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Luciis

(Shameless review again) Aight so this is the very first novel I’ve ever written so please, if you have any feedback and constructive criticisms please let me know in the replies or comments within the chapters themselves. You guys can also use this as a Q&A area if you want

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Mikepai

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This read is looking great. The atmosphere of the surrounding environment is very intriguing, and I really like the style in which you put it to words. A lot of nice detail, really makes the story immersion easy! Going to be an easy favorite.🖤

So far so good young padawan. Pacing, writing, and direction is going very well. Looking forward to where it goes! Hopefully we can look forward to a consistent chapter release for this!

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Aaron_Doehring

Love the atmosphere and details, keep it up! It's an easy read and the quality is high. Do keep in mind though that it is important to keep releases in a rhythm or something to stay looking forward to. Do not get lost trying to put too much detail into something if it will delay you by too much. Hope you can find a great balance for yourself!

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Galanar

Your first chapter is has a lot happening, but with little to no detailing. Thw world isn't really described, the character is physically described, but nothing more. The paragraphs are on the long side, and would need to be fragmented. But it looks full of potential :) Keep up the good work :)

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Celestial_Worthy

I rarely say this and maybe it's still too early to judge , but i think this novel is very well written and has the potential to become one of the best oness on this site. Keep it up man!

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valerie_11

i’ve reread your chapters about twice already, and i can’t express how much i enjoy your story so far ! the characters are all well thought out and are interesting, and i cannot wait for future chapters. good job :^]

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CeruleanLazy

I am already excited to see how the story will develop! I would highly recommend that you add this to your library or bookmark this one to keep an eye out for it.

Solid read so far! Really enjoyed being able to meet Keir and learn more about the world he lives in. Can't wait to see how his story unfolds! Keep up the good work ^v^

Mc just got that dog in em its crazy. AHEM. Solid writing, keeps you immersed without telling you a lot about the world. Gives room for imagination. Cant wait to see more kag

love it !! keep it up. good story interesting characters and love the concept

Oh ho ho ho~ We love to see your growth as an author!! You’ve got me invested in the story! Excited to read the next chapters whenever you release them!!!