44Reseñas
4
- Calidad de escritura
- Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
- Desarrollo de la Historia
- Diseño de Personajes
- Antecedentes del mundo
Comparte tus pensamientos con los demás
Escribe una reseña
So starts off with a normal guy dies and gets reborn in marvel, there’s X-man as well. He goes around fighting robbers and stealing there money, he then spies on nick and phill while they talk about a vigilante in a cafeteria(I mean why not just call him back and talk in a briefing room??). Then fight phill with illusions and gets him to see him as his brother, then thinks what he should do and thinks to relax and play games. And did that for a few months instead of training his new powers which is stupid in marvel. He also buys iron man helmets when he finds out there’s not a lot of entertainment like manga, only comic books.
Revelar spoiler
[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
good premise but the mc is just a giant cringe edgelord .............................................................................................
I have great distaste for protagonists who aren't immensely reserved about using mind control, makes my skin crawl.
Author does not know how the sharingan works but makes a story out of it lol don’t waste your time reading this “crack fic” because that’s what it is
Revelar spoiler
its ok but not good the dialogues are pretty cringy it's hard to read at times the fic makes me want to punch the screen grammar is pretty bad i think the author should've checked it and had someone edit it before posting it
ATÉ QUE ENNFIM, UMA FIC SEM SISTEMA E HARÉM! CÉUS, PROCUREI POR METADE DO DIA ALG DO TIPO PARA LER! AUTOR, tome uma pedra de poder em compensação!
Sigh.. the only problem for me is writting style: constant I moved, I sit, I catch, I run, I hit and so on... Because of this story feels like emotionless MC is telling his story in detailed report.
Writing Quality - Good Stability of Updates - Okay Story Development - Good but could be better Character Design - Good World Background - Movies Marvel
Good fanfic till now. please don't drop this. Hey can anyone tell me the name of the fanfic " where mc is reincarnated in Marvel world but it also includes friends (tv show) in Marvel world "
I read through chapter 7. I like the story. The story has a bit of comedy that I enjoyed. I thought the writing was decent, but the biggest issue is probably the expressions and dialogue. The story has good enough fluid, but it's fast-paced and ambiguous. I thought the MC was whatever. The MC is your stereotypical transmigrator who thinks the world revolves around them. But I thought it was cool to include ravens as it adds uniqueness to the story. I also liked the MC's power not included as a mutant. Overall, I'll rate this at a 3/5.
I read upto latest chapter (37) How should I say this, Start of the novel is good and fun but as story progress it going downhill(I hope it's gets good or at least ok but let's see) MC has sharingan, he doesn't hide his identity, story starts with ending of iron man ending, In starting MC simps for black widow but after she betrayed MC he backs away (but I think she is the main romantic interest I think *😞* ) and MC changes some things which effects everything onwards like New York battle (which is absolutely joke in my opinion based on how it went in this novel) and boy oh boy, MC gets mind controlled by mind stone and almost becomes the villain of New York battle and ancient one has to stop it and save him, and he lost his charka and his some power he had to train for 2 years to get charka back, now he is hiding in Europe and helped Wanda and her brother and training them and now MC doing some prison break of quicksilver I don't know how he is gonna pull it off Summary: Start is good but after that it's ok, to read if you don't have anything to read, I hope it's gets better because I like the concept but let's see PS: this is the long review I had ever written, I only wrote this for author say that your concept and execution at the start was good but after all the New York battle it's going downhill for me, hope you can write it better, anyway all the best
Revelar spoiler
My personal opinion is that the story gets worst after the first volume. I had to reread the first chapter of the first volume 5 times to understand what was happening, and I still don’t. The first volume was great 4.5 out of 5, but I just don’t like the second volume.
