do that, you may as well have started at Battle City or even GX. All in all I like the story for what it is, but I don't really think I can fully enjoy it though, but I still wish the author the best in writing it all the same.
if yuna gets the dark magician girl, yugi will be jealous and kaiba maybe too if she gets it and she will also be able to fuse the dark magician girl with a dragon to become the dark magician girl a dragon knight she would have a card that yugi Since she also has the blue-eyed white dragon like Kaiba, it would be an interesting deck combination, the only thing left now is that she gets a super strong dragon, like Borreload Savage Dragon, for example.
happy New Year Dude as always great work I'm just waiting for Kaiba's relationship to develop I bet it's going to be amazing The story is already a favorite, I'll read it every time a new chapter comes out
This character development and the romance growing so cute Yuna just realized Kaiba's love and Kaiba himself realized it too now all that's missing is that beautiful and cute phrase ``I love you'' coming out of both of their lips I can't wait to see the Yugi Joey and Tea's reaction when they kiss
the true best fanfic of yu gi oh i read true amazing you really need to go and finish this excelente history please dont abandon yuna and kaiba are really a cute and kawaii couple (sorry my english are horrible)
Usually am not a fan of reading about female protagonists, but this one was a pleasant surprise. Really enjoying it, looking forward to more.
is good .................................................................................................................................................
I recently read this nice and good yugioh novel. The characters aren't overpowered but just a bit stronger than the main characters of the og series. The battles are not too fast like FTK there are tension in duel that makes you feek that the MC is losing. The pacing keeps you hooked, and the relationship between Kaiba and the main character is heartwarming that makes you say just kiss already. It's a fantastic read for anyone who loves a well-balanced, and exciting yugioh story. Can't wait for more!
I respect the ambition here since I think a yu gi oh fanfic would be difficult to write because of the sheer amount of description in duels and different card affects... Believe me you could become a master reader just by reading yu gi oh card affects alone.
[Writing quality] - 4/5: Some mistakes but it doesn't interfere often. Stability of updates] - 5/5: I honestly don't care of this, as long as the story is set. [Story Development] - Pretty generic honestly, but it's honestly fun to read despite it's simplicity and the games are pretty much readable and not overcomplicated. [Character design] - 5/5: I'll leave this alone, because the character is an accurate depiction of most of us who suffer from fear of social interaction. The character would also become a force to be reckoned with despite her social skills. [World Background] - 5/5: Classic Yu-Gi-Oh setting.
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I really like what you have done with this novel, it’s funny and any fan of Yugioh understands it, As a fellow who writes Yugioh Fan-Fic, Mine being (Yu-Gi-Oh: Fate Of Time) I really enjoy every chapter and understand each and every decision, Keep it up 👍
Good female OC, good well paced story, enjoyable relationships between OG cast and Theres original plot... well im hooked. Highly recomend this to asnyone who has good mmeories of OG yugioh series or just anyone in gereral, you dont have to be a yugioh expert to enjoy this lovely bit of story.
Author's shameless review: Dang I'm already on my third novel... I always enjoyed yugioh even when I was just a child. It was not until recently that I finally return to it and what can I say, it was a blast. So I might as well try to create a decent enough story am I right? Anyway, I hope you have a fun time reading!
BEST YU-GI-OH FANFIC EVRRRRRFFFFFFF. HEHEHEHEHEHEH PLEASE UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY THO
I love this story very much, the author was able to add a new character in the world without affecting the fun of the story, besides not repeating the original story in a way that makes the decision feel bored.
Revelar spoiler It's the best Yugioh fic. There are a few oversights in some card effects, but I don't expect someone to write down an entire card game flawlessly, and the author has acknowledged them, so it isn't a constant repeat. Only other thing is the mc having the whole stuttering thing gets a little old but it isn't a huge problem since she speaks just fine during duels. Very good.
although I don't know much about yu-gi-oh, I enjoy the fic there's not really any problem that stick out so yeah it's a great fic
I read 70 chapters in 2 days. So I liked the story. MC reminds me of Komi-san and that makes the story more beautiful for me. I have a prejudice against female FMLs in FFs because some writers ignore the story and only write love stories obsessed with the handsome boy. People in the comments said that it is not like that and I agree after reading it. A nice story that mostly focuses on duels and continues its comedy between chapters. Misunderstandings also make the story enjoyable. I liked what the author did in the beginning, describing not only the names of the cards but also their descriptions and appearances. But I guess he stopped after the first volume. Luckily other readers upload photos of the cards. The part where the story broke for me will be spoilers, so if you are thinking of reading it, heed the warning. The Yu-Gi-Oh! Bonds Beyond Time volume completely ended my love of reading. Because I honestly hoped that Mc would go to see the future with Yusei, yes it doesn't fit Mc's character and arc order but... I was really sad that Yumi and Yuno couldn't spend more time together. Because with my love for Komi-san, I really liked the friendship between these two girls. I hope the author expands the story even more with Gx and 5D's. (Translated from Turkish to English.)
Great story so far @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@9
The duels are good, and the writing is pretty good too. However, what really bothers me is the MC's personality. The whole shy, withdrawn, and soft-spoken thing was alright in the beginning, but became annoying later on. But what REALLY bothers me, is that the MC is helpless. She'll go through a duel with a powerful enemy and come out on top only to cower and think things like: "Please don't hurt me...are they going to hurt me?" It's frustrating and makes me lose all respect I have for them. And it happens pretty often.
