Marvel: 2.4 Billion Hours a Day

LV 5

Darth_Ullyses

chigray lingray stingray chingre chingle... he gave JEAN GREY a lot of names huh

LV 14

Kiiiddd

I read ahead on the MTL and while the premise of this novel is interesting the MC is horrible. Turns back 4 days to save someone but misses a important character's death by minutes and says whatever and then proceeds to not care about the fallout. Like I hate good two shoes protagonists but this one is annoying to read about. Also this is just a straight copy paste of the MTL

LV 3

UNCHAINED_PREDATOR

the story is pretty good but the traslation is almost mtl level

LV 4

Lackada1sical

MTL-style/like translation, too many inconsistencies. MC 'young-master' type (too Chinese). typical Chinese marvel mtl fanfic if you know what I mean.

LV 1

Unsightly

Author please change the story, it degenerates into a cultivation world after marvel. I beg you please save this.!!!!!!!!!!:!:!:!:;!!:;!:;!:;!::;!:!:;:'+"7%57$4-%'9*-8'7(&*"

LV 4

brady_robinson

is there any romance or is there not any at all?

LV 3

Higgs

Too many plot holes and inconsistencies, no MC improvements, no sense in the story. You told the readers that it is 24m sec so that's about .76 in years but the title says its 24m hrs so that's about 2739 years. Do you even know how it would feel to stretch time that long in 24hrs? It would be very hard to move. The story didn't imply any special body ability, no friction resistance whatsoever. Increase in speed means increase in mass. Not to mention his clothes should be burning with the friction because of him moving too fast. Asuming that he has the resistance of this type of movement what hasnt he made any improvements? He should be at the very least stronger after 24hrs. Please learn physics or at the very least look at some references, like the flash maybe. It would be understandable if he had the body of a kryptonian but no.

LV 14

Whitedre

the premise is great, but the protag is disgusting. He's one of those nasty Chinese cultivation characters that doesn't care about anything that doesn't directly benefit him. 10mil die because odd flood? What does it have to do with me? Almost kill AO and completely destabilize earth protection while also stealing timestone only for self benefit. Trash personality.

LV 2

HeavenlyGodOfMagic

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