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Great story so far, it's a good twist to "come back from the dead" not too far in the future at the same spot instead of in the past or in another world
Im currently at chapter 10 and before I continue I‘d like to ask something. Can anyone tell me what‘s going on with his GF and wrath? The connection etc. Thanks
I review this as I finished reading chapter 12. For me, it's a good novel but I'm dropping this cause I don't know about card games and it's confused me about the usage of cards. Like the mana usage. I think the author should explain more about this card game and its rules. Or maybe he did in the upcoming chapters after chapter 12. It's a nice story, author. Good luck with your work.
THIS BOOK SHOULD BE WAY MORE POPULAR THAN IT IS… the power system is super cool and well written it’s original while not being over the top. The world building is cool and so far I haven’t seen much drop off in quality. Very much recommend!
I don’t know if this was intentional but synopsis is very misleading. If you are expecting a story where the mc owns a card store and his power is to use the cards he made to affect reality, you are dearly mistaken. Apparently, the shop isn’t even his. In order to gain new cards, cards that HE made, he needs purchase them from the shop owner. It also seems like other people can enter and purchase these cards considering how accessible the shop is. The mc’s power of card actualization doesn’t even feel like his own power. It seems like something the keeper granted to him seeing as he has to not only go to the shop but stay in it to open cards and actualize them. To be honest I’m just disappointed on what I expected not being what I actually got. I’m not the only one who feels this way, so I think a good idea for the author is to change synopsis to make it clearer on what to expect from the story.
i didnt think it would be so good. the whole card idea did seem very good, but it turnes out to be an amazing story.
The concept of mechanic is pretty good, but the world background/ how things work for mages kinda doesnt make sense, in the novel mages are forced to get some kind of id
I like the story. the guy never died, as he came back ten years older, if he died and came back he would still be in his 20's instead of his 30's.
i admit i havent gotten very far in the novel, but the writting doesnt draw you in. it feels very flat. lots of he does this, he did that.
great book it has a lot of flavours from some good popular culture and the "harem" isn't dumb like in many other webnovels/animes
Maybe i am bad at english or something else, i am having very hard time understanding what is happening with cards and power. Its seems complicated too me and very poorly actualised. I think author could not put it into simple words which was on his mind.
Well, the idea is good and the implementation is not bad, reminiscent of the general world of Fate... That's all. The characters are typical kind and strong old men, the girl is an aristocrat of a magical family and a clichéd MC from China. Even if it's just a decency, it's still annoying when you anticipate what the MC is going to say.
So far, a good story indeed, good quality writing and English, good development and pacing. Only problem I can think of is to explain the world background a bit, it kinda just throws you in and I was confused about the country and I still don’t know the value of the money yet. If a unknown currency is introduced it should be explained how much of it can buy of something most people would know the value of.
Perfect cannot wait for more chapter hopefully you will continue and stop like everybody else. if you have a recommendation for similarly, please write to me they Name :😀
The idea is very interesting however I feel it was not executed the best it could have been. Still good just not the best. The English is also hard to read at times.
On an overall statement, I really enjoyed reading the current chapters and can't wait to see how the story progresses.
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This novel is awesome! I like the card mechanic, there is some influence and flavor from MtG, but it's still good. The writting is sublime, and apparently MC try to build toward to Artificer build, which is totally cool. Everyone and their mother nowadays using sword and sling some spell, not making cool magic stuff anymore.
Revelar spoiler Great story so far, it's a good twist to "come back from the dead" not too far in the future at the same spot instead of in the past or in another world
Im currently at chapter 10 and before I continue I‘d like to ask something. Can anyone tell me what‘s going on with his GF and wrath? The connection etc. Thanks
I review this as I finished reading chapter 12. For me, it's a good novel but I'm dropping this cause I don't know about card games and it's confused me about the usage of cards. Like the mana usage. I think the author should explain more about this card game and its rules. Or maybe he did in the upcoming chapters after chapter 12. It's a nice story, author. Good luck with your work.
THIS BOOK SHOULD BE WAY MORE POPULAR THAN IT IS… the power system is super cool and well written it’s original while not being over the top. The world building is cool and so far I haven’t seen much drop off in quality. Very much recommend!
I don’t know if this was intentional but synopsis is very misleading. If you are expecting a story where the mc owns a card store and his power is to use the cards he made to affect reality, you are dearly mistaken. Apparently, the shop isn’t even his. In order to gain new cards, cards that HE made, he needs purchase them from the shop owner. It also seems like other people can enter and purchase these cards considering how accessible the shop is. The mc’s power of card actualization doesn’t even feel like his own power. It seems like something the keeper granted to him seeing as he has to not only go to the shop but stay in it to open cards and actualize them. To be honest I’m just disappointed on what I expected not being what I actually got. I’m not the only one who feels this way, so I think a good idea for the author is to change synopsis to make it clearer on what to expect from the story.
i didnt think it would be so good. the whole card idea did seem very good, but it turnes out to be an amazing story.
The concept of mechanic is pretty good, but the world background/ how things work for mages kinda doesnt make sense, in the novel mages are forced to get some kind of id
I like the story. the guy never died, as he came back ten years older, if he died and came back he would still be in his 20's instead of his 30's.
i admit i havent gotten very far in the novel, but the writting doesnt draw you in. it feels very flat. lots of he does this, he did that.
great book it has a lot of flavours from some good popular culture and the "harem" isn't dumb like in many other webnovels/animes
Maybe i am bad at english or something else, i am having very hard time understanding what is happening with cards and power. Its seems complicated too me and very poorly actualised. I think author could not put it into simple words which was on his mind.
Well, the idea is good and the implementation is not bad, reminiscent of the general world of Fate... That's all. The characters are typical kind and strong old men, the girl is an aristocrat of a magical family and a clichéd MC from China. Even if it's just a decency, it's still annoying when you anticipate what the MC is going to say.
So far, a good story indeed, good quality writing and English, good development and pacing. Only problem I can think of is to explain the world background a bit, it kinda just throws you in and I was confused about the country and I still don’t know the value of the money yet. If a unknown currency is introduced it should be explained how much of it can buy of something most people would know the value of.
Perfect cannot wait for more chapter hopefully you will continue and stop like everybody else. if you have a recommendation for similarly, please write to me they Name :😀
The idea is very interesting however I feel it was not executed the best it could have been. Still good just not the best. The English is also hard to read at times.
On an overall statement, I really enjoyed reading the current chapters and can't wait to see how the story progresses.
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This novel is awesome! I like the card mechanic, there is some influence and flavor from MtG, but it's still good. The writting is sublime, and apparently MC try to build toward to Artificer build, which is totally cool. Everyone and their mother nowadays using sword and sling some spell, not making cool magic stuff anymore.
Revelar spoiler