Reviews of The Mountain of the Alpha King by Starparticle - Webnovel

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TheLastRemnants

LISTEN, give me a few seconds of your time and you won’t regret it. This author's writing is phenomenal. She beautifully paints images with her words where it feels like it’s an actual scene unfolding in front of you. The characters feel real and deep, like you have a connection with them from the moment you open chapter one. Her worldbuilding is a masterpiece. When you realize the level of depth she puts into scenery, describing things that don't exist in our world, but feels utterly and completely real by her words alone. She has a passion for writing. You can feel the creativity between each word. It feels like a story that had to be told. You’re in for plot twists. An emotional rollercoaster with no way off. Fasten your seatbelts, you’re in for a story of your lifetime. This authors, hands down deserves more than five stars. She deserves about a hundred. Please support her for taking her time to give actual good quality stories on WN!

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TheSavageKing7525

I like how the story is written, your use of words is unique and fun! I look forward to seeing how the story progresses! I can tell there’s a ton of background lore in it!

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Zyreick
LV 12 Badge

The world in this novel has a stunning amount of depth, I highly recommend giving it a check if you like romance or suspense/drama novels! At first I thought that it was heavily influenced by a fate concept or whatever, but after reading it for a while, it honestly feels more like when you are attracted to someone you don't want to be attracted to so you struggle internally and get conflicted. Which is something I think we can all sympathize with feeling. Highly underrated novel, great work!

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Midna06

I honestly aren't really interested in these types of stories they tend to be bad and cringy but I decided to give them a second chance and ran into this one and I'm so glad I gave a second chance. I love it so much.

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Starparticle

Shameful/less review here: I write daily, and I listen to feedback. I'm super interactive, and I enjoy connecting with others. I have reasons for each small detail, and lots of my plots have twists or pay-offs. This is absolutely one of them. I have carefully plotted out the story, and made sure it doesn't drag on forever. I also have other stories to weave into this one that will tell an entire picture through different characters in different places. This is only one of many many many stories in a series I've plotted out for different genres. This one just happens to focus on love, war, and how one can grow through tragedy instead of crumbling beneath its pressure. Please just read a few chapters, and you'll see what I mean. I have great characters - and I am sure there is one you'll grab onto. If not, you'll have the sincere thanks of a total stranger who really appreciated the fact you took the time out to just give me a chance! I'm small, and tiny - but I am filled with big surprises -- like a pork bun, or a deliciously crafted dumpling that hides so much flavor, you'll be glad you at least tried it!

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Feather_K

Hi, your story is soooooo amazing. Do you have a private social media account? I'd like to follow you to keep up with your writing developments.

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MayaKeiran

5 chapters in. And I'm already loving this book. I actually wanted to give a review after reading 30+ chapters, but I can't wait to share with you all how good this book is. So here I am. Author's writing style is too good and the world building is amazing. I like how the author describes even the smallest details in a beautiful way, that makes you imagine the whole scenarios flawlessly. Unlike some books that I've read in this genre, this one has a unique premise. And the character building is perfect. I love the FL. Would I recommend this book? A huge YES. If you want a good novel in werewolf genre with romance, mystery and thriller, then this is for you. Go ahead and add it to your library. This is worth a read.

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GoneSoSoon

The author uses words I could never have imagined thinking of within a situation. It's a wonder to read through, and the flow of sentences doesn't hurt my head in the slightest. It's a classic, overplayed genre that is immediately countered by absolutely insane world development. In such a way, the focus immediately deters away from the genre itself and fills your head with its imagery in a beauty way. It's truly a wonderous read, if you like reading that is. There is a lot of words.

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splashyspider

just started reading it and so far it looks incredible. the writer se very talented and good at what they do. keep it up

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Sin_Theta_San

I tried reading a female mc for the first time, and believe me, the author has done a great job writing this. The characters, the emotion, the scenery all factors that the author has written in here feels soo real that I just want to support Myranda on her love quest. Note: The FL is pure tsundere that you can't hate her no matter what!

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Zyreick
LV 12 Badge

You are a quite talented writer; it was a pleasure to read! I had a slightly difficult time getting into the book due to the "Destiny" aspect of it, as I am a firm believer no such thing exists, and everyone must make their own path. But other than that, it was a very well written story from what I had read. Keep up the good work!

