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Drama!!! The writer does a really good job of capturing the struggles and desires of a young woman. You can't help but turn those pages as we follow the FL's journey to find a suitable donor for her child. What happens when your desires overtake your common sense? I feel like the FL is in for a world of pain. There are a lot grammar mistakes that can easily be fixed with an editor but this story has a lot potential.
I love the way the pacing, and overall general development was made. Though, the start was a bit disturbing with the sperm robbery.. But aside from that, I love the way you write and how the story progressed!
Wasn't expecting much when I realized that it's drama and all, I'm not really into drama. HOWEVER, I take it back XD. You managed to keep it 'kinda' balanced even though it's basically a romance accompanied with a dark side is impressive. And for Liezel to feel pleasure even though she's asexual, you've got me there. I was taken aback, literally! Keep it up, I enjoyed the story so far!
A beautifully written romance- drama. I love how the dialogue defines the characters and their conflict. I hope that the author continues this intriguing story! It has a lot of potentials!
This is a great novel about a woman desiring to have a child without the involvement of a male relationship. We get right into the scene where she asks her friend's help and the story smoothly moves along. The first chapter was kind of hard to understand since I didn't know the character's motivations and the male character seemed to have a serious fluctuating mood. Still, this was a good read and I'm waiting for more.
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Drama from the beginning, this is perfect fans who love this sort of dark edgy and conflicting sorta romance. I thought it was well written and it captivates me from the start. This author has a lot to show for such few chapters. Keep up the good work!
Your synopsis is eye-catching. I just love the way the father of the child stood his ground. But it was quite unfair why Liezel took his sperm without notice. Awesome book
Although I'm not particularly fond of romance novels, this one managed to captivate my interest. I was pleasantly surprised by the way the story unfolded and the portrayal of the protagonist. It's safe to say that this novel goes beyond the typical romance genre and delves into various themes that are handled with skill. One thing that stood out to me was how the novel challenges the morality of the characters' actions without making excuses for them. This aspect of the novel was particularly thought-provoking. Overall, the story was well-crafted, and I am eager to read more chapters since there are currently only a few available.
I like romance!. Everyone has their own different personality and their motivations. This was overall a well written story. I like how the dialogue too it was not awkward with the structure by structure. Good job author
This novel has an intriguing beginning with a tense encounter between two former lovers, Liezel and Light, which takes a disturbing turn when Liezel confesses to stealing Light's sperm to conceive their child. As the power dynamic shifts between them, the story explores themes such as trust, control, and obsession. We see Liezel, an asexual woman, seek the help of her friend Shaina to find a suitable man to father her child. The story questions the social constructs of heteronormative relationships and the pressure to conform to societal norms, as well as the search for meaning and connection in an increasingly disconnected world. The fact that Liezel, who identifies as asexual, experiences pleasure for the first time is also a significant aspect of the story. When she tells her doctor friend that she wants to undergo artificial insemination to conceive her child, she shocks her friend by revealing that she stole the sperm of a man from a bar without his knowledge or consent. The narrative explores Liezel's desperation to have a child, but also raises questions about the morality of her actions. In summary, the novel is an intriguing exploration of themes such as power, trust, obsession, sexual identity, and social norms, through a story that may challenge some readers due to its explicit content. The author demonstrates skill in addressing these complex themes in a subtle and captivating manner, making the story engaging and thought-provoking.
This novella is awesome with amazing characters plus it's way beyond my imagination of romance the author sure is taking romance novels to the next level.Keep it up cuz I want more.
Love the story, quality characters, though you are to question a lot of the MC's decisions morally but it makes me like the story more, having complex characters. Awesome story overall.
The story is quite nice. I love it. This romance story is differe from what I normally read. I love the characters.
This novel presents a unique take on love and relationships with its strong, independent protagonist who defies the norms of romance. The combination of her journey through parenthood and the supernatural elements introduced by the devilish love interest adds a layer of intrigue to the story. It would be interesting to see how the protagonist's beliefs and perspectives on love evolve as she navigates the challenges that come with her unconventional family
I can't help but praise the authenticity of your selected theme... though it is but questionable... I won't mind your ideas. The writing quality is not bad but there are possible improvements. I'd suggest adding more actions in between dialog lines, to make it all more dynamic. Other than that, the only thing that didn't resonate at all with me was the character introduction... or rather its absence. I found it quite hard to follow the dialogue not knowing a thing about the characters, though the relationship between them was quite clear.
The plot looks very interesting. I like how the story's going. The character design is pretty good too. Keep up the good work and keep updating.
This is a different type of story than I usually read but I liked it nonetheless. The characters all have distinct personalities and the dialogues are interesting making you want to know what comes next. Good job author.
This book is a captivating and thought-provoking story that defies traditional romance novels. The protagonist's independent spirit and resolute beliefs make her a refreshing character, and the plot is filled with unexpected twists and turns that keep the reader engaged. The author's writing style is both elegant and captivating, making it hard to put down the book. The tale of an unconventional family and an unlikely love story is truly inspiring, and I would highly recommend this book to anyone who wants to read something unique and meaningful. Well done to the author for creating such a fascinating and heart-warming story.
I really like your story, character development, and plot. Will you please update it now, author? Please 🙏
The story line is intriguing, and the characters development is well arranged I love this book so much.
I really enjoyed reading the first and second chapters of your story! The characters and plot are intriguing, and I'm excited to see where the story goes next. Keep up the great work, author, and please update soon! I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next.
Quite impressive book. Though there are not much written yet, it has great potentials. the writing is good and simply. World building is great. Well done author, keep up the great work.
