23Reseñas
4.07
- Calidad de escritura
- Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
- Desarrollo de la Historia
- Diseño de Personajes
- Antecedentes del mundo
Comparte tus pensamientos con los demás
Escribe una reseña
every one is there in the evening today is the only one who can do that to you are same to u too my baby girl in the evening today is the only one who can do that to you are same to u too
the novel is good but it just too slow and the mc is kind of weak with is kind cheat what i mean is that the mc have and op cheat but is main strength is too weak can't even fight above realm
overall story is good and FL character is good but you should focus on FL character and you should tone down the explaining. its like you are explaining from your point of you but you are trying to 3rd p.o.v
I really like the novel but your update speed is horrendous that i start loosing interest so plz increase your update frequency
Not like other urban novels where the MC wastes his time on earth trying to get revenge on the family he has a grudge in the legal way and just goes on a quick killing spree which is nice. Other than the whole Disciple being typed as discipline there arent any typos which is nice
It is interesting to see the combination of two novel ideas( I'm at the stating chapters only). Don't know if there are more combinations of ideas from other novel later but it sure make this novel interesting.Writing quality is good too.
140 chapters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
The Exposition and writing are pretty alright. After that there is a sharp decline where the author blatantly pushes MC into classic situations. He coincidently gets made fun of so he can slap people's faces. He coincidently gets pushed into making a harem. You get the point, endless feel good Chinese webnovel clichés.
This author is freaking pathetic. He copied and pasted the starting story from "Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game". The author didn't even bother to change a single content apart from the names. What a disappointment.
The writing quality is above average for the platform with many in-depth descriptions and an expansive vocabulary to supplement this. The characters are believable with their own personalities (however this is mostly shown through their actions and inner thoughts which is my next point). Much of the book details actions and exposition. There is a sufficient amount of dialogue, however it's not overloaded with it as many readers may be used to. It's a good read so far, though I can't say any advice regarding cliches and whatnot because I'm not a cultivator novel enthusiast. Still, I'd urge you to give it a try. :)
While it may not be the most groundbreaking plot, it is still engaging and enjoyable to follow. Good Novel keep writing it author don't drop it
Mmm, Well the story is interesting, but I still think it needs some development in some areas. I will wait till it has more chapters.
After reading Chapter 30, I can conclude that the plot is not bad, Although there may be areas that could benefit from further development. Overall if you want to pass your time it's a great story for that.
A good novel so far, the grammar is not bad it's readable, and the update is daily so that is a plus I hope the author doesn't drop it like other authors.
Overall it's just another junkfood trash harem CN novel with the System. IMO the System feels out of place and shouldn't have been added in this novel but hey, it's only an opinion. Anyways I have to drop this because I'm quite tired of characters mocking the MC when the MC did nothing at all. Like why? What's the point? He didn't even start cultivating yet and they kept trashing him, are they all bunch of braindead? Do they have brainrot? We're they not raised by their mothers? Do they not have father figures? I'm sick reading this kind of characters. One look at this novel and I can tell that it's gonna be full of Faceslapping and arrogant Young Masters all over the place. And of course there's definitely gonna be a bunch of r*pist that will covet MC's Jade Beauty which of course the MC will save at the very last possible millisecond. This is what I feel after reading within 20 chapters. And I know there are people that will tell me to read more and give it more chance but this is the first impression I get reading this and for me it's important since it will decide whether I will invest time reading this or not. I basically read this kind of novel dozens and dozens of times already and I'm not quite keen to add another one. That's all, bye.
LitRPG and Cultivation tropes go to war in this stylish, action-packed tale of heroics influenced by eastern fantasy progression stories but still manages to make itself stand out and be its own thing. The writing is excellent, the characters don't feel flat -- with a very driven protagonist to boot -- and the world-building's interesting enough to keep you wanting to turn the page. I highly recommend this to my fellow readers, especially those looking for more cultivation!
The beginning of the novel was impressive, and I encourage the author to continue this excellent work. By the way, I have a question, will the protagonist's aunt and sisters also become part of his harem?
I enjoyed the storyline of the novel so far and find it promising, but it's difficult for me to provide a thorough evaluation at this point since there are only a few chapters available. Nonetheless, I encourage the author to continue with this work as I am enjoying it so far.
so the story has great talent, no doubt, with the way you keep writing and the daily update. in time, this book will come to be among the greatest of novels.
