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Now this is the kind of MC I've been looking for. I'm already obsessed with this story Author keep doing an amazing job and I'll be right there to support you.🧛🏾♂️🖤
This is an edgy teens fantasy being a underground mysterious boss, taking revenge on your evil uncle who killed your parents, talking about how smart you are at every chapter, out of place comedy in every tense situation which ruins the chapter and gravity of the situation. While I do love a evil mc this is something that needs critiscm. Otherwise this is authors second book he has no problems with the basics and I am just saying from a readers point of view that I would read this just to pass time when I dont have anything decent to read. But it can improve so author dont let this demotivate you, I will be sticking around to see which direction this novel takes since it still has potential.
Wow! wow!..A standing ovation for the author of this novel. you had me intrigued, occupied, and even making calculations in my head, that's how engrossed I was while reading. I am highly impressed! 👏 👏 👏
This story has a main character who is pragmatic, and very, very cold-blooded. He will not hesitate to do what's necessary for his survival, and it's kind of a breath of fresh air to see a MC who commits 'evil' actions without remorse. If you're going to go, then run, right? If you're into intricate mind-games, interesting plot twists, and firm, calculating protagonists, this story'll do ya right!
A good gripping storyline and good writing both drawn me to this book .....so far read the first chapter and I can say it's a purely rollercoaster ride ....the character and the world background are perfectly created.....I really like the MC and love to fellow this book.... Kudos author
Have read 5 chaps of this novel. first I like the mc his very smart and has some sense in him to other stories that have a similar concept to this who had characters who are ignorant and cocky the authors say it is part of their charters but when it comes to the end of their stories they didn't even change. Okay the writing needs some improvement when it comes to action scenes sometimes it feels short and lacks some, I'm not saying that your writing is bad, and your grammar is alright but in case of miss typos recommended for you reread the chap before uploading. The story got some lore I'll say that the world-building is still confused about what setting this takes place idk probably just me, I might read more chaps to fully grasp what's going on. but overall a good read for killing time
I was thoroughly impressed. The plot was intricate and kept me engaged from start to finish. The characters were well-developed and their motivations were clear and believable. But what really stood out for me was the writing style. The author's descriptive language painted a vivid picture of the setting and the emotions of the characters. I felt like I was right there in the room with the protagonist, experiencing everything firsthand. The themes of fate, destiny, and the cutthroat world of business were explored in a thought-provoking and compelling way. The twist at the end was a complete shock and left me wanting more at end of chapter 5.
To be honest, I really like it. The Mc is cunning and such characters are enjoyable. They are like Batman. Anyways, the first person is alright and so far I am enjoying.
One of the best reads I've had in a long time. The main protagonist is deliciously evil, and the world is fascinating enough. I recommend it if you're looking for an interesting story with an Evil MC and a stimulating story.
Nothing to complain about writing quality. The story concept is most definitely interesting. It's not completely new in itself, has a little bit of different ideas but with its own unique twist. The MC and the different characters we have seen so far in volume 1 is what drew me to this story. You can easily get an idea on MC's personality from the synopsis and other reviews. What stood out to me is even with being scheming, controlling and rational, he hasn't forgotten to have fun and loosen up in his own way. I suppose the comedy tag's there for a reason (the MC doesn't joke around unironically). The author has somewhat managed to bring the other characters alive as well. It's too early to tell now, but how far he can take them remains to be seen. Would like to see them grow and develop individually, if they survive. All in all this could be the start of something remarkable. Good luck.
Oh gawd! This book was amazing! Didn't really like the 1st person perspective tho, but it ain't changing the fact that I love it! You my friend, just gave me some inspiration! Thanks man!
I am someone who believes writing many reviews are the secret to see how your favorite novel goes, & I myself LOVE to give reviews! But since I just read the first chapter I gotta say... I'm intrigued!!! Oh my God I already love the mc & I'm already excited to keep going and see what'll happen to him!!! Great work author! Keep going with this interesting novel, can't wait to see where this journey will go!! 💪💪
Great work! Fast paced - As you read, you will get suck into the story. I am loving the portrayal of the MC as well. Smart sensible, taking advantage etc
The use of first person perspective is phenomenal. The same can't be said for the characters. As they were the same overused tropes types. But the humor is best point of the novel. Love to see where it goes.