Originally I felt confused, but then I read more and. .. .noice~ Just one question: What happens if he throws Nokia 3310 to Thanos? 🤔
New reader here because I saw Sharingan in MCU and I'm about to dive into the unknown and I hope I won't regret giving it a five star TenseiRenniSharingan for the Win (Tenseigan, Rinnegan and Sharingan)
It's a quite good MCU fanfiction!! MC (David) has an OP power (Sharingan), so it's a bit of boring because his power.. But I like how David doesn't want to change the plot and how he's not have all of his power (sharingan, nature chakra, etc), but have it little by little.. Can't wait to read next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁😁👍👍👍
I just want to say that the jokes author gives are not really funny. if author-chan could make it a lil bit serious that would be great.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I like Sharingan in Marvel. I dislike bs power-up in the middle of the fight to compensate for the MC making a rookie mistake of unnecessarily alerting his opponents to his presence ahead of time. I also dislike x-men in MCU. Although they're both Marvel, the plots don't actually mesh all that well. I liked the light-hearted tone in the beginning, but that doesn't seem like it'll last... Anyways, it's not bad, but not really good either; just average.
It's not bad, but it's also not that good you have the typical trope like Mc was a Mercenary in his past life. It's only here to skip the trainings arc. And the mercenary doesn't like guns so he uses a Knife. It's your ordinary plot just to have cool moves I mean it's in the modern world and not AC Black Flag where you can slaughter 300 people in 10 Minutes with a blade.
Perfect no broblem i definetly did not give 5🌟 becous nokia phone and the fact nokia was created in finland
5 star for the nokia [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Even if the whole "eyes" thing is over used it isn't necessarily a bad thing. He said he is new at this, so using an ability that the author can get more info on, i.e. other FanFics and anime, should be a better thing.
"David Blake was hit by a Nokia 3310" i read up to this and had a huge laughing fit! 😂🤣😂🤣 everything else doesn't matter! it goes to my reading list
I actually liked a little the book so far, i only read up to chapter 10, but there are many aspects of the book that i really hated so far. Such as; ■ The protagonist talking loudly to another random passerby about being in the Marvel/DC universe, which by the way is a very poor attempt at breaking the fourth wall. ■ The way he subtly treats the world as if it were a game and so on. ■ The bad jokes and horrible sense of humor. ■ The fact that all events happen in almost the same way even with the protagonist's intervention. ■ The focus on making Black Widow the main heroine, after all, she has probably used and uses her body countless times to complete missions. She has passed through the hands of so many people that it is difficult to count, the author himself said that Fury was ready to turn her into Stark's main lover, based on this, it doesn't seem that it is impossible for her to have been instructed to do the same thing in other missions, so i don't think it's very reliable to make her the main heroine. There are so many incredible women in the MCU, not to mention that this world has the X-Men in the mix, always focusing on Black Widow is too boring. The protagonist will never have any way of knowing if she will be using the 'easier' means to complete certain missions so that she can get home faster. Of course, this is the MCU, i think that Black Widow here isn't as '🚎' as the one in the comics, because i don't remember if she even became Stark's lover in the MCU before she appeared in front of him as an agent, or if she really liked Banner or if it was just with the intention of better controlling the Hulk. ■ How ridiculous it is for the protagonist, at the beginning of the story, to think that someone kidnapped and robbed him when even a layman would have understood that he died because the Nokia fell straight on his forehead. ■ The fact that the skills, especially genjutsu, do not work in the same way as the original work and the author does not bother to explain in detail how it really works. The principle of genjutsu in the original work is for Ninja 1 to use his own chakra to interfere/control the flow of chakra in Ninja 2's cerebral nervous system, consequently affecting the target's five senses. There is already a big doubt about this, because in Marvel there is no one other than him with chakra, so there is no flow of chakra to control and generate the genjutsu. Although the author may say that the protagonist's chakra directly affects an individual's cerebral nervous system rather than the chakra flow. ■ The author's is constantly talking about someone's chakra when they only have chakra in Marvel. Chakra is an energy generated by the fusion of an individual's physical energy and spiritual energy, however, there is no one other than the protagonist who can generate this energy in this world. Remembering that in the original work, even the most common civilians had chakra, even if it was almost non-existent, therefore, it would always appear in the perception of the ninjas' sensory abilities. However, no one other than him has chakra in the current world, so he shouldn't even be able to 'see' or 'feel' anyone without chakra in the first place. All the author needed to do was say that the abilities worked differently, that he was 'seeing' or 'feeling' someone's 'aura' and not their chakra. This would essentially be 'seeing' the physical energy of others in a colored gas form. Anyway, i'll comment more when i finish reading, after all, i'm only on chapter 10 so far.