1yr
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TheLastRemnants

LISTEN, give me a few seconds of your time and you won’t regret it. This author's writing is phenomenal. She beautifully paints images with her words where it feels like it’s an actual scene unfolding in front of you. The characters feel real and deep, like you have a connection with them from the moment you open chapter one. Her worldbuilding is a masterpiece. When you realize the level of depth she puts into scenery, describing things that don't exist in our world, but feels utterly and completely real by her words alone. She has a passion for writing. You can feel the creativity between each word. It feels like a story that had to be told. You’re in for plot twists. An emotional rollercoaster with no way off. Fasten your seatbelts, you’re in for a story of your lifetime. This authors, hands down deserves more than five stars. She deserves about a hundred. Please support her for taking her time to give actual good quality stories on WN!

1yr
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TheSavageKing7525

I like how the story is written, your use of words is unique and fun! I look forward to seeing how the story progresses! I can tell there’s a ton of background lore in it!

1yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Zyreick
LV 12 Badge

The world in this novel has a stunning amount of depth, I highly recommend giving it a check if you like romance or suspense/drama novels! At first I thought that it was heavily influenced by a fate concept or whatever, but after reading it for a while, it honestly feels more like when you are attracted to someone you don't want to be attracted to so you struggle internally and get conflicted. Which is something I think we can all sympathize with feeling. Highly underrated novel, great work!

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1yr
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Midna06

I honestly aren't really interested in these types of stories they tend to be bad and cringy but I decided to give them a second chance and ran into this one and I'm so glad I gave a second chance. I love it so much.

1yr
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Starparticle

Shameful/less review here: I write daily, and I listen to feedback. I'm super interactive, and I enjoy connecting with others. I have reasons for each small detail, and lots of my plots have twists or pay-offs. This is absolutely one of them. I have carefully plotted out the story, and made sure it doesn't drag on forever. I also have other stories to weave into this one that will tell an entire picture through different characters in different places. This is only one of many many many stories in a series I've plotted out for different genres. This one just happens to focus on love, war, and how one can grow through tragedy instead of crumbling beneath its pressure. Please just read a few chapters, and you'll see what I mean. I have great characters - and I am sure there is one you'll grab onto. If not, you'll have the sincere thanks of a total stranger who really appreciated the fact you took the time out to just give me a chance! I'm small, and tiny - but I am filled with big surprises -- like a pork bun, or a deliciously crafted dumpling that hides so much flavor, you'll be glad you at least tried it!

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Feather_K

Hi, your story is soooooo amazing. Do you have a private social media account? I'd like to follow you to keep up with your writing developments.

1yr
Ver 3 respuestas
MayaKeiran

5 chapters in. And I'm already loving this book. I actually wanted to give a review after reading 30+ chapters, but I can't wait to share with you all how good this book is. So here I am. Author's writing style is too good and the world building is amazing. I like how the author describes even the smallest details in a beautiful way, that makes you imagine the whole scenarios flawlessly. Unlike some books that I've read in this genre, this one has a unique premise. And the character building is perfect. I love the FL. Would I recommend this book? A huge YES. If you want a good novel in werewolf genre with romance, mystery and thriller, then this is for you. Go ahead and add it to your library. This is worth a read.

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1yr
Ver 1 respuestas
GoneSoSoon

The author uses words I could never have imagined thinking of within a situation. It's a wonder to read through, and the flow of sentences doesn't hurt my head in the slightest. It's a classic, overplayed genre that is immediately countered by absolutely insane world development. In such a way, the focus immediately deters away from the genre itself and fills your head with its imagery in a beauty way. It's truly a wonderous read, if you like reading that is. There is a lot of words.

1yr
Ver 1 respuestas
splashyspider

just started reading it and so far it looks incredible. the writer se very talented and good at what they do. keep it up

1yr
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Sin_Theta_San

I tried reading a female mc for the first time, and believe me, the author has done a great job writing this. The characters, the emotion, the scenery all factors that the author has written in here feels soo real that I just want to support Myranda on her love quest. Note: The FL is pure tsundere that you can't hate her no matter what!

1yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Zyreick
LV 12 Badge

You are a quite talented writer; it was a pleasure to read! I had a slightly difficult time getting into the book due to the "Destiny" aspect of it, as I am a firm believer no such thing exists, and everyone must make their own path. But other than that, it was a very well written story from what I had read. Keep up the good work!

1yr
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