This book made my day,interesting concept and a powerful storyline.Highly recommend this book.It has a decent mc and a well structured plot.keep it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A really amazing enjoyable book to chillax and read, Totally worth it .. I absolutely love the amazing characters especially the smart, amazing mc... The book is really something worth reading
There's a lot of effort inside this writing style, even some concealed humour and always a kind word in AN The synopsis just throws the story much farther than the first chapters though! Definitely reading this, great work
I have reached the conclusion of seven chapters in this story, and I have an overall positive review of it. During my read, there was some difficulty following along with the dialogue at times. It was hard to differentiate the speakers, but I do appreciate the dialogue heavy story during the encounter. MC planned and used strategy to get the upper hand, and he was properly shown to have some semblance of intellect. The story did develop nicely, but I am curious on where the story goes. I'll keep it in my library, but I hope to get more information on how things work out with abilities. This is a rather solid read.
Wow the MC just draws readers in to understand his thinking process. Very well written story.
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED - Add this to your reading list now! I was literally getting chills while I was reading, the writing quality is over the top and the cliff hangers got me appreciating each upcoming chapter! Going back to reading now.
Finally a good refreshing book, with a smart, cunning mc, AND (depending on your world views) also evil (definitely evil) , not in a barbarian way but more of Aizen form bleach way. Overall I highly recommend reading this book.
It is so great! Literally i read the whole thing in one go. It is awesome. Waiting for more chapters!!! Excellent job author!
Author's mandatory self 5-star here. I will use this space as an FAQ to give you a heads-up about what to expect. You can also reply to this and I will answer your questions. 1) There's no harem. In fact, there might not even be any romance. I do have a love interest planned but... given the MC's personality at the start of the story, forming genuine relationships won't be easy. 2) The story does follow a weak-to-strong format but the MC does kinda overpower everyone using underhanded schemes and tactics so this story technically fits into the OP theme for the fantasy carnival. 3) The story's main focal point will be the mission world where the MC is sent along with other hero candidates. Each mission world will be a battle royale against the other candidates as well as uprooting the forces of the demon lord in that dimension. Plenty of action and scheming to go around. 4) This is my second decent attempt at a book so expect decent quality. Of course, I still haven't perfected my writing style and am still trying my best to improve every day, so there should be an upwards trend in quality as the story goes on. 5) If there are any complaints about the story or if there are any tips for me to improve my writing, please feel free to share them. Just don't be rude. 6) That's all for now, I hope everyone enjoys the story.
I genuinely love the concept behind this story, all the characters are great, especially the MC. a job well-done author because am enjoying your story so far even if the chapters aren't many yet[img=update][img=update]
Wow. This is one of a kind read. The main character has such sleek, finesse in dealing through all the obstacles and has such an indifferent, cold way of doing it I'm super impressed. The writing is crisp, compact and engrossing from the get go. You get the proper amount of information nor to get confused or feel overfed with information. And it's really intriguing, I can't wait to read more! Great work author, I'm truly impressed!
a sheeesshh.. its an interesting story, although its still a few chapters in, I'd say im hooked👍
Only a review for the first 5 chapters and I got to say I really like the story already, especially the MC. A smart MC is always a GOOD MC. Like the fact that we are thrown right into the action. The pacing is great so far. The only thing left is more chapters, please. Since it is still the first few chapters I can't comment on world-building.
I liked the story so far. It is interesting to read as you read a chapter through a chapter. Character design is also amazing. He is intelligent, cruel, and schemer(in his own way). The nickname "Venomous Snake" is unique but good... The first 5 chapters did attract my interest and I want to read more.. I recommend reading this book.
An awesome book about the MC going to an Academy but what I loved the most was the MC's thoughts and reactions, especially when he took revenge~ The Author has done an incredible job in writing this book! Keep it up Author ^^ [img=recommend][img=update]
Interesting plot. The characters, especially the lead is fun to follow. There’s so much going on and so much to look forward to with this. An interesting story. From Review swap.
