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Kingdom building? YESSS!!! W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W! W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!
i am starting this when there r 69 chapters.........maybe it will turn out to be good..................................................................
I'm at lost here . Shouldn't a huge empire be more suitable an island when it comes to world development. Also isn't that island part of the empire , Getting them both under your rule sounds like a great way to start world building to me
the authors good at doing first person but whenever he switches characters the quality drops massively
Ok this story might not be the best written piece every but it's decent enough. Unlike many system stories this system has a personality and emotions like a human and seeing where how the story is going I think it will have a human form in the future. Many might not like the start because of the rough writing and skipping of details but the author is improving his skills with each chapter, the explanations are detailed, reasonings make sense and more. I think the author knows that his writing is not the best so he keeps on trying add more details each passing chapter which really helps in making his writing shine. What I like about this novel is that it doesn't always focus on Mc it keeps on going around the world telling us what's happening in the world not just the Mc's kingdom. Right now nothing much of significance happened that connects all the events but I believe the author had already planned it so I will wait. 😊😄
The story is good so far , loved reading it . Though could do better, keep up the good work author.
it's a good start where th mc doesn't get a stoic system but a one with real emotions
a good novel with a good smart MC that knows how to get the job done . very well written so far . the story is very good . . so this is my first review. it will can change after 50 chapter. if the author can keep the story like it is then my review will stay the same. a good novel for those who like a smart MC .
Underrated... and need more recognittion.. if I have to put this on 10 kingdom building novels i have read i would put this on top 5
Kingdom building? YESSS!!! W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W! W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!W!
i am starting this when there r 69 chapters.........maybe it will turn out to be good..................................................................
I'm at lost here . Shouldn't a huge empire be more suitable an island when it comes to world development. Also isn't that island part of the empire , Getting them both under your rule sounds like a great way to start world building to me
the authors good at doing first person but whenever he switches characters the quality drops massively
Ok this story might not be the best written piece every but it's decent enough. Unlike many system stories this system has a personality and emotions like a human and seeing where how the story is going I think it will have a human form in the future. Many might not like the start because of the rough writing and skipping of details but the author is improving his skills with each chapter, the explanations are detailed, reasonings make sense and more. I think the author knows that his writing is not the best so he keeps on trying add more details each passing chapter which really helps in making his writing shine. What I like about this novel is that it doesn't always focus on Mc it keeps on going around the world telling us what's happening in the world not just the Mc's kingdom. Right now nothing much of significance happened that connects all the events but I believe the author had already planned it so I will wait. 😊😄
The story is good so far , loved reading it . Though could do better, keep up the good work author.
it's a good start where th mc doesn't get a stoic system but a one with real emotions
a good novel with a good smart MC that knows how to get the job done . very well written so far . the story is very good . . so this is my first review. it will can change after 50 chapter. if the author can keep the story like it is then my review will stay the same. a good novel for those who like a smart MC .
Underrated... and need more recognittion.. if I have to put this on 10 kingdom building novels i have read i would put this on top 5