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I like this Novel a lot because it's not a typical story with op mc getting a blessing a have it all without doing much. I also like how the mc is being cold-hearted with some sweet scenes where he shows some of his feelings as well that he is smart. I agree that the readers have to chew a few bitter chapters in the beginning were he does what he has to, but we don't want him to do it. Nevertheless give it a shot 👍🏼
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Mc is insulted and degraded and trash talk by mere servants despite the mc being written as intelligent from what I read so far he is completely stupid. For character development? Sure we could say that but why did you go with the mc being insult/degraded way to develop his character that just makes me feel like your a m author. By chapter 21 he has become 7 and he should be able to have an idea how to pressure, expose his uncle since he’s written by the author as one of the most intelligent humans in his previous life. He didn’t have to hide his power and intelligence too as he could be more favored by his family and be protected and he would be trusted and such which in a way he could use to take advantage to pressure his uncle from committing his plans. Despite being one of the most intelligent humans and having a second life experience he is retard
the book so far is great, people say the start isn't that good but I didn't mind it much
Please complete the novel dear author and do not abandon it halfway. I really like this work. I can't say much about the grammar but I can say that the story is totally entertaining.
I stumbled upon this ongoing WebNovel and I'm so glad I did! The author's updates are consistent and I always look forward to the next chapter. The world-building is incredibly detailed and immersive, and the characters are complex and multifaceted. With each chapter, the plot thickens and leaves me on the edge of my seat, eagerly anticipating what's to come. Even though the story isn't finished yet, I'm already invested in the outcome and can't wait to see how it all ends. I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone looking for a thrilling ongoing read!
Review at ch 40: Firstly I highly dislike the cliche of intelligent but lazy. Even if someone is intelligent, he can't become top of the world, do phd really fast, without any hard work. Lazy people can't do so. Intelligent but lazy is just a fantasy, and so I dislike it. Secondly I dislike how ethan (mc) didn't told anyone about his uncle's schemes, and could have been killed when he fainted for days. Even after waking up, he didn't told anyone, given that he could fall into such defenseless state again. So I dislike that part. Apart from that, the story is alright, just average.
I started reading this novel yesterday (all hail limited free reading!) cause it was always suggested to me. I generally don't like harem so I usually ignore novels with those tags but I'd recently been giving some of them a shot and did so for this as well. I'm caught up and I was actually surprised at how good of a story it is. The grammar is excellent, and the plot got me hooked from the first chapter. I was very intrigued by his lazy nature and I like the way the story flows so naturally. So far, the harem tag has had zero effect on the story and based on the writing quality, I think the author might be able to pull off a harem that isn't irritating. Keep it up, Author 👍🏽
It is one of the best story i have ever read Story development not so fast and not slow i am loving it 😍😍🥰💞🥰
I really like background and overall story but I fend off the laziness of the mc. And I am not into laze mc's novel so dropping the novel.
i really like this novel, but please can u stop making mc passive and keep waiting for his uncle to make a move, i mean he got the advantage which is he knows that his uncle is scheming against him so why not take advantage of that. always please stop doing the the little misunderstandings like the one which his sister and mother thinks he peed on his bed also i just dont understand why his family think that Shadow reaper or whatever name (archer guy) missed his shot? i meant inst albaer said that guy 100% chance so why no one notices mc? i like the world building, but the uncle thingy just keeps dragging better move on to new arc and start his journey to the new and exciting world this my only opinion
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Writing Quality- Good not many mistakes. Story- Started off slow but around chapter 30 it picks up. Characters- Kind of lacking to me doesn’t really focus to much on any character in particular. If you’re hoping for an mc who loves his new family im sorry to say that it hasn’t happend yet as of chapter 50. Mc- Smart, decisive, not lazy as the description says. So far the only time he’s been lazy is when he’s a baby which makes sense but other than that can’t really think of much. Good story for when you got nothing else to read, would be different if it had more chapters I can see myself binge reading it over night.
I am enjoying this story and excited about what is to happen. [img=update]
I'm only up to chapter 32. So far, and I'm enjoying the story; the main character appears smart, intelligent, and decisive, all of which are characteristics of a great MC. The story appears to be well-planned, and the character designs are solid, but there is a good amount of room for growth through better descriptions and more engaging character behaviors. To truly elevate this story, I believe the author must establish compelling relationships between the MC and the other characters through genuine and engaging interactions. Also, there need to be numerous situations in which our MC showcases his supremacy, hehe. (I am not a huge fan of hiding in the shadows forever) Nevertheless, the story is heading in the right direction. Even though author-chan doesn't need it (haha), I'm sending my best his or her way.
Its a story about a lazy genius, who rebirthed into a fantasy world. He’s still a genius, but he doesn’t act like it because *spoiler*. The writing quality is quite good, and there’s only a few minor mistakes that won’t affect your reading experience. There seems to be a lot of potential within this story, but whether the author can pull create another piece of garbage, or make a masterpiece is in the air for now. Overall, seems like a decent story.
