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my writer friend, I'm not going to get into the nonsense of the story the character is not suitable for a very strong world, and I wish you'd write a story about valyria, about saving her family before destruction and building a new kingdom
I loved this story, it was a super fun read. I wish the mc had made it to the plot of the show(I never read the books), but great job. I also wish we got more wrap up for his water dragon as well.
Will this story have a sequel . if so do 2 of them each on house of dragons and game of thrones or you can do 1 with westeros world building
Interesting, yet needs some work on timeline and year as it gets pretty confusing what the time and place it happened. Overall, I like the general impression and ideas you’ve put out. Other than some minor adjustments, keep up the good work. 👍👍😊😁😊👍
Excelente historia, me encanta, ya que es la primera vez que lee una historia de karna en Game of thrones, fuera preferido que fuera más larga, pero me confirmó, 👌👌👌😃😃🙂😊😊
The story so far is pretty interesting, especially the world building aspect. Though grammar and some Characterization might need some work. Overall, the story is pretty good. 👍 [img=recommend]
My disappointment is immeasurable. The author has some cool ideas, and I love the premise. However, it becomes so riddled with basic grammar mistakes from ch5 onward that I cannot enjoy reading it. It is somehow more frustrating than MTL. I cannot in good conscience recommend reading this.
The premise is there but it became confusing at times. Some paragraphs have grammatical errors and become convoluted due to to having too much words. Also too much p.o.v's that made this more confusing.
good story so far about karna born in a rhoynar ruling prince family before the war with valyria 🔥🔥🔥
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my writer friend, I'm not going to get into the nonsense of the story the character is not suitable for a very strong world, and I wish you'd write a story about valyria, about saving her family before destruction and building a new kingdom
I loved this story, it was a super fun read. I wish the mc had made it to the plot of the show(I never read the books), but great job. I also wish we got more wrap up for his water dragon as well.
Will this story have a sequel . if so do 2 of them each on house of dragons and game of thrones or you can do 1 with westeros world building
Interesting, yet needs some work on timeline and year as it gets pretty confusing what the time and place it happened. Overall, I like the general impression and ideas you’ve put out. Other than some minor adjustments, keep up the good work. 👍👍😊😁😊👍
Excelente historia, me encanta, ya que es la primera vez que lee una historia de karna en Game of thrones, fuera preferido que fuera más larga, pero me confirmó, 👌👌👌😃😃🙂😊😊
The story so far is pretty interesting, especially the world building aspect. Though grammar and some Characterization might need some work. Overall, the story is pretty good. 👍 [img=recommend]
My disappointment is immeasurable. The author has some cool ideas, and I love the premise. However, it becomes so riddled with basic grammar mistakes from ch5 onward that I cannot enjoy reading it. It is somehow more frustrating than MTL. I cannot in good conscience recommend reading this.
The premise is there but it became confusing at times. Some paragraphs have grammatical errors and become convoluted due to to having too much words. Also too much p.o.v's that made this more confusing.
good story so far about karna born in a rhoynar ruling prince family before the war with valyria 🔥🔥🔥
complete which is rare ¡!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!