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The story is interesting, this fanfic has some better things than the original story, which is over for now. Does anyone know of any other fanfic that has Mirko (rabbit) as the main character's heroine? Looking and only found 1 that has Mirko (Rumi Usagiyama) ;=;
I liked this story, even though it has its flaws it ends up being interesting, will this still continue? Or did this story end up abandoned? ;-;
Overall great story but the way the author made other character’s stats doesn’t seem correct for many of them and mc is a complete idiot when assigning attribute points.
(I'm writing this at chapter 63) The story started great with the MC acting according to his age as a mature reincarnated person, unfortunately as the story progressed the MC started to act like a child and form ideals that doesn't match the real world... Acting like a teenager and doing "heroic" things like it is what he is meant to do with his life. Also for some reason despite knowing the future he still didn't try to actively get One For All... Which also doesn't make sense at all considering he knows how dangerous the MHA world is and how easily can get One For All. Honestly I think the original Izuku Midoriya (that his body he is currently possessing) was even stronger than the MC during his first year in Hero Academia... So I got to the conclusion that the author decided to Nerf the MC, after all, he trained for 2 years with his system and only got a little bit stronger naturally (without the points he received from leveling up) But what disappointed me the most in this fanfic is the fact that the MC could give powers and power-up to the girls he sleeps with, but he can't receive any power-up from them in return. Which effectively mean that as soon as he catches up to one of the girls in power, he sleeps with her, and then she overtake him again... Like, the girls could train normally and get powerful and then they also could get more powerful from the points they get from leveling up... Anyway, I can definitely say that while I was disappointed, the story is definitely great and have a certain appeal to some people so I will still give this 4.5 star review.
Really really enjoyed this book, although I have not read many books on this app this book is indeed one of my favourites
Well from all BNHA fanfics this one standsout for me ..(Read it even though I am not that huge a lover of anime Still haven't seen season 5 or 6 or if there is 7)read it till chapter 150 or so ..Then dropped as the romance and everything else seemed as a drag..
Writing Quality: Impressively good for a novel with these kinds of tags, definitely pleasant to read. However, don’t expect poetry level of writing. Updating Stability: No comments, you can see it yourself. Story Development: It’s definitely not a fast-paced story. The author takes his time developing the relationships established along the way to make a ‘harem’ work out, which even though is not my cup of tea, I have been able to somewhat endure thanks to the ‘realistic’ way of tackling that sort of relationship. Don’t expect it to be the usual MHA world, as from what I’ve read so far, they refer it as an ‘eroge’ version of it, allowing a much simpler approach to sorting out the problems that come with having multiple relationships at the same time. Overall, I’d prefer a much less bountiful quantity of members in his private circle, but sometimes reading a different perspective is refreshing. I previously read Horizon, another MHA fanfic, so I guess that influenced how I’m viewing this one, making it more enjoyable from the beginning. Also, even though I usually skip what’s referred as ‘lemons’, in this one I read them as an exception since sometimes the author gives meaning to them, making them fruitful and not just pure lust-feeding for the audience, something I appreciate. Character Design: All characters are well-thought and follow the original guidelines of how they act, although the author gives his personal touch after the protagonist interacts with them. World Background: Similar to the character section, the author focuses on keeping things somewhat similar to the original, but adding decisive or non-decisive changes here and there. I won’t spoil or come to any conclusions since I have yet to read more definite changes through the story, so I’ll update my review once I do so. Overall, great job so far! Really pleasant to read, thank you mr/ms author for your work. [img=recommend]
just felt like giving a 5 star...................................................................................................................
Hello Dear Author,I would really appreciate if you could bring inko and mc together and if not possible fine but don't setup inko with another man because I don't like it and logically and realistically saying inko would rather stay single or with mc because she wouldn't trust any other man other than her son which she is attracted to.If you can do it A Big Thank You from Me.If not please don't setup inko with otherman Please.
da best MHA fanfic i have read so far. Just to many name make me confused. Consistently using the last or first name or full names in certain situations would have been more optimal in my opinion.
but what happened after chapter 36 everything escalated very quickly????? Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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I liked most of the author’s previous works but this one started strong but lost me with the dialogue and arrogant MC. MC talks too much for no reason. Again, “show, don’t tell” us who the MC is. The writing is pretty good, but the robotic and holier-than-thou tone the MC speaks with broke my immersion. I’m still a fan of your work, but this one was not it. 3.2/5
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this is a GREAT bnha fanfiction, good plot, very entertaining and good lemons.
