The Looming Death

LV 4

DamnedChicken

Shameless author here- Treat this review as a Q and A section. I'll try my best to answer any queries regarding the novel. Upload schedule- 7 chapters per week (At the least). +) For other basic information regarding the novel. You should read the auxiliary chapter.

LV 12

RipGuilt

The author is not at the level just yet. The writing quality is good, not the best nor unreadable. The story is fast-paced in starting chapters, but the author says it is intentional. The plot is the best part of the novel if you ask me. The mystery is prevalent throughout the chapters. Answering some questions, but leaving most of them unanswered for the story forward. I like this story, I'll be here for all of it.

LV 14

ZeroMorningstar

Hmm it is a very good story. I am looking forward to how the story turns out

LV 3

Grace_Harley1

This is a really nice book, I love the character design and world background Good work

LV 15

Galanar

Your writing quality is good. There are not many errors of note, except the occasional typo and small structure error. The updates are daily, so no complaints here. I feel your story might be a little fast-paced, but it's probably the way you write. I prefer a slower pace :) The characters seem well thought-out, although still very mysterious. The world-making is where I think you stumbled a bit. I feel like there are not enough details about it. It might just be because that is later in the chapters, but I feel like the first 3 should have a bit more of it. Other than that, it's a good read :) Keep up the good work :)

LV 12

prajnya_shriyan

Really interesting plot. The character, plot and scenes are very well written. The father's character is really mysterious. Keep up the good work.

LV 11

Haremphobic_01

I have read until the latest chapter. And I like it but I have something to say don't make him kind to strangers instantly like why did he care about adventurers. They are annoying If I say so. There work is also done They must live him.

LV 12

10th_immortal

man my real name is the name of the main character. reading it will be awkward asf 5 star for havng the same name tho

LV 3

CGiverny

Interesting story. I enjoyed the world-building and way the mc was written. The author has done an amazing job there. Action was also okay too. The plot was really good and full of mystery. The only thing was descriptions. It was lacking a little and made it a little hard to picture things. Otherwise, good work author. Really enjoyed reading something fast-paced

LV 1

David_Shandler

Ngl, very good story. The only thing that i think the author could improve on is the writing quality, and I look forward to what's gonna happen later. I'd say that from now on spend more time making the language sound better and then go back and fix the chapters that you've already wrote. This has potential to be a really popular novel. 👍

LV 3

BrightBrain256

I love the MC Arsh, he leaves my blood boiling in anticipation. A fun book to read and a MASTERPIECE in the making.

LV 13

Junni_MC

This is a very good book, I love the design of the characters and the background of the world. Good job the story so far is interesting to read, and I like how the story is going.

LV 4

Moonwriting

Well, I would like to say I love your work so far...I like the way you knitted up your character and creatively established it in the story. And about writing, I'll say you are much better than me as a beginner...y🤣😂🤪

LV 1

TheOmnipotentOne

Feels great. Has a great plot but without spoiling anything let me mention a few things. 1. Great story. 2. Mysterious father. 3.Mysterious mother. 4. Mysterious family background. Well for whoever likes the points mentioned above can try the story whithout any hesitation. This story is just perfect for whoever likes the points mentioned above.

LV 2

Rainandstorm

I really love the face paced story... it really catches the reader attention and most of all, I do like the mystery too.. keep it up author 😘

LV 14

ThePotatoKing

It's a really interesting story. I really like the way the author builds up a sense of mystery and deals with unraveling the plot. The characters are really engaging and that is always a plus. While the grammar and writing flow still had room for improvement, the current level is good enough for an enjoyable read. Best of luck author. Remember, practice makes perfect.