If you have not added this book to your library, then you should. Author - Nim is amazing with words. The storyline is well-developed. The book is smooth and easy to read. His grammar is excellent, but best of all, he made me laugh.
Overall its good novel and updated are frequent and you can try it and mc is the intelligent until now and just request to author san I want mc is not be low key and strong acting weak.
Pretty good, the 1st chapter especially explains everything well, keep it up. i look forward to seeing how great the other chapters will be, the world building and character develops, i am sure you will execute them well.
Great just as expected! First chapter shows mc clearly and sets up a foundation for the rest of the novel. good luck!
well mc is as lazy as i am but he has talent to back it up but i don't:( so we got a mc who is lazy, unmotivated, and has no ambition and well this type of character almost always makes the story boring but in the latest chapter it can be seen that mc in future maybe begin to realise that if he wants lazy time then he has to earn it buy working hard and fighting back. i hope there will be good fighting scenes.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! 16. This is by no means, copied. It's original.
The plot is actually really good, The Story telling, character Design, and emotions have also been described perfectly, Let's see what future Chapters have in hold for us .
Okay, I like the general idea of the story and I could see this turning into a decent story with some good editing. Namely the punctuation and the grammar. There is a lot of things I caught just reading though it, I would go through and read it aloud to yourself tk help catch writing mistakes and issues with the flow of the story. Other than that? I would add more detail. For example, the ruins that were found in the begining. Its a small thing, but it proves my point. You mentioned how the ruins were a big deal and how everyone was excited, but you didnt really show that with the characters which makes them seem very 2d. Not only that but as a reader I’m left with questions, like what do the ruins look like? Is it in the desert? Where are the ruins located? I am not saying you need to do a info dump by any means, but adding bits of information to help paint the picture of the story you are telling. Overall I liked what I read so far, I would just really go through and add more detail. World building is one of the most important things you can do for your book. Keep up the good work!
Me halfway through ch 1: "The aliens are coming* Me after ch 2 : great isekai. toss in the library.
Nice book author, i am impressed with your writing and creativity.. I hope you keep writing and don't get tired. above all, everything about the books is notable, starting from the characters down to the plot. Five stars to you!
This novel will have some comedy. Well, I will at least try. Politics, royalty, nobility, magic, and much more! The MC is also interesting in my opinion and I can only say that I will do my best. Thanks to anyone who will be supporting me.
I like this Novel a lot because it's not a typical story with op mc getting a blessing a have it all without doing much. I also like how the mc is being cold-hearted with some sweet scenes where he shows some of his feelings as well that he is smart. I agree that the readers have to chew a few bitter chapters in the beginning were he does what he has to, but we don't want him to do it. Nevertheless give it a shot 👍🏼
Revelar spoiler Mc is insulted and degraded and trash talk by mere servants despite the mc being written as intelligent from what I read so far he is completely stupid. For character development? Sure we could say that but why did you go with the mc being insult/degraded way to develop his character that just makes me feel like your a m author. By chapter 21 he has become 7 and he should be able to have an idea how to pressure, expose his uncle since he’s written by the author as one of the most intelligent humans in his previous life. He didn’t have to hide his power and intelligence too as he could be more favored by his family and be protected and he would be trusted and such which in a way he could use to take advantage to pressure his uncle from committing his plans. Despite being one of the most intelligent humans and having a second life experience he is retard
the book so far is great, people say the start isn't that good but I didn't mind it much
Please complete the novel dear author and do not abandon it halfway. I really like this work. I can't say much about the grammar but I can say that the story is totally entertaining.
I stumbled upon this ongoing WebNovel and I'm so glad I did! The author's updates are consistent and I always look forward to the next chapter. The world-building is incredibly detailed and immersive, and the characters are complex and multifaceted. With each chapter, the plot thickens and leaves me on the edge of my seat, eagerly anticipating what's to come. Even though the story isn't finished yet, I'm already invested in the outcome and can't wait to see how it all ends. I highly recommend this WebNovel to anyone looking for a thrilling ongoing read!
Review at ch 40: Firstly I highly dislike the cliche of intelligent but lazy. Even if someone is intelligent, he can't become top of the world, do phd really fast, without any hard work. Lazy people can't do so. Intelligent but lazy is just a fantasy, and so I dislike it. Secondly I dislike how ethan (mc) didn't told anyone about his uncle's schemes, and could have been killed when he fainted for days. Even after waking up, he didn't told anyone, given that he could fall into such defenseless state again. So I dislike that part. Apart from that, the story is alright, just average.
