PATCHED SOUL

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Key_To

I hope you like this novel If ever you like it please leave a comment on the chapters or rate this novel I would love that thank you! Always have a nice day much love

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legendary_awesome

Well this novel is good, if you are into mystery this is your cup of tea, and the children in the novel are pretty Sus. Over all this is a good novel, worth a read. Author you are SUS.

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Withe_Reaper

Great story, although I don't like most of the cultivation stories because they are more of the same, I can say that this one is original. Also, it has very good writing. No errors to point out, I hope the author continues the work.

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Raychbunni

I love reading about Lorenzo's journey of growth and sadly, loss of innocence. I feel like I'm holding my breath, just waiting for the other shoe to drop the whole way through. Great job, look forward to more.

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Sahaaae

Loving it !!! This is just amazing . I like this book because it is different from the other books . Writing quality is just superb.Keep it up good work !

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BeeInAPan

Amazing book! The writing is very neat and detailed and love the perspective of someone who doesn't know anything about themselves. Keep up the good work!

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funkiller_562

Synopsis, perfect ten💯 It would totally pull readers the check out what "patched soul" has in store for them. Descriptions were great so the world background easily came together in my mind. The paragraphs were too long and that discouraged me a little bit. If you must write a long paragraph, let it be between 6-9 lines, no more, especially for ML novels. Character development can be elaborated. Some things were put together all at once. Take your time, the book's not ending right away and try to mold the MC's characteristics into his body language and actions.