I admit that I Shamelessly gave my story a 5-star review. So what? I hope you guys enjoy reading this story as I will put in my utmost effort to make the novel pleasing to read so I hope whoever read this novel to not give up on it thanks 😊
every one is there in the evening today is the only one who can do that to you are same to u too my baby girl in the evening today is the only one who can do that to you are same to u too
the novel is good but it just too slow and the mc is kind of weak with is kind cheat what i mean is that the mc have and op cheat but is main strength is too weak can't even fight above realm
overall story is good and FL character is good but you should focus on FL character and you should tone down the explaining. its like you are explaining from your point of you but you are trying to 3rd p.o.v
I really like the novel but your update speed is horrendous that i start loosing interest so plz increase your update frequency
Not like other urban novels where the MC wastes his time on earth trying to get revenge on the family he has a grudge in the legal way and just goes on a quick killing spree which is nice. Other than the whole Disciple being typed as discipline there arent any typos which is nice
It is interesting to see the combination of two novel ideas( I'm at the stating chapters only). Don't know if there are more combinations of ideas from other novel later but it sure make this novel interesting.Writing quality is good too.
140 chapters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
The Exposition and writing are pretty alright. After that there is a sharp decline where the author blatantly pushes MC into classic situations. He coincidently gets made fun of so he can slap people's faces. He coincidently gets pushed into making a harem. You get the point, endless feel good Chinese webnovel clichés.
This author is freaking pathetic. He copied and pasted the starting story from "Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game". The author didn't even bother to change a single content apart from the names. What a disappointment.
The writing quality is above average for the platform with many in-depth descriptions and an expansive vocabulary to supplement this. The characters are believable with their own personalities (however this is mostly shown through their actions and inner thoughts which is my next point). Much of the book details actions and exposition. There is a sufficient amount of dialogue, however it's not overloaded with it as many readers may be used to. It's a good read so far, though I can't say any advice regarding cliches and whatnot because I'm not a cultivator novel enthusiast. Still, I'd urge you to give it a try. :)
While it may not be the most groundbreaking plot, it is still engaging and enjoyable to follow. Good Novel keep writing it author don't drop it
Mmm, Well the story is interesting, but I still think it needs some development in some areas. I will wait till it has more chapters.
After reading Chapter 30, I can conclude that the plot is not bad, Although there may be areas that could benefit from further development. Overall if you want to pass your time it's a great story for that.
A good novel so far, the grammar is not bad it's readable, and the update is daily so that is a plus I hope the author doesn't drop it like other authors.
Overall it's just another junkfood trash harem CN novel with the System. IMO the System feels out of place and shouldn't have been added in this novel but hey, it's only an opinion. Anyways I have to drop this because I'm quite tired of characters mocking the MC when the MC did nothing at all. Like why? What's the point? He didn't even start cultivating yet and they kept trashing him, are they all bunch of braindead? Do they have brainrot? We're they not raised by their mothers? Do they not have father figures? I'm sick reading this kind of characters. One look at this novel and I can tell that it's gonna be full of Faceslapping and arrogant Young Masters all over the place. And of course there's definitely gonna be a bunch of r*pist that will covet MC's Jade Beauty which of course the MC will save at the very last possible millisecond. This is what I feel after reading within 20 chapters. And I know there are people that will tell me to read more and give it more chance but this is the first impression I get reading this and for me it's important since it will decide whether I will invest time reading this or not. I basically read this kind of novel dozens and dozens of times already and I'm not quite keen to add another one. That's all, bye.
LitRPG and Cultivation tropes go to war in this stylish, action-packed tale of heroics influenced by eastern fantasy progression stories but still manages to make itself stand out and be its own thing. The writing is excellent, the characters don't feel flat -- with a very driven protagonist to boot -- and the world-building's interesting enough to keep you wanting to turn the page. I highly recommend this to my fellow readers, especially those looking for more cultivation!
The beginning of the novel was impressive, and I encourage the author to continue this excellent work. By the way, I have a question, will the protagonist's aunt and sisters also become part of his harem?
I enjoyed the storyline of the novel so far and find it promising, but it's difficult for me to provide a thorough evaluation at this point since there are only a few chapters available. Nonetheless, I encourage the author to continue with this work as I am enjoying it so far.
so the story has great talent, no doubt, with the way you keep writing and the daily update. in time, this book will come to be among the greatest of novels.
I admit that I Shamelessly gave my story a 5-star review. So what? I hope you guys enjoy reading this story as I will put in my utmost effort to make the novel pleasing to read so I hope whoever read this novel to not give up on it thanks 😊