Hello, I am Duck's duel composer and beta reader. I hope u guys enjoying Duck's fic. I promise I will try my best to craft the most enjoyable duels as long as Duck is still believing in me (yes this is shameless review)
its niceㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
[Review Update] Writing Quality 4/5: Simply Outstanding and Simple to read! Rarely any mistakes toward grammar and wording! But those don't interfere at all! Stability of Updates 5/5: I will leave this one here. Story Development 5/5: I think you would want to read this. Character Design 5/5: I have no problems with the character designs! All of the original characters are depicted accurately and on-point in their dialogue! The main character is also v e r y lovable, I love the concept!!!! World Background: Classic Yu-Gi-Oh setting if you are familiar with the series! I expect additional areas the author might provide!
Just casually throwing my power stones here. Yep, nothing to see here, except a good fanfic.
Absolutely amazing work. I binge read this the entire night and most of the day and so can say that I want MORE! More Yuna and Kaiba cute moments, more duels, more. Amazing work.
Somehow I knew Mai would end up joining the Doma organization. Even if she didn't get the Shadow Realm treatment from Marik since she was eliminated before she could even participate in the Battle City finals I would think such a result would leave her bitter couple with being overshadowed by Yugi, Joey, Kaiba and now Yuna in the eyes of others could possibly result in her going to Doma.
This is being written at the time Pegasus is dueling Yuna, but so far, I like the story, but I don't really think I can really truly enjoy it. I like the fact that the the MC is a pretty introverted person compared to fics where the MC is very out there and charismatic, but I'm not really into the bit of how she has a passive expression and only speaks 1-3 words at a time like she's Yugioh Komi-san (which may just be the inspiration, idk) but when she's alone, she can rant aloud to the duel system and such. It's just that I'm sure even shy people can speak more than a handful of works at a time, which she is able to apparently do with ease during a duel, but it's a like a switch once she's done, so it's just really weird compared to her just being naturally timid but able to hold a conversation. And of course, bringing a string of cards from essentially the future eras of Yugioh into DM. While I get the rationale behind in, if you were gonna do that, you may as well have started at Battle City or even GX. All in all I like the story for what it is, but I don't really think I can fully enjoy it though, but I still wish the author the best in writing it all the same.
if yuna gets the dark magician girl, yugi will be jealous and kaiba maybe too if she gets it and she will also be able to fuse the dark magician girl with a dragon to become the dark magician girl a dragon knight she would have a card that yugi Since she also has the blue-eyed white dragon like Kaiba, it would be an interesting deck combination, the only thing left now is that she gets a super strong dragon, like Borreload Savage Dragon, for example.
happy New Year Dude as always great work I'm just waiting for Kaiba's relationship to develop I bet it's going to be amazing The story is already a favorite, I'll read it every time a new chapter comes out
This character development and the romance growing so cute Yuna just realized Kaiba's love and Kaiba himself realized it too now all that's missing is that beautiful and cute phrase ``I love you'' coming out of both of their lips I can't wait to see the Yugi Joey and Tea's reaction when they kiss
the true best fanfic of yu gi oh i read true amazing you really need to go and finish this excelente history please dont abandon yuna and kaiba are really a cute and kawaii couple (sorry my english are horrible)
Usually am not a fan of reading about female protagonists, but this one was a pleasant surprise. Really enjoying it, looking forward to more.
is good .................................................................................................................................................
I recently read this nice and good yugioh novel. The characters aren't overpowered but just a bit stronger than the main characters of the og series. The battles are not too fast like FTK there are tension in duel that makes you feek that the MC is losing. The pacing keeps you hooked, and the relationship between Kaiba and the main character is heartwarming that makes you say just kiss already. It's a fantastic read for anyone who loves a well-balanced, and exciting yugioh story. Can't wait for more!
I respect the ambition here since I think a yu gi oh fanfic would be difficult to write because of the sheer amount of description in duels and different card affects... Believe me you could become a master reader just by reading yu gi oh card affects alone.
[Writing quality] - 4/5: Some mistakes but it doesn't interfere often. Stability of updates] - 5/5: I honestly don't care of this, as long as the story is set. [Story Development] - Pretty generic honestly, but it's honestly fun to read despite it's simplicity and the games are pretty much readable and not overcomplicated. [Character design] - 5/5: I'll leave this alone, because the character is an accurate depiction of most of us who suffer from fear of social interaction. The character would also become a force to be reckoned with despite her social skills. [World Background] - 5/5: Classic Yu-Gi-Oh setting.
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I really like what you have done with this novel, it’s funny and any fan of Yugioh understands it, As a fellow who writes Yugioh Fan-Fic, Mine being (Yu-Gi-Oh: Fate Of Time) I really enjoy every chapter and understand each and every decision, Keep it up 👍
Good female OC, good well paced story, enjoyable relationships between OG cast and Theres original plot... well im hooked. Highly recomend this to asnyone who has good mmeories of OG yugioh series or just anyone in gereral, you dont have to be a yugioh expert to enjoy this lovely bit of story.
Author's shameless review: Dang I'm already on my third novel... I always enjoyed yugioh even when I was just a child. It was not until recently that I finally return to it and what can I say, it was a blast. So I might as well try to create a decent enough story am I right? Anyway, I hope you have a fun time reading!