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At first it started hood, later on it took me 250 chapters to get irritated , MC is dumb, he is repeating the same mistakes. I liked the concept but the author isntable to create a good system interms of technology power structure or mage.
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I enjoyed the novel at the beginning, but reading up to chapter 350 was filled with annoyance. The MC is so stuck in the earth mindset that it’s Insufferable to read, his women are constantly being either attacked, kidnapped or in a coma because just how weak and annoying the MC is. One of his women is being held as a political hostage once again due to him being weak and dumb. He is able to make women stronger by having s*x with them yet he doesn’t take advantage of it. Save your mental from reading this, or you’ll end up being VERY annoyed.
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Man, this could've been so much better.The story started great. Lots of good ideas that made an amazing novel. The author set up up some interesting characters (friendly or not) that were going to payoff later. I didn't even mind that the MC made mistakes, since that was a chance for him to grow up as a character.But the quality dropped REALLY fast. By chapter 100 you could see several weird phrasings or two sentences/paragraphs that meant the same thing but worded differently. Also the bad guys just felt like they were carbon copies of each other, no creativity. The power creep was also intense. We went from Rank D being something impressive, to a Rank SS just being throw into our faces like they were common.All in all, I'm sad and disappointed.
I liked the novel initially. But as chapters went by, frustration began to build up. MC is far too weak. His harem members have no choice but to sacrifice for the MC. ( SPOILER - one member goes into a coma, another one gets kidnapped, another one has no choice but to follow royal decrees......). The entire novel revolves around his heroines suffering from various atrocities. Yet, the MC is not cruel enough. He still follows the conventions and values of EARTH. He keeps forgiving enemies who later comes to bite him in the back. And it took 350 chapters for the MC to realise that he should be powerful if he need to protect.his loved ones in this power hungry world. Sometimes I wonder if the MC was as naive as an infant in his previous life. Apparently, he keeps saying that he should get more powerful but he does very little to actually get powerful. Also the power system in this novel is weird. We don't have a standard criteria to measure the power levels of the MC. We don't know how strong the enemies are or what is the supposedly highest level a person can reach. The system is useless in this regard as well. Also, most of the chapters are filled with info dumps . I skipped through a lot of chapters due to this. It also becomes weird when author tries to introduce future technologies into such a magic driven mediaeval world. The fine line between technology and magic becomes blurred. Such technologies should only be used as accessories / suppliments to magic system. But author tries to give more importance to technology Eventually even forgetting about magic in the process. What a mess. It is kinda sad considering the fact that writing quality is excellent without grammatical errors.
from magic world to normal world? the world was good . world of magic. strong eats weak. class of mage from F to S. Then as story progresses all people become normal.The class of mage become irrivelent. Police came later. Strong people become normal. SS class mage has no value. Now at chapter 255 people have gun? world have converted from magical world to common earth.
I really wanted to like this book and in the beginning I did, the story had a good starting premise and gave a good starting chapter. But the longer I read the harder it is for me to continue. Some paragraphs are just way to long and while not pointless fills little meaning and only clutter up the screen with a wall of text somewhat difficult to read through without losing where you where. The last point I want to make is that the timescale between some events is not explained in a good way, some things that should take months pass by in a couple of days and vice versa.Overall a book with good potential but lackluster execution.I have read to chapter 130 when writing this.
It’s a really amazing story. I did not expect to find such a story. I would seriously tell you to consider reading this story. You would not regret it. It is a harem story so be prepared. Though it has a lot of world building with creating future products. That are ground breaking for a magical midevil era.
Will the MC love his women? And how many harem members do you intend to make ............................................................................................
I think the personality of zack is a bit too good he should try to take advantage of the situation a bit more..apart from that the story is very good. Every one should read it.
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments. I was pleasantly surprised by the novel - it sustained my interest and kept me entertained throughout! The synopsis initially gave me doubts about the story, but it managed to keep me engaged and proved to be much more layered and complex. The character's perspectives were interesting to follow, and I found myself rooting for them as the story progressed. I would definitely recommend this read to anyone looking for something entertaining and thought-provoking!
dayum.. this is a piece of art. i didn't think i found a hidden gem through the recommendation.