Drama!!! The writer does a really good job of capturing the struggles and desires of a young woman. You can't help but turn those pages as we follow the FL's journey to find a suitable donor for her child. What happens when your desires overtake your common sense? I feel like the FL is in for a world of pain. There are a lot grammar mistakes that can easily be fixed with an editor but this story has a lot potential.
I love the way the pacing, and overall general development was made. Though, the start was a bit disturbing with the sperm robbery.. But aside from that, I love the way you write and how the story progressed!
Wasn't expecting much when I realized that it's drama and all, I'm not really into drama. HOWEVER, I take it back XD. You managed to keep it 'kinda' balanced even though it's basically a romance accompanied with a dark side is impressive. And for Liezel to feel pleasure even though she's asexual, you've got me there. I was taken aback, literally! Keep it up, I enjoyed the story so far!
A beautifully written romance- drama. I love how the dialogue defines the characters and their conflict. I hope that the author continues this intriguing story! It has a lot of potentials!
This is a great novel about a woman desiring to have a child without the involvement of a male relationship. We get right into the scene where she asks her friend's help and the story smoothly moves along. The first chapter was kind of hard to understand since I didn't know the character's motivations and the male character seemed to have a serious fluctuating mood. Still, this was a good read and I'm waiting for more.
Revelar spoiler Drama from the beginning, this is perfect fans who love this sort of dark edgy and conflicting sorta romance. I thought it was well written and it captivates me from the start. This author has a lot to show for such few chapters. Keep up the good work!
Your synopsis is eye-catching. I just love the way the father of the child stood his ground. But it was quite unfair why Liezel took his sperm without notice. Awesome book
Although I'm not particularly fond of romance novels, this one managed to captivate my interest. I was pleasantly surprised by the way the story unfolded and the portrayal of the protagonist. It's safe to say that this novel goes beyond the typical romance genre and delves into various themes that are handled with skill. One thing that stood out to me was how the novel challenges the morality of the characters' actions without making excuses for them. This aspect of the novel was particularly thought-provoking. Overall, the story was well-crafted, and I am eager to read more chapters since there are currently only a few available.
I like romance!. Everyone has their own different personality and their motivations. This was overall a well written story. I like how the dialogue too it was not awkward with the structure by structure. Good job author
This novel has an intriguing beginning with a tense encounter between two former lovers, Liezel and Light, which takes a disturbing turn when Liezel confesses to stealing Light's sperm to conceive their child. As the power dynamic shifts between them, the story explores themes such as trust, control, and obsession. We see Liezel, an asexual woman, seek the help of her friend Shaina to find a suitable man to father her child. The story questions the social constructs of heteronormative relationships and the pressure to conform to societal norms, as well as the search for meaning and connection in an increasingly disconnected world. The fact that Liezel, who identifies as asexual, experiences pleasure for the first time is also a significant aspect of the story. When she tells her doctor friend that she wants to undergo artificial insemination to conceive her child, she shocks her friend by revealing that she stole the sperm of a man from a bar without his knowledge or consent. The narrative explores Liezel's desperation to have a child, but also raises questions about the morality of her actions. In summary, the novel is an intriguing exploration of themes such as power, trust, obsession, sexual identity, and social norms, through a story that may challenge some readers due to its explicit content. The author demonstrates skill in addressing these complex themes in a subtle and captivating manner, making the story engaging and thought-provoking.
This novella is awesome with amazing characters plus it's way beyond my imagination of romance the author sure is taking romance novels to the next level.Keep it up cuz I want more.
Love the story, quality characters, though you are to question a lot of the MC's decisions morally but it makes me like the story more, having complex characters. Awesome story overall.
The story is quite nice. I love it. This romance story is differe from what I normally read. I love the characters.
This novel presents a unique take on love and relationships with its strong, independent protagonist who defies the norms of romance. The combination of her journey through parenthood and the supernatural elements introduced by the devilish love interest adds a layer of intrigue to the story. It would be interesting to see how the protagonist's beliefs and perspectives on love evolve as she navigates the challenges that come with her unconventional family
I can't help but praise the authenticity of your selected theme... though it is but questionable... I won't mind your ideas. The writing quality is not bad but there are possible improvements. I'd suggest adding more actions in between dialog lines, to make it all more dynamic. Other than that, the only thing that didn't resonate at all with me was the character introduction... or rather its absence. I found it quite hard to follow the dialogue not knowing a thing about the characters, though the relationship between them was quite clear.
The plot looks very interesting. I like how the story's going. The character design is pretty good too. Keep up the good work and keep updating.
This is a different type of story than I usually read but I liked it nonetheless. The characters all have distinct personalities and the dialogues are interesting making you want to know what comes next. Good job author.
This book is a captivating and thought-provoking story that defies traditional romance novels. The protagonist's independent spirit and resolute beliefs make her a refreshing character, and the plot is filled with unexpected twists and turns that keep the reader engaged. The author's writing style is both elegant and captivating, making it hard to put down the book. The tale of an unconventional family and an unlikely love story is truly inspiring, and I would highly recommend this book to anyone who wants to read something unique and meaningful. Well done to the author for creating such a fascinating and heart-warming story.
I really like your story, character development, and plot. Will you please update it now, author? Please 🙏
The story line is intriguing, and the characters development is well arranged I love this book so much.
I really enjoyed reading the first and second chapters of your story! The characters and plot are intriguing, and I'm excited to see where the story goes next. Keep up the great work, author, and please update soon! I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next.
Quite impressive book. Though there are not much written yet, it has great potentials. the writing is good and simply. World building is great. Well done author, keep up the great work.