I started reading this novel yesterday (all hail limited free reading!) cause it was always suggested to me. I generally don't like harem so I usually ignore novels with those tags but I'd recently been giving some of them a shot and did so for this as well. I'm caught up and I was actually surprised at how good of a story it is. The grammar is excellent, and the plot got me hooked from the first chapter. I was very intrigued by his lazy nature and I like the way the story flows so naturally. So far, the harem tag has had zero effect on the story and based on the writing quality, I think the author might be able to pull off a harem that isn't irritating. Keep it up, Author 👍🏽
It is one of the best story i have ever read Story development not so fast and not slow i am loving it 😍😍🥰💞🥰
I really like background and overall story but I fend off the laziness of the mc. And I am not into laze mc's novel so dropping the novel.
i really like this novel, but please can u stop making mc passive and keep waiting for his uncle to make a move, i mean he got the advantage which is he knows that his uncle is scheming against him so why not take advantage of that. always please stop doing the the little misunderstandings like the one which his sister and mother thinks he peed on his bed also i just dont understand why his family think that Shadow reaper or whatever name (archer guy) missed his shot? i meant inst albaer said that guy 100% chance so why no one notices mc? i like the world building, but the uncle thingy just keeps dragging better move on to new arc and start his journey to the new and exciting world this my only opinion
Revelar spoiler Writing Quality- Good not many mistakes. Story- Started off slow but around chapter 30 it picks up. Characters- Kind of lacking to me doesn’t really focus to much on any character in particular. If you’re hoping for an mc who loves his new family im sorry to say that it hasn’t happend yet as of chapter 50. Mc- Smart, decisive, not lazy as the description says. So far the only time he’s been lazy is when he’s a baby which makes sense but other than that can’t really think of much. Good story for when you got nothing else to read, would be different if it had more chapters I can see myself binge reading it over night.
I am enjoying this story and excited about what is to happen. [img=update]
I'm only up to chapter 32. So far, and I'm enjoying the story; the main character appears smart, intelligent, and decisive, all of which are characteristics of a great MC. The story appears to be well-planned, and the character designs are solid, but there is a good amount of room for growth through better descriptions and more engaging character behaviors. To truly elevate this story, I believe the author must establish compelling relationships between the MC and the other characters through genuine and engaging interactions. Also, there need to be numerous situations in which our MC showcases his supremacy, hehe. (I am not a huge fan of hiding in the shadows forever) Nevertheless, the story is heading in the right direction. Even though author-chan doesn't need it (haha), I'm sending my best his or her way.
Its a story about a lazy genius, who rebirthed into a fantasy world. He’s still a genius, but he doesn’t act like it because *spoiler*. The writing quality is quite good, and there’s only a few minor mistakes that won’t affect your reading experience. There seems to be a lot of potential within this story, but whether the author can pull create another piece of garbage, or make a masterpiece is in the air for now. Overall, seems like a decent story.
If you have not added this book to your library, then you should. Author - Nim is amazing with words. The storyline is well-developed. The book is smooth and easy to read. His grammar is excellent, but best of all, he made me laugh.
Overall its good novel and updated are frequent and you can try it and mc is the intelligent until now and just request to author san I want mc is not be low key and strong acting weak.
Pretty good, the 1st chapter especially explains everything well, keep it up. i look forward to seeing how great the other chapters will be, the world building and character develops, i am sure you will execute them well.
Great just as expected! First chapter shows mc clearly and sets up a foundation for the rest of the novel. good luck!
well mc is as lazy as i am but he has talent to back it up but i don't:( so we got a mc who is lazy, unmotivated, and has no ambition and well this type of character almost always makes the story boring but in the latest chapter it can be seen that mc in future maybe begin to realise that if he wants lazy time then he has to earn it buy working hard and fighting back. i hope there will be good fighting scenes.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! 16. This is by no means, copied. It's original.
The plot is actually really good, The Story telling, character Design, and emotions have also been described perfectly, Let's see what future Chapters have in hold for us .
Okay, I like the general idea of the story and I could see this turning into a decent story with some good editing. Namely the punctuation and the grammar. There is a lot of things I caught just reading though it, I would go through and read it aloud to yourself tk help catch writing mistakes and issues with the flow of the story. Other than that? I would add more detail. For example, the ruins that were found in the begining. Its a small thing, but it proves my point. You mentioned how the ruins were a big deal and how everyone was excited, but you didnt really show that with the characters which makes them seem very 2d. Not only that but as a reader I’m left with questions, like what do the ruins look like? Is it in the desert? Where are the ruins located? I am not saying you need to do a info dump by any means, but adding bits of information to help paint the picture of the story you are telling. Overall I liked what I read so far, I would just really go through and add more detail. World building is one of the most important things you can do for your book. Keep up the good work!
Me halfway through ch 1: "The aliens are coming* Me after ch 2 : great isekai. toss in the library.
Nice book author, i am impressed with your writing and creativity.. I hope you keep writing and don't get tired. above all, everything about the books is notable, starting from the characters down to the plot. Five stars to you!
This novel will have some comedy. Well, I will at least try. Politics, royalty, nobility, magic, and much more! The MC is also interesting in my opinion and I can only say that I will do my best. Thanks to anyone who will be supporting me.
Author did you drop this?