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Good book. If not for minor grammatical errors I'd say it's a potential masterpiece. Hope to see better editing as the chapters progress
Writing quality is good however that could be improved further with grammarly check. Your stability of updates are not good right now,they should be improved. You should write one chapter daily at the very least. Other than that your novel is very good. I like it.
I really enjoyed just the few chapters i read and i know i'm stuck with this novel. It's just so interesting and i'm rooting for Dusk and Mitch
The first chapter drew me in because it's not your usual vampire stories. Well written, though the writer could work on the description better! all in all a great read.
I craved something new, something different, something insane and here, I got just what I wanted! I am really sitting right and waiting as the book progresses!
This novel is very intriguing enough to be recommended in webnovel. I love your novel writing pace, skills and knowledge you are really a brilliant author.🥰🥰
Hehe I'm curious to know whether this messy author can warm the Vampire's cold heart moreso the fact that they belong to different races.
The story is good, with an interesting , new plot. The story started with a good pace. I am looking forward to seeing the interaction between Our handsome Vampire and our messy author( Mitchell). And she tame a wild beast🤭. Keep going with your work!
Splendid interactions, Awesome scenarios, Good grammar, Amazing plot, what else? I enjoyed reading it and it was all worthwhile having fun while reading. Also, don't stop writing. The best is yet to come 😊
The book is really intruding I enjoyed the chapter that I've read, can't wait for the next update. Keep it up author.
Good book. If not for minor grammatical errors I'd say it's a potential masterpiece. Hope to see better editing as the chapters progress
Writing quality is good however that could be improved further with grammarly check. Your stability of updates are not good right now,they should be improved. You should write one chapter daily at the very least. Other than that your novel is very good. I like it.
I really enjoyed just the few chapters i read and i know i'm stuck with this novel. It's just so interesting and i'm rooting for Dusk and Mitch
The first chapter drew me in because it's not your usual vampire stories. Well written, though the writer could work on the description better! all in all a great read.
I craved something new, something different, something insane and here, I got just what I wanted! I am really sitting right and waiting as the book progresses!
This novel is very intriguing enough to be recommended in webnovel. I love your novel writing pace, skills and knowledge you are really a brilliant author.🥰🥰
Hehe I'm curious to know whether this messy author can warm the Vampire's cold heart moreso the fact that they belong to different races.
The story is good, with an interesting , new plot. The story started with a good pace. I am looking forward to seeing the interaction between Our handsome Vampire and our messy author( Mitchell). And she tame a wild beast🤭. Keep going with your work!
Splendid interactions, Awesome scenarios, Good grammar, Amazing plot, what else? I enjoyed reading it and it was all worthwhile having fun while reading. Also, don't stop writing. The best is yet to come 😊
The book is really intruding I enjoyed the chapter that I've read, can't wait for the next update. Keep it up author.