I don't often write negative reviews. It's even rarer that I respond to negative reviews from others. After all, it's all pretty subjective. But it seems that this time I needed to trust the opinions of other readers. The quality of this author's writing is pretty good, you can't take that away from him. It's a pretty good story if the author would have been more confident. The author seems to be undecided about what he wants out of this story. And the plot changed depending on the readers reaction or the author's mood. This completely disregarded the actions of the characters in the novel or the previous plot. It just changed too drastically. The characters' relationships, the characters' goals, the characters' backstories, the main character's morals, etc. I stopped reading at chapter 67. I don't want to spoiler anything, but the so-called unwarranted "authorial interference" was at its peak there(I guess). As a tip, I can say that the author needs to be more confident in himself and his ideas. If you change YOUR story based on the opinions of others, nothing good will come of it. Good luck.
I have your other ff and I loved them I hope u don't drop this one and by the way this is going maybe you could have the mc travel worlds not sure but it would be awesome and if u do please have him take his harem with him if travels to different worlds cause in your other ff you didn't and we could see his harem for like 500 chapters.
muhahaha if its Ein the .he deserves it one-million-percent plus Ultra!!! A very interesting read diverging from the mc's character stereotype established by the OG series..... this Izuku with a spine is one to fall inlove with
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awesome fanfic from what I've read so far, do you think it would be possible to label the chapters? it doesn't have to be all of them just some to differentiate chapters
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
A lot of people are giving this story and reviews but I'm generally enjoying reading it and want to thank the author for writing such a good story
This story is ok It starts off pretty decent but later the entire story starts to turn into just interactions with his harem. I’m talking a good 150 chapters of just conversations, no plot or progression just conversations. This author best work was when he/she doesn’t write stories about relationships like the beginning of theyre Danmachi fic but like that’s and this it basically stops being anything but conversations later in the fic and becomes bland
The story is interesting, this fanfic has some better things than the original story, which is over for now. Does anyone know of any other fanfic that has Mirko (rabbit) as the main character's heroine? Looking and only found 1 that has Mirko (Rumi Usagiyama) ;=;
I liked this story, even though it has its flaws it ends up being interesting, will this still continue? Or did this story end up abandoned? ;-;
Overall great story but the way the author made other character’s stats doesn’t seem correct for many of them and mc is a complete idiot when assigning attribute points.
(I'm writing this at chapter 63) The story started great with the MC acting according to his age as a mature reincarnated person, unfortunately as the story progressed the MC started to act like a child and form ideals that doesn't match the real world... Acting like a teenager and doing "heroic" things like it is what he is meant to do with his life. Also for some reason despite knowing the future he still didn't try to actively get One For All... Which also doesn't make sense at all considering he knows how dangerous the MHA world is and how easily can get One For All. Honestly I think the original Izuku Midoriya (that his body he is currently possessing) was even stronger than the MC during his first year in Hero Academia... So I got to the conclusion that the author decided to Nerf the MC, after all, he trained for 2 years with his system and only got a little bit stronger naturally (without the points he received from leveling up) But what disappointed me the most in this fanfic is the fact that the MC could give powers and power-up to the girls he sleeps with, but he can't receive any power-up from them in return. Which effectively mean that as soon as he catches up to one of the girls in power, he sleeps with her, and then she overtake him again... Like, the girls could train normally and get powerful and then they also could get more powerful from the points they get from leveling up... Anyway, I can definitely say that while I was disappointed, the story is definitely great and have a certain appeal to some people so I will still give this 4.5 star review.
Really really enjoyed this book, although I have not read many books on this app this book is indeed one of my favourites
Well from all BNHA fanfics this one standsout for me ..(Read it even though I am not that huge a lover of anime Still haven't seen season 5 or 6 or if there is 7)read it till chapter 150 or so ..Then dropped as the romance and everything else seemed as a drag..
Writing Quality: Impressively good for a novel with these kinds of tags, definitely pleasant to read. However, don’t expect poetry level of writing. Updating Stability: No comments, you can see it yourself. Story Development: It’s definitely not a fast-paced story. The author takes his time developing the relationships established along the way to make a ‘harem’ work out, which even though is not my cup of tea, I have been able to somewhat endure thanks to the ‘realistic’ way of tackling that sort of relationship. Don’t expect it to be the usual MHA world, as from what I’ve read so far, they refer it as an ‘eroge’ version of it, allowing a much simpler approach to sorting out the problems that come with having multiple relationships at the same time. Overall, I’d prefer a much less bountiful quantity of members in his private circle, but sometimes reading a different perspective is refreshing. I previously read Horizon, another MHA fanfic, so I guess that influenced how I’m viewing this one, making it more enjoyable from the beginning. Also, even though I usually skip what’s referred as ‘lemons’, in this one I read them as an exception since sometimes the author gives meaning to them, making them fruitful and not just pure lust-feeding for the audience, something I appreciate. Character Design: All characters are well-thought and follow the original guidelines of how they act, although the author gives his personal touch after the protagonist interacts with them. World Background: Similar to the character section, the author focuses on keeping things somewhat similar to the original, but adding decisive or non-decisive changes here and there. I won’t spoil or come to any conclusions since I have yet to read more definite changes through the story, so I’ll update my review once I do so. Overall, great job so far! Really pleasant to read, thank you mr/ms author for your work. [img=recommend]
just felt like giving a 5 star...................................................................................................................
Hello Dear Author,I would really appreciate if you could bring inko and mc together and if not possible fine but don't setup inko with another man because I don't like it and logically and realistically saying inko would rather stay single or with mc because she wouldn't trust any other man other than her son which she is attracted to.If you can do it A Big Thank You from Me.If not please don't setup inko with otherman Please.
da best MHA fanfic i have read so far. Just to many name make me confused. Consistently using the last or first name or full names in certain situations would have been more optimal in my opinion.
but what happened after chapter 36 everything escalated very quickly????? Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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I liked most of the author’s previous works but this one started strong but lost me with the dialogue and arrogant MC. MC talks too much for no reason. Again, “show, don’t tell” us who the MC is. The writing is pretty good, but the robotic and holier-than-thou tone the MC speaks with broke my immersion. I’m still a fan of your work, but this one was not it. 3.2/5
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this is a GREAT bnha fanfiction, good plot, very entertaining and good lemons.
I don't often write negative reviews. It's even rarer that I respond to negative reviews from others. After all, it's all pretty subjective. But it seems that this time I needed to trust the opinions of other readers. The quality of this author's writing is pretty good, you can't take that away from him. It's a pretty good story if the author would have been more confident. The author seems to be undecided about what he wants out of this story. And the plot changed depending on the readers reaction or the author's mood. This completely disregarded the actions of the characters in the novel or the previous plot. It just changed too drastically. The characters' relationships, the characters' goals, the characters' backstories, the main character's morals, etc. I stopped reading at chapter 67. I don't want to spoiler anything, but the so-called unwarranted "authorial interference" was at its peak there(I guess). As a tip, I can say that the author needs to be more confident in himself and his ideas. If you change YOUR story based on the opinions of others, nothing good will come of it. Good luck.
I have your other ff and I loved them I hope u don't drop this one and by the way this is going maybe you could have the mc travel worlds not sure but it would be awesome and if u do please have him take his harem with him if travels to different worlds cause in your other ff you didn't and we could see his harem for like 500 chapters.
muhahaha if its Ein the .he deserves it one-million-percent plus Ultra!!! A very interesting read diverging from the mc's character stereotype established by the OG series..... this Izuku with a spine is one to fall inlove with
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awesome fanfic from what I've read so far, do you think it would be possible to label the chapters? it doesn't have to be all of them just some to differentiate chapters
Interesting, because it's interesting I give it five stars. But it would be more interesting if you stopped by my place and found the same thing too!
A lot of people are giving this story and reviews but I'm generally enjoying reading it and want to thank the author for writing such a good story
This story is ok It starts off pretty decent but later the entire story starts to turn into just interactions with his harem. I’m talking a good 150 chapters of just conversations, no plot or progression just conversations. This author best work was when he/she doesn’t write stories about relationships like the beginning of theyre Danmachi fic but like that’s and this it basically stops being anything but conversations later in the fic and becomes bland