Revelar spoiler So starts off with a normal guy dies and gets reborn in marvel, there’s X-man as well. He goes around fighting robbers and stealing there money, he then spies on nick and phill while they talk about a vigilante in a cafeteria(I mean why not just call him back and talk in a briefing room??). Then fight phill with illusions and gets him to see him as his brother, then thinks what he should do and thinks to relax and play games. And did that for a few months instead of training his new powers which is stupid in marvel. He also buys iron man helmets when he finds out there’s not a lot of entertainment like manga, only comic books.
Revelar spoiler [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
good premise but the mc is just a giant cringe edgelord .............................................................................................
I have great distaste for protagonists who aren't immensely reserved about using mind control, makes my skin crawl.
Author does not know how the sharingan works but makes a story out of it lol don’t waste your time reading this “crack fic” because that’s what it is
Revelar spoiler its ok but not good the dialogues are pretty cringy it's hard to read at times the fic makes me want to punch the screen grammar is pretty bad i think the author should've checked it and had someone edit it before posting it
ATÉ QUE ENNFIM, UMA FIC SEM SISTEMA E HARÉM! CÉUS, PROCUREI POR METADE DO DIA ALG DO TIPO PARA LER! AUTOR, tome uma pedra de poder em compensação!
Sigh.. the only problem for me is writting style: constant I moved, I sit, I catch, I run, I hit and so on... Because of this story feels like emotionless MC is telling his story in detailed report.
Writing Quality - Good Stability of Updates - Okay Story Development - Good but could be better Character Design - Good World Background - Movies Marvel
Good fanfic till now. please don't drop this. Hey can anyone tell me the name of the fanfic " where mc is reincarnated in Marvel world but it also includes friends (tv show) in Marvel world "
I read through chapter 7. I like the story. The story has a bit of comedy that I enjoyed. I thought the writing was decent, but the biggest issue is probably the expressions and dialogue. The story has good enough fluid, but it's fast-paced and ambiguous. I thought the MC was whatever. The MC is your stereotypical transmigrator who thinks the world revolves around them. But I thought it was cool to include ravens as it adds uniqueness to the story. I also liked the MC's power not included as a mutant. Overall, I'll rate this at a 3/5.
I read upto latest chapter (37) How should I say this, Start of the novel is good and fun but as story progress it going downhill(I hope it's gets good or at least ok but let's see) MC has sharingan, he doesn't hide his identity, story starts with ending of iron man ending, In starting MC simps for black widow but after she betrayed MC he backs away (but I think she is the main romantic interest I think *😞* ) and MC changes some things which effects everything onwards like New York battle (which is absolutely joke in my opinion based on how it went in this novel) and boy oh boy, MC gets mind controlled by mind stone and almost becomes the villain of New York battle and ancient one has to stop it and save him, and he lost his charka and his some power he had to train for 2 years to get charka back, now he is hiding in Europe and helped Wanda and her brother and training them and now MC doing some prison break of quicksilver I don't know how he is gonna pull it off Summary: Start is good but after that it's ok, to read if you don't have anything to read, I hope it's gets better because I like the concept but let's see PS: this is the long review I had ever written, I only wrote this for author say that your concept and execution at the start was good but after all the New York battle it's going downhill for me, hope you can write it better, anyway all the best
Revelar spoiler My personal opinion is that the story gets worst after the first volume. I had to reread the first chapter of the first volume 5 times to understand what was happening, and I still don’t. The first volume was great 4.5 out of 5, but I just don’t like the second volume.
Originally I felt confused, but then I read more and. .. .noice~ Just one question: What happens if he throws Nokia 3310 to Thanos? 🤔
New reader here because I saw Sharingan in MCU and I'm about to dive into the unknown and I hope I won't regret giving it a five star TenseiRenniSharingan for the Win (Tenseigan, Rinnegan and Sharingan)
It's a quite good MCU fanfiction!! MC (David) has an OP power (Sharingan), so it's a bit of boring because his power.. But I like how David doesn't want to change the plot and how he's not have all of his power (sharingan, nature chakra, etc), but have it little by little.. Can't wait to read next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁😁👍👍👍
I just want to say that the jokes author gives are not really funny. if author-chan could make it a lil bit serious that would be great.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I like Sharingan in Marvel. I dislike bs power-up in the middle of the fight to compensate for the MC making a rookie mistake of unnecessarily alerting his opponents to his presence ahead of time. I also dislike x-men in MCU. Although they're both Marvel, the plots don't actually mesh all that well. I liked the light-hearted tone in the beginning, but that doesn't seem like it'll last... Anyways, it's not bad, but not really good either; just average.
