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Everything about this story is great, almost. The plot, which is stated over and over again is just very one dimensional. potentially its not. with a bit of character development it wouldn't be. but it doesn't seem the MC will change. this is who he is. Uncaring sociopath who's turned a bit insane from death. Him finding friendship and a loving father would change that you think, and while it has shown glimmers of hope, ultimately he falls back into his ways. single minded purpose, stripped of anything interesting, uncaring, one friend. no loyalties, hateful world view. I guess its preference but thats not my type of MC. ill stick around a few more chapters in hopes of actually character development but it feels like wishful thinking at the moment. It is a great story excluding the MC in my eyes so giving it a chance isn't a bad idea.
I can't believe I hadn't read such a wonderful Naruto ff. Read it, man ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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very good story I like the fact that he has no bloodline but a clan and no cheats other than perfect recall and he acts logicaly please keep going
Brilliant so far, can’t wait to see MC’s desperate struggle to survive as the world gets more and more dangerous. All I hope is that he doesn’t get overwhelming powerful like in 99% of all naruto fics.
Theres not much subtlety in the writing. Mc is kind of a sociopath, feels awfully flat at times, but the characters do feel internally consistent with their background. Pacing is good so far, but story feels like a reading a speed run to the endgame level cap. Good thing the author left out systems , ROB , and non cannon crossovers.
im writing it when 18 chapters were released. the book is very good. First of all update stability is perfectly fine without any hiccups as far as i have noticed. When a certain rank is reached we get a bonus chapter too which is a nice extra. Writing style is very nice with good grammar. Now onto the plot itself, its d*mn great. The lives in a former decent clan, now just a family with some good land, with his father, step mother and step siblings. At the start i got some chinese vibes especially since they bullied the pre-transfer mc, but luckily the author is a cool dude and isnt like that. The mc only has a small cheat which is pretty good but nowhere close to things like a sharingan which makes the story a lot better imo since the mc has to work hard. He isn't some supreme genius but has his affinities with certain techniques. The world is naruto before the 2nd war and so far the 'canon' hasnt changed. thats it so go read already
This is good novel. You should read it. It is absolutely recommended. You can find Mc with good development, good pace, no OP characters from the start. I hope the author can continue this amazing job
How many floors should a bag of rice stand, how many floors should a bag of rice stand, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should a bag of rice be washed, each grain is muddy, who gave you a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! !
caught my attention until now the protagonist is not a son of heaven or anything like that, he has things in which he stands out and others in which he does not, which I see as logical and makes me curious as to how the story will develop I also want to see what is special about your clan and what it can offer you in addition to its elemental affinities. there are a lot of them that are never used
Honestly this is a very good fanfic better then most of the ones out there and the story development and mc are very interesting 10/10
Outstanding the writing quality is excellent and our mc is interesting looking forward to seeing where this is headed writing quality-5 update-5 development-5 design-3 (IDK what the characters look like besides one) background-5
since the auther wants a sophisticated reaview i am writing this Wrinting and grammer the grammer in this story is top nocth i have not seen a single grammer error up until now and i am writting this at 21 chapter. Updates and length the updates is very stable 1 chapter a day and the boredom goes away i am sorry i just needed to do that joke but i need to come back to the point yeah the length is also accepteple Story develepment the plot amazing you will hooked up at the first two chapter without much spoilers. its about the mc who got reborn into a kid he lives in a former decent clan, now just a family with some good land, with his father, step mother and step siblings. At the start i got some chinese vibes especially since they bullied the pre-transfer mc, but luckily the author is a cool dude and isnt like that. The mc only has a small cheat which is pretty good but nowhere close to things like a sharingan which makes the story a lot better imo since the mc has to work hard. He isn't some supreme genius but has his affinities with certain techniques. The world is naruto before the 2nd war and so far the 'canon' hasnt changed. thats it so go read already we want more chapters auther but are there gonna be lemons and harem or romance the naruto world has alot of chicks you know (:
Everything about this story is great, almost. The plot, which is stated over and over again is just very one dimensional. potentially its not. with a bit of character development it wouldn't be. but it doesn't seem the MC will change. this is who he is. Uncaring sociopath who's turned a bit insane from death. Him finding friendship and a loving father would change that you think, and while it has shown glimmers of hope, ultimately he falls back into his ways. single minded purpose, stripped of anything interesting, uncaring, one friend. no loyalties, hateful world view. I guess its preference but thats not my type of MC. ill stick around a few more chapters in hopes of actually character development but it feels like wishful thinking at the moment. It is a great story excluding the MC in my eyes so giving it a chance isn't a bad idea.