Now this is the kind of MC I've been looking for. I'm already obsessed with this story Author keep doing an amazing job and I'll be right there to support you.🧛🏾♂️🖤
This is an edgy teens fantasy being a underground mysterious boss, taking revenge on your evil uncle who killed your parents, talking about how smart you are at every chapter, out of place comedy in every tense situation which ruins the chapter and gravity of the situation. While I do love a evil mc this is something that needs critiscm. Otherwise this is authors second book he has no problems with the basics and I am just saying from a readers point of view that I would read this just to pass time when I dont have anything decent to read. But it can improve so author dont let this demotivate you, I will be sticking around to see which direction this novel takes since it still has potential.
Wow! wow!..A standing ovation for the author of this novel. you had me intrigued, occupied, and even making calculations in my head, that's how engrossed I was while reading. I am highly impressed! 👏 👏 👏
This story has a main character who is pragmatic, and very, very cold-blooded. He will not hesitate to do what's necessary for his survival, and it's kind of a breath of fresh air to see a MC who commits 'evil' actions without remorse. If you're going to go, then run, right? If you're into intricate mind-games, interesting plot twists, and firm, calculating protagonists, this story'll do ya right!
A good gripping storyline and good writing both drawn me to this book .....so far read the first chapter and I can say it's a purely rollercoaster ride ....the character and the world background are perfectly created.....I really like the MC and love to fellow this book.... Kudos author
Have read 5 chaps of this novel. first I like the mc his very smart and has some sense in him to other stories that have a similar concept to this who had characters who are ignorant and cocky the authors say it is part of their charters but when it comes to the end of their stories they didn't even change. Okay the writing needs some improvement when it comes to action scenes sometimes it feels short and lacks some, I'm not saying that your writing is bad, and your grammar is alright but in case of miss typos recommended for you reread the chap before uploading. The story got some lore I'll say that the world-building is still confused about what setting this takes place idk probably just me, I might read more chaps to fully grasp what's going on. but overall a good read for killing time
I was thoroughly impressed. The plot was intricate and kept me engaged from start to finish. The characters were well-developed and their motivations were clear and believable. But what really stood out for me was the writing style. The author's descriptive language painted a vivid picture of the setting and the emotions of the characters. I felt like I was right there in the room with the protagonist, experiencing everything firsthand. The themes of fate, destiny, and the cutthroat world of business were explored in a thought-provoking and compelling way. The twist at the end was a complete shock and left me wanting more at end of chapter 5.
To be honest, I really like it. The Mc is cunning and such characters are enjoyable. They are like Batman. Anyways, the first person is alright and so far I am enjoying.
One of the best reads I've had in a long time. The main protagonist is deliciously evil, and the world is fascinating enough. I recommend it if you're looking for an interesting story with an Evil MC and a stimulating story.
Nothing to complain about writing quality. The story concept is most definitely interesting. It's not completely new in itself, has a little bit of different ideas but with its own unique twist. The MC and the different characters we have seen so far in volume 1 is what drew me to this story. You can easily get an idea on MC's personality from the synopsis and other reviews. What stood out to me is even with being scheming, controlling and rational, he hasn't forgotten to have fun and loosen up in his own way. I suppose the comedy tag's there for a reason (the MC doesn't joke around unironically). The author has somewhat managed to bring the other characters alive as well. It's too early to tell now, but how far he can take them remains to be seen. Would like to see them grow and develop individually, if they survive. All in all this could be the start of something remarkable. Good luck.
Oh gawd! This book was amazing! Didn't really like the 1st person perspective tho, but it ain't changing the fact that I love it! You my friend, just gave me some inspiration! Thanks man!
I am someone who believes writing many reviews are the secret to see how your favorite novel goes, & I myself LOVE to give reviews! But since I just read the first chapter I gotta say... I'm intrigued!!! Oh my God I already love the mc & I'm already excited to keep going and see what'll happen to him!!! Great work author! Keep going with this interesting novel, can't wait to see where this journey will go!! 💪💪
Great work! Fast paced - As you read, you will get suck into the story. I am loving the portrayal of the MC as well. Smart sensible, taking advantage etc
The use of first person perspective is phenomenal. The same can't be said for the characters. As they were the same overused tropes types. But the humor is best point of the novel. Love to see where it goes.
This book made my day,interesting concept and a powerful storyline.Highly recommend this book.It has a decent mc and a well structured plot.keep it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A really amazing enjoyable book to chillax and read, Totally worth it .. I absolutely love the amazing characters especially the smart, amazing mc... The book is really something worth reading
There's a lot of effort inside this writing style, even some concealed humour and always a kind word in AN The synopsis just throws the story much farther than the first chapters though! Definitely reading this, great work
I have reached the conclusion of seven chapters in this story, and I have an overall positive review of it. During my read, there was some difficulty following along with the dialogue at times. It was hard to differentiate the speakers, but I do appreciate the dialogue heavy story during the encounter. MC planned and used strategy to get the upper hand, and he was properly shown to have some semblance of intellect. The story did develop nicely, but I am curious on where the story goes. I'll keep it in my library, but I hope to get more information on how things work out with abilities. This is a rather solid read.
Wow the MC just draws readers in to understand his thinking process. Very well written story.
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED - Add this to your reading list now! I was literally getting chills while I was reading, the writing quality is over the top and the cliff hangers got me appreciating each upcoming chapter! Going back to reading now.
Finally a good refreshing book, with a smart, cunning mc, AND (depending on your world views) also evil (definitely evil) , not in a barbarian way but more of Aizen form bleach way. Overall I highly recommend reading this book.
It is so great! Literally i read the whole thing in one go. It is awesome. Waiting for more chapters!!! Excellent job author!
Author's mandatory self 5-star here. I will use this space as an FAQ to give you a heads-up about what to expect. You can also reply to this and I will answer your questions. 1) There's no harem. In fact, there might not even be any romance. I do have a love interest planned but... given the MC's personality at the start of the story, forming genuine relationships won't be easy. 2) The story does follow a weak-to-strong format but the MC does kinda overpower everyone using underhanded schemes and tactics so this story technically fits into the OP theme for the fantasy carnival. 3) The story's main focal point will be the mission world where the MC is sent along with other hero candidates. Each mission world will be a battle royale against the other candidates as well as uprooting the forces of the demon lord in that dimension. Plenty of action and scheming to go around. 4) This is my second decent attempt at a book so expect decent quality. Of course, I still haven't perfected my writing style and am still trying my best to improve every day, so there should be an upwards trend in quality as the story goes on. 5) If there are any complaints about the story or if there are any tips for me to improve my writing, please feel free to share them. Just don't be rude. 6) That's all for now, I hope everyone enjoys the story.
I genuinely love the concept behind this story, all the characters are great, especially the MC. a job well-done author because am enjoying your story so far even if the chapters aren't many yet[img=update][img=update]
Wow. This is one of a kind read. The main character has such sleek, finesse in dealing through all the obstacles and has such an indifferent, cold way of doing it I'm super impressed. The writing is crisp, compact and engrossing from the get go. You get the proper amount of information nor to get confused or feel overfed with information. And it's really intriguing, I can't wait to read more! Great work author, I'm truly impressed!
a sheeesshh.. its an interesting story, although its still a few chapters in, I'd say im hooked👍
Only a review for the first 5 chapters and I got to say I really like the story already, especially the MC. A smart MC is always a GOOD MC. Like the fact that we are thrown right into the action. The pacing is great so far. The only thing left is more chapters, please. Since it is still the first few chapters I can't comment on world-building.
I liked the story so far. It is interesting to read as you read a chapter through a chapter. Character design is also amazing. He is intelligent, cruel, and schemer(in his own way). The nickname "Venomous Snake" is unique but good... The first 5 chapters did attract my interest and I want to read more.. I recommend reading this book.
An awesome book about the MC going to an Academy but what I loved the most was the MC's thoughts and reactions, especially when he took revenge~ The Author has done an incredible job in writing this book! Keep it up Author ^^ [img=recommend][img=update]
Interesting plot. The characters, especially the lead is fun to follow. There’s so much going on and so much to look forward to with this. An interesting story. From Review swap.