It's not bad, but it's also not that good you have the typical trope like Mc was a Mercenary in his past life. It's only here to skip the trainings arc. And the mercenary doesn't like guns so he uses a Knife. It's your ordinary plot just to have cool moves I mean it's in the modern world and not AC Black Flag where you can slaughter 300 people in 10 Minutes with a blade.
Perfect no broblem i definetly did not give 5🌟 becous nokia phone and the fact nokia was created in finland
5 star for the nokia [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Even if the whole "eyes" thing is over used it isn't necessarily a bad thing. He said he is new at this, so using an ability that the author can get more info on, i.e. other FanFics and anime, should be a better thing.
"David Blake was hit by a Nokia 3310" i read up to this and had a huge laughing fit! 😂🤣😂🤣 everything else doesn't matter! it goes to my reading list
I actually liked a little the book so far, i only read up to chapter 10, but there are many aspects of the book that i really hated so far. Such as; ■ The protagonist talking loudly to another random passerby about being in the Marvel/DC universe, which by the way is a very poor attempt at breaking the fourth wall. ■ The way he subtly treats the world as if it were a game and so on. ■ The bad jokes and horrible sense of humor. ■ The fact that all events happen in almost the same way even with the protagonist's intervention. ■ The focus on making Black Widow the main heroine, after all, she has probably used and uses her body countless times to complete missions. She has passed through the hands of so many people that it is difficult to count, the author himself said that Fury was ready to turn her into Stark's main lover, based on this, it doesn't seem that it is impossible for her to have been instructed to do the same thing in other missions, so i don't think it's very reliable to make her the main heroine. There are so many incredible women in the MCU, not to mention that this world has the X-Men in the mix, always focusing on Black Widow is too boring. The protagonist will never have any way of knowing if she will be using the 'easier' means to complete certain missions so that she can get home faster. Of course, this is the MCU, i think that Black Widow here isn't as '🚎' as the one in the comics, because i don't remember if she even became Stark's lover in the MCU before she appeared in front of him as an agent, or if she really liked Banner or if it was just with the intention of better controlling the Hulk. ■ How ridiculous it is for the protagonist, at the beginning of the story, to think that someone kidnapped and robbed him when even a layman would have understood that he died because the Nokia fell straight on his forehead. ■ The fact that the skills, especially genjutsu, do not work in the same way as the original work and the author does not bother to explain in detail how it really works. The principle of genjutsu in the original work is for Ninja 1 to use his own chakra to interfere/control the flow of chakra in Ninja 2's cerebral nervous system, consequently affecting the target's five senses. There is already a big doubt about this, because in Marvel there is no one other than him with chakra, so there is no flow of chakra to control and generate the genjutsu. Although the author may say that the protagonist's chakra directly affects an individual's cerebral nervous system rather than the chakra flow. ■ The author's is constantly talking about someone's chakra when they only have chakra in Marvel. Chakra is an energy generated by the fusion of an individual's physical energy and spiritual energy, however, there is no one other than the protagonist who can generate this energy in this world. Remembering that in the original work, even the most common civilians had chakra, even if it was almost non-existent, therefore, it would always appear in the perception of the ninjas' sensory abilities. However, no one other than him has chakra in the current world, so he shouldn't even be able to 'see' or 'feel' anyone without chakra in the first place. All the author needed to do was say that the abilities worked differently, that he was 'seeing' or 'feeling' someone's 'aura' and not their chakra. This would essentially be 'seeing' the physical energy of others in a colored gas form. Anyway, i'll comment more when i finish reading, after all, i'm only on chapter 10 so far.
Revelar spoiler