I can't believe I hadn't read such a wonderful Naruto ff. Read it, man ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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very good story I like the fact that he has no bloodline but a clan and no cheats other than perfect recall and he acts logicaly please keep going
Brilliant so far, can’t wait to see MC’s desperate struggle to survive as the world gets more and more dangerous. All I hope is that he doesn’t get overwhelming powerful like in 99% of all naruto fics.
Theres not much subtlety in the writing. Mc is kind of a sociopath, feels awfully flat at times, but the characters do feel internally consistent with their background. Pacing is good so far, but story feels like a reading a speed run to the endgame level cap. Good thing the author left out systems , ROB , and non cannon crossovers.
im writing it when 18 chapters were released. the book is very good. First of all update stability is perfectly fine without any hiccups as far as i have noticed. When a certain rank is reached we get a bonus chapter too which is a nice extra. Writing style is very nice with good grammar. Now onto the plot itself, its d*mn great. The lives in a former decent clan, now just a family with some good land, with his father, step mother and step siblings. At the start i got some chinese vibes especially since they bullied the pre-transfer mc, but luckily the author is a cool dude and isnt like that. The mc only has a small cheat which is pretty good but nowhere close to things like a sharingan which makes the story a lot better imo since the mc has to work hard. He isn't some supreme genius but has his affinities with certain techniques. The world is naruto before the 2nd war and so far the 'canon' hasnt changed. thats it so go read already
This is good novel. You should read it. It is absolutely recommended. You can find Mc with good development, good pace, no OP characters from the start. I hope the author can continue this amazing job
How many floors should a bag of rice stand, how many floors should a bag of rice stand, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should a bag of rice be washed, each grain is muddy, who gave you a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! !
caught my attention until now the protagonist is not a son of heaven or anything like that, he has things in which he stands out and others in which he does not, which I see as logical and makes me curious as to how the story will develop I also want to see what is special about your clan and what it can offer you in addition to its elemental affinities. there are a lot of them that are never used
Honestly this is a very good fanfic better then most of the ones out there and the story development and mc are very interesting 10/10
Outstanding the writing quality is excellent and our mc is interesting looking forward to seeing where this is headed writing quality-5 update-5 development-5 design-3 (IDK what the characters look like besides one) background-5
since the auther wants a sophisticated reaview i am writing this Wrinting and grammer the grammer in this story is top nocth i have not seen a single grammer error up until now and i am writting this at 21 chapter. Updates and length the updates is very stable 1 chapter a day and the boredom goes away i am sorry i just needed to do that joke but i need to come back to the point yeah the length is also accepteple Story develepment the plot amazing you will hooked up at the first two chapter without much spoilers. its about the mc who got reborn into a kid he lives in a former decent clan, now just a family with some good land, with his father, step mother and step siblings. At the start i got some chinese vibes especially since they bullied the pre-transfer mc, but luckily the author is a cool dude and isnt like that. The mc only has a small cheat which is pretty good but nowhere close to things like a sharingan which makes the story a lot better imo since the mc has to work hard. He isn't some supreme genius but has his affinities with certain techniques. The world is naruto before the 2nd war and so far the 'canon' hasnt changed. thats it so go read already we want more chapters auther but are there gonna be lemons and harem or romance the naruto world has alot of chicks you know (: