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another bad mtl... even if it wasnt for poor translation it whould be bad as its just wishfullfulment story with super op mc "hideing" his power and than flexing/face slapping
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the writing quality is good but i can't read this anymore, what's the point in him having a strength based system when he doesn't use it and just wants to be a "salted fish" the author should of just done a slice of life crack fic because that's all this is, MC probably surpassed Garp in strength yet it's never utilised because MC just wants to be a normal civilian and will never reveal more then 30-50% of his strength and only if it's an extreme circumstance, it wouldn't be so bad if it was funny but it's just stale generic humour and don't even get me started on the monologues(probably 60-70% of the chapters are the MC monologuing what to do to avoid showing his strength)
A guy who is stronger than Roger thinks that east blue Luffy can withstand 10% of his strength??? How stupid did you make this guy???
A refreshing shing new op fanfic :) it ’s worth reading if you’re tired of generics op fanfics.
One Piece gehört zur meinen Liebling's Serie daher habe ich ein Großteil der Serie und fast alle Mangas gelesen und auch jede Menge Fanfiction zu der Geschichte. Mein Fazit zu dieser Fanfiction ist dass sie nicht die beste auch nicht die schlechteste ist. Das Konzept dass sich der Protagonist verstecken soll, dass niemand seine wahre Stärke rausfindet um weitere Vorteile zu gewinnen ist recht interessant. Aber die Umsetzung ist nicht wirklich gelungen da der Charakter so überpowert ist dass er überhaupt nie seine volle Stärke einsetzen muss um gegen die Gegner zu kämpfen.( wie in One Punch man) und er braucht nicht wirklich die Belohnung vom System daher meine Meinung nach schon der stärkste in der One Piece World ist und einfach so leben könnte wie er will.
Revelar spoiler
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Thing start to getting more interesting. But if you could. Please put the mc into more action. Sure i know he a lazybones and all but. What the point of having all those power if you don't use it? Maybe let him display a little more power and a little more action. So in my opinion, so far so good. I'm enjoying this story by the way. So keep up the good work buddy.👍
just drop this novel and translate other arguably better chinese novels. I don't know which one is good but if you can mc have power and use it, be it for evil or good. If the mc is more like a spectator then better find one who plays God and gives power to people
This story is just going to be disappointing. You made him op yet you won't have him do anything as he hides his stength and just wants to live a normal life which makes me even question why he became a marine. Since he knows one piece and its events, why join the marines and grt involved in all sorts of conflicts. He could have just traveled to east blue and be done. This isn't even like with Saitama who did want to be a hero and became op. He became bored but their is still that desire to fight and save others still within him. Here, the mc is just strong and not want to involve himself in anything. Its just annoying to read him complain about things when he could have made a decision to not jpin the marines. I wouldn't even be surprised if this guy would let an island be destroyed and its people massacred if it would force him to show his strength. What a great character to read, watching him just let Alabasta suffer.
Pointless Novel. you are basically a spectator that wouldn't even safe a child from a 10. 000 Bounty Pirate because you can't Show you are as strong as an Emperor....wow
Just a st*pid typical Chinese fanfic like any other, the MC gained power without doing anything. I can feel the 'young master' smell from the title and synopsis. ......................... ......................... ........................
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another bad mtl... even if it wasnt for poor translation it whould be bad as its just wishfullfulment story with super op mc "hideing" his power and than flexing/face slapping
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the writing quality is good but i can't read this anymore, what's the point in him having a strength based system when he doesn't use it and just wants to be a "salted fish" the author should of just done a slice of life crack fic because that's all this is, MC probably surpassed Garp in strength yet it's never utilised because MC just wants to be a normal civilian and will never reveal more then 30-50% of his strength and only if it's an extreme circumstance, it wouldn't be so bad if it was funny but it's just stale generic humour and don't even get me started on the monologues(probably 60-70% of the chapters are the MC monologuing what to do to avoid showing his strength)
A guy who is stronger than Roger thinks that east blue Luffy can withstand 10% of his strength??? How stupid did you make this guy???
A refreshing shing new op fanfic :) it ’s worth reading if you’re tired of generics op fanfics.
One Piece gehört zur meinen Liebling's Serie daher habe ich ein Großteil der Serie und fast alle Mangas gelesen und auch jede Menge Fanfiction zu der Geschichte. Mein Fazit zu dieser Fanfiction ist dass sie nicht die beste auch nicht die schlechteste ist. Das Konzept dass sich der Protagonist verstecken soll, dass niemand seine wahre Stärke rausfindet um weitere Vorteile zu gewinnen ist recht interessant. Aber die Umsetzung ist nicht wirklich gelungen da der Charakter so überpowert ist dass er überhaupt nie seine volle Stärke einsetzen muss um gegen die Gegner zu kämpfen.( wie in One Punch man) und er braucht nicht wirklich die Belohnung vom System daher meine Meinung nach schon der stärkste in der One Piece World ist und einfach so leben könnte wie er will.
Revelar spoiler Boring, the worst thing on this platform[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Thing start to getting more interesting. But if you could. Please put the mc into more action. Sure i know he a lazybones and all but. What the point of having all those power if you don't use it? Maybe let him display a little more power and a little more action. So in my opinion, so far so good. I'm enjoying this story by the way. So keep up the good work buddy.👍
just drop this novel and translate other arguably better chinese novels. I don't know which one is good but if you can mc have power and use it, be it for evil or good. If the mc is more like a spectator then better find one who plays God and gives power to people
This story is just going to be disappointing. You made him op yet you won't have him do anything as he hides his stength and just wants to live a normal life which makes me even question why he became a marine. Since he knows one piece and its events, why join the marines and grt involved in all sorts of conflicts. He could have just traveled to east blue and be done. This isn't even like with Saitama who did want to be a hero and became op. He became bored but their is still that desire to fight and save others still within him. Here, the mc is just strong and not want to involve himself in anything. Its just annoying to read him complain about things when he could have made a decision to not jpin the marines. I wouldn't even be surprised if this guy would let an island be destroyed and its people massacred if it would force him to show his strength. What a great character to read, watching him just let Alabasta suffer.
Pointless Novel. you are basically a spectator that wouldn't even safe a child from a 10. 000 Bounty Pirate because you can't Show you are as strong as an Emperor....wow
Just a st*pid typical Chinese fanfic like any other, the MC gained power without doing anything. I can feel the 'young master' smell from the title and synopsis. ......................... ......................... ........................
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