A very good book, is this lacking an attention? I thought at first it's gonna like the "Realeasd the Witch" Novel or Manhwa, it's quite different! Though, it's good and nice to read, give it all of you a try.
a good well written story with likeable main character that you want root for interesting method for strengthening the charcter is not op but uses abilities in an innovative way
At the moment, I can only say that i love it, good story, a consistent MC which doesn't rush into battle, and find the easiest solution to a problem (chapter 72, LOL). World building is a bit shallow at the moment, but give it time. A hidden gem. good job author,
A real hidden gem, harem novels often become boring after a few chapters but not this one. The character is meticulously developed without making it boring and the females are loved by the mc. The MC also has a sense of goodness and the powering up is steady and not extremely slow or fast. Overall Love it.
This is such a hidden gem. At first, the idea of transporting only the weapons from the game world felt a little lacking in imagination. But the way the author has managed to match it with the existing magic in the world makes me remember 'My wife is a demon queen.' Of course this one has the potential of a harem which makes it so much better.
The story line and the start of the book was good, but later on everything is a jumbled mess, mc is so dumb that every 50 chapters he says that he will improve but no improvement is seen, and had to face the same situation where harem members suffer, then he promises again but faces the same situation over and over again, it has been 350 chapters but we have only met a single succubus who is not awake, there is no plot for mages and there power, mc absorbs power but don't know how to use them without the system, mc only focuses on a single group, and wanted to make them stronger, but have not used the mage power and only guns. around 100 chapters ago he said that the both worlds power should co exist for it to make them stronger, but again noone tried and still the mc group is ignorant of how to use mana and magic . Mc didn't even try to use magic as there is no mention of him even trying to check if he can do it or not. Still world background was good but the story and mc behaviour is not up to par. Serious need of story editing or else the book will keep on going without anything new and thrilling for an isekai novel, Ps. Sorry for my bad grammar,
At first it started hood, later on it took me 250 chapters to get irritated , MC is dumb, he is repeating the same mistakes. I liked the concept but the author isntable to create a good system interms of technology power structure or mage.
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I enjoyed the novel at the beginning, but reading up to chapter 350 was filled with annoyance. The MC is so stuck in the earth mindset that it’s Insufferable to read, his women are constantly being either attacked, kidnapped or in a coma because just how weak and annoying the MC is. One of his women is being held as a political hostage once again due to him being weak and dumb. He is able to make women stronger by having s*x with them yet he doesn’t take advantage of it. Save your mental from reading this, or you’ll end up being VERY annoyed.
Revelar spoiler Man, this could've been so much better.The story started great. Lots of good ideas that made an amazing novel. The author set up up some interesting characters (friendly or not) that were going to payoff later. I didn't even mind that the MC made mistakes, since that was a chance for him to grow up as a character.But the quality dropped REALLY fast. By chapter 100 you could see several weird phrasings or two sentences/paragraphs that meant the same thing but worded differently. Also the bad guys just felt like they were carbon copies of each other, no creativity. The power creep was also intense. We went from Rank D being something impressive, to a Rank SS just being throw into our faces like they were common.All in all, I'm sad and disappointed.
I liked the novel initially. But as chapters went by, frustration began to build up. MC is far too weak. His harem members have no choice but to sacrifice for the MC. ( SPOILER - one member goes into a coma, another one gets kidnapped, another one has no choice but to follow royal decrees......). The entire novel revolves around his heroines suffering from various atrocities. Yet, the MC is not cruel enough. He still follows the conventions and values of EARTH. He keeps forgiving enemies who later comes to bite him in the back. And it took 350 chapters for the MC to realise that he should be powerful if he need to protect.his loved ones in this power hungry world. Sometimes I wonder if the MC was as naive as an infant in his previous life. Apparently, he keeps saying that he should get more powerful but he does very little to actually get powerful. Also the power system in this novel is weird. We don't have a standard criteria to measure the power levels of the MC. We don't know how strong the enemies are or what is the supposedly highest level a person can reach. The system is useless in this regard as well. Also, most of the chapters are filled with info dumps . I skipped through a lot of chapters due to this. It also becomes weird when author tries to introduce future technologies into such a magic driven mediaeval world. The fine line between technology and magic becomes blurred. Such technologies should only be used as accessories / suppliments to magic system. But author tries to give more importance to technology Eventually even forgetting about magic in the process. What a mess. It is kinda sad considering the fact that writing quality is excellent without grammatical errors.
