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decent story man could use some sprucing up but generally you did pretty good for your first story.
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Beautifully done. The personalities of God and the archangels are pretty much perfect. I can see why they made the choices they did but im pretty sure michael wouldnt harm the oracle because the other gods can see the future too but not like apollo because then he would need to harm all the gods. Barely any grammar mistakes. Although short quality is up there with the s tier novels.
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decent story man could use some sprucing up but generally you did pretty good for your first story.
Beautifully done. The personalities of God and the archangels are pretty much perfect. I can see why they made the choices they did but im pretty sure michael wouldnt harm the oracle because the other gods can see the future too but not like apollo because then he would need to harm all the gods. Barely any grammar mistakes. Although short quality is up there with the s tier novels.