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What an awesome read. The world-building is perfect. Love the narration and the characters dynamic. Keep up the good work, Author. I look forward to reading more chapters.
Love the world-building. Congratulations Author. Well done. You have done well to set the pace of the book well. Thank you for creating this masterpiece. Cheers.
The style of writing the synopsis made me not want to read it at all. The english is very bad. Please use an app to correct your writing, since i noticed multiple misspelled words like 'objectif' (objective) others. I feel like it's written in a rush, so until i see quality english i won't read.
The story starting was great as it narrates the parents who will get departed from their child, as soon the child grows, the vast adventure starts. The writing style was simple, easy to understand and flowing with paces was much of a trouble. The world building and character designing was also well designed. Great book author, keep it up,
i like the plot and characterstics of mc i will be waiting for next ch to read and
Nice book you got here, I love the first chapter and your male lead sounds handsome btw
I love the the writing style of the author, the last sentence of the synopsis got me hooked, I've never tried this genre but then I want to see how the story goes, kudos to the author👌👏👍
The truth, this is the great novel, but it's not my type I think. I was read till 3 or 4 chapter, however i don't like long narrative story (so sorry). Overall this is good story, but you need to correct your punctuation. And then, i have some advice. If you want to give long narratives for explain your world, I think it's more better if you put that on character dialogue, it will be more attract to read more and more. Sorry if I got mistakes in my review. Thank you and keep it up.
After reading the first four chapters, I found the novel interesting. However, to make the story more interesting for me and the readers to enjoy, you need to check on your spelling as well as the use of the punctuations. If these things aren't checked, readers won't enjoy it. But I really enjoyed it and I love the names of the clans. Keep it up. Don't give up.
When I see books like this, I smile broadly. The title alone got me interested and then I began reading and knew that it's a really good book. Highly recommended to any passer by, because its definitely worth reading .
Love the writing style, but you did misspell some words which can be fixed. The plot is amazeballs and I'll definitely be reading more ... can't wait for more !!!
In as much the story started with lots of narration it was still a good read, I like the structure and character personalities, but you should work on some misspelled words. I love the genre and I'm happy to recommend 💖💖💖💖
Hey, this is such an amazing novel. Since I started reading this novel , I haven't gotten enough yet.
I like the plot in general, the world building is also very good! I like the whole background story and the forbidden love 😍... Those are my faves !! You have some misspelled words and some redundancy here and there, but nothing that cannot be fixed! Keep up the hard work!
Awww. One of my favorite genres. should I be expecting steamy scenes soon?[img=recommend]
The idea is there and the grammar need some evolution. Also, the vocabulary needs to be fluent. The Author explains thing so well and the setting is all nice. We feel that the character' character trait i like ours when reading the novel
Revelar spoiler What an awesome read. The world-building is perfect. Love the narration and the characters dynamic. Keep up the good work, Author. I look forward to reading more chapters.
Love the world-building. Congratulations Author. Well done. You have done well to set the pace of the book well. Thank you for creating this masterpiece. Cheers.
The style of writing the synopsis made me not want to read it at all. The english is very bad. Please use an app to correct your writing, since i noticed multiple misspelled words like 'objectif' (objective) others. I feel like it's written in a rush, so until i see quality english i won't read.
The story starting was great as it narrates the parents who will get departed from their child, as soon the child grows, the vast adventure starts. The writing style was simple, easy to understand and flowing with paces was much of a trouble. The world building and character designing was also well designed. Great book author, keep it up,
i like the plot and characterstics of mc i will be waiting for next ch to read and
Nice book you got here, I love the first chapter and your male lead sounds handsome btw
I love the the writing style of the author, the last sentence of the synopsis got me hooked, I've never tried this genre but then I want to see how the story goes, kudos to the author👌👏👍
The truth, this is the great novel, but it's not my type I think. I was read till 3 or 4 chapter, however i don't like long narrative story (so sorry). Overall this is good story, but you need to correct your punctuation. And then, i have some advice. If you want to give long narratives for explain your world, I think it's more better if you put that on character dialogue, it will be more attract to read more and more. Sorry if I got mistakes in my review. Thank you and keep it up.
After reading the first four chapters, I found the novel interesting. However, to make the story more interesting for me and the readers to enjoy, you need to check on your spelling as well as the use of the punctuations. If these things aren't checked, readers won't enjoy it. But I really enjoyed it and I love the names of the clans. Keep it up. Don't give up.
When I see books like this, I smile broadly. The title alone got me interested and then I began reading and knew that it's a really good book. Highly recommended to any passer by, because its definitely worth reading .
Love the writing style, but you did misspell some words which can be fixed. The plot is amazeballs and I'll definitely be reading more ... can't wait for more !!!
In as much the story started with lots of narration it was still a good read, I like the structure and character personalities, but you should work on some misspelled words. I love the genre and I'm happy to recommend 💖💖💖💖
Hey, this is such an amazing novel. Since I started reading this novel , I haven't gotten enough yet.
I like the plot in general, the world building is also very good! I like the whole background story and the forbidden love 😍... Those are my faves !! You have some misspelled words and some redundancy here and there, but nothing that cannot be fixed! Keep up the hard work!
Awww. One of my favorite genres. should I be expecting steamy scenes soon?[img=recommend]
The idea is there and the grammar need some evolution. Also, the vocabulary needs to be fluent. The Author explains thing so well and the setting is all nice. We feel that the character' character trait i like ours when reading the novel
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The synopsis got me hooked. Chapter 1 is bliss. You're amazing, Marshy 😆