from magic world to normal world? the world was good . world of magic. strong eats weak. class of mage from F to S. Then as story progresses all people become normal.The class of mage become irrivelent. Police came later. Strong people become normal. SS class mage has no value. Now at chapter 255 people have gun? world have converted from magical world to common earth.
I really wanted to like this book and in the beginning I did, the story had a good starting premise and gave a good starting chapter. But the longer I read the harder it is for me to continue. Some paragraphs are just way to long and while not pointless fills little meaning and only clutter up the screen with a wall of text somewhat difficult to read through without losing where you where. The last point I want to make is that the timescale between some events is not explained in a good way, some things that should take months pass by in a couple of days and vice versa.Overall a book with good potential but lackluster execution.I have read to chapter 130 when writing this.
It’s a really amazing story. I did not expect to find such a story. I would seriously tell you to consider reading this story. You would not regret it. It is a harem story so be prepared. Though it has a lot of world building with creating future products. That are ground breaking for a magical midevil era.
Will the MC love his women? And how many harem members do you intend to make ............................................................................................
I think the personality of zack is a bit too good he should try to take advantage of the situation a bit more..apart from that the story is very good. Every one should read it.
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments. I was pleasantly surprised by the novel - it sustained my interest and kept me entertained throughout! The synopsis initially gave me doubts about the story, but it managed to keep me engaged and proved to be much more layered and complex. The character's perspectives were interesting to follow, and I found myself rooting for them as the story progressed. I would definitely recommend this read to anyone looking for something entertaining and thought-provoking!
dayum.. this is a piece of art. i didn't think i found a hidden gem through the recommendation.
A very good book, is this lacking an attention? I thought at first it's gonna like the "Realeasd the Witch" Novel or Manhwa, it's quite different! Though, it's good and nice to read, give it all of you a try.
a good well written story with likeable main character that you want root for interesting method for strengthening the charcter is not op but uses abilities in an innovative way
At the moment, I can only say that i love it, good story, a consistent MC which doesn't rush into battle, and find the easiest solution to a problem (chapter 72, LOL). World building is a bit shallow at the moment, but give it time. A hidden gem. good job author,
A real hidden gem, harem novels often become boring after a few chapters but not this one. The character is meticulously developed without making it boring and the females are loved by the mc. The MC also has a sense of goodness and the powering up is steady and not extremely slow or fast. Overall Love it.
This is such a hidden gem. At first, the idea of transporting only the weapons from the game world felt a little lacking in imagination. But the way the author has managed to match it with the existing magic in the world makes me remember 'My wife is a demon queen.' Of course this one has the potential of a harem which makes it so much better.
The story line and the start of the book was good, but later on everything is a jumbled mess, mc is so dumb that every 50 chapters he says that he will improve but no improvement is seen, and had to face the same situation where harem members suffer, then he promises again but faces the same situation over and over again, it has been 350 chapters but we have only met a single succubus who is not awake, there is no plot for mages and there power, mc absorbs power but don't know how to use them without the system, mc only focuses on a single group, and wanted to make them stronger, but have not used the mage power and only guns. around 100 chapters ago he said that the both worlds power should co exist for it to make them stronger, but again noone tried and still the mc group is ignorant of how to use mana and magic . Mc didn't even try to use magic as there is no mention of him even trying to check if he can do it or not. Still world background was good but the story and mc behaviour is not up to par. Serious need of story editing or else the book will keep on going without anything new and thrilling for an isekai novel, Ps. Sorry for my bad grammar,