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Volume 2 feels mid, though that I'd forgiven because it was somewhat a filler. Volume 3 feels better than mid, but still a little mid. I'm patient enough to not quite right now.
Something is telling me that you're going the EINLION route without the subtle cuckolding. Well to explain this, there are LOADS of girls in the Rance series, and the only problem would be that how will you do it?
Revelar spoiler (Reviewing from Chapter 17) Please try to avoid inconsistencies. On the other hand, the updating stability is good enough, sometimes we get chapters almost bordering 2k words. The characters are fleshed out, not too much, yet not enough. Somehow, there's cut content from the original, like the Hong Kong Macau arc, though I think those may be solved through the Volume R01.5 Keep up the good work.
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I just have two complaints, one there's several cut contents, but a few of them were good enough. Two, there's some mishaps in your writing, though that barely affects me. Though to be honest there would be some readers who would not continue to read further. Thanks 👍
Progressing smoothly so far. Plus, the MC's not treating certain women like pokemon but capture targets in a dating sim, I guess. Wish you luck and be careful, Author, if you're doing the entire Rance series, this fanfiction will be more than just 100 chapters, but maybe around 1000 and even more. :)
As an avid player of the Rance Series Games... I approve finally someone has written a fanfic on this... there is so much content, especially the further you went with the new games more epic the story becomes... Now I really cannot wait how the fanfic will develop and what changes the MC will make in the world. PS. Kenshin-chan sends her regards...
There's not much to say about this honestly.....But it was pretty decent.And I really wished I hadn't made the stupid choice of completing this book.
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Volume 2 feels mid, though that I'd forgiven because it was somewhat a filler. Volume 3 feels better than mid, but still a little mid. I'm patient enough to not quite right now.
Something is telling me that you're going the EINLION route without the subtle cuckolding. Well to explain this, there are LOADS of girls in the Rance series, and the only problem would be that how will you do it?
Revelar spoiler (Reviewing from Chapter 17) Please try to avoid inconsistencies. On the other hand, the updating stability is good enough, sometimes we get chapters almost bordering 2k words. The characters are fleshed out, not too much, yet not enough. Somehow, there's cut content from the original, like the Hong Kong Macau arc, though I think those may be solved through the Volume R01.5 Keep up the good work.
peanut butter jelly time peanut butter jelly time peanut butter jelly time peanut butter jelly time peanut butter jelly time
I just have two complaints, one there's several cut contents, but a few of them were good enough. Two, there's some mishaps in your writing, though that barely affects me. Though to be honest there would be some readers who would not continue to read further. Thanks 👍
Progressing smoothly so far. Plus, the MC's not treating certain women like pokemon but capture targets in a dating sim, I guess. Wish you luck and be careful, Author, if you're doing the entire Rance series, this fanfiction will be more than just 100 chapters, but maybe around 1000 and even more. :)
As an avid player of the Rance Series Games... I approve finally someone has written a fanfic on this... there is so much content, especially the further you went with the new games more epic the story becomes... Now I really cannot wait how the fanfic will develop and what changes the MC will make in the world. PS. Kenshin-chan sends her regards...
There's not much to say about this honestly.....But it was pretty decent.And I really wished I hadn't made the stupid choice of completing this book.