6Reseñas
- Calidad de escritura
- Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
- Desarrollo de la Historia
- Diseño de Personajes
- Antecedentes del mundo
Comparte tus pensamientos con los demás
Escribe una reseña
I didn't really like the way the perspective was written in the story. as it felt demeaningly childish. as it felt like this story was being awkwardly read to me like . as it made me feel like I was back in kindergarten getting read a storybook by my kindergarten teacher while I sit down and listen to her read me a story. so the way the story's perspective comes off as kind of offensive.
hope you keep writing I like this story but I'm sick of the racist Chinese people. I hope there is no racism or that there should be moderation. I used the translation in writing, hope you understand.[img=recommend]
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
es una genial historia espero un buen desarrollo y que no se abandone tiene un enorme potencial y mi apoyo [img=recomendar] espero un buen desarrollo
Author here doing a shameless review!... well hopefully you guys would enjoy My book, I probably would have an unstable update it depends since I'm still a student. also I apologize in advance if I made some mistakes and typos in writing since I'm still new in all of this... that's all thanks!
I didn't really like the way the perspective was written in the story. as it felt demeaningly childish. as it felt like this story was being awkwardly read to me like . as it made me feel like I was back in kindergarten getting read a storybook by my kindergarten teacher while I sit down and listen to her read me a story. so the way the story's perspective comes off as kind of offensive.
hope you keep writing I like this story but I'm sick of the racist Chinese people. I hope there is no racism or that there should be moderation. I used the translation in writing, hope you understand.[img=recommend]
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
es una genial historia espero un buen desarrollo y que no se abandone tiene un enorme potencial y mi apoyo [img=recomendar] espero un buen desarrollo
Author here doing a shameless review!... well hopefully you guys would enjoy My book, I probably would have an unstable update it depends since I'm still a student. also I apologize in advance if I made some mistakes and typos in writing since I'm still new in all of this... that's all thanks!
nice