20Reseñas
3.58
- Calidad de escritura
- Estabilidad de las actualizaciones
- Desarrollo de la Historia
- Diseño de Personajes
- Antecedentes del mundo
Comparte tus pensamientos con los demás
Escribe una reseña
L'hsitoire est vraiment prometeur avec le protagoniste qui veut redorer l'image des sangs pures dans le monde sorcier. Domage que la mise a jour soit nul et que depuis 1 an l'auteur a arrêté d'écrire.
How do you meet luna and just decided that you will marry her and plan things already and they are just 11 and 10 the mc should have a little childishness
If you want to post MTL here make sure to add a note in the synopsis that this is a transition of "Raw Name Here". And fix the grammar, story flow, and character name. It's a plus if you change the Chinese slang to its equivalent in whatever culture inside the story. Otherwise, your repost here is just useless spam.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Siuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp ...................................................................................................................................................... [img=empfehlen] _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ amazing story ,,,............................................... please finish the story.................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Can someone please tell me the original Chinese name? Or name on MTL? Thank you! Can someone please tell me the original Chinese name? Or name on MTL? Thank you!
raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?
Quite an interesting and intriguing book especially with way that OC had motivated and inspired people with his speech almost in a way like the charismatic Grindlewald or the charming Tom Riddle with the way that they used their swift tongue so to speak to get people to believe and follow them not just that but way how u had set up this book with OC getting his wand that is quite special to the fortune he has not just that but way he has been able to control Malfoy and Slytherin House overall enjoyed reading all of this book and look forward to getting the chance to read more of this book wonder what will happen next can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
i quite enjoy this whole concept, changing the image of pure bloods. but it would have been more interesting without the system. read at your own risk (translation hurts my eyes) 🐖
Siuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
The plot and story developement is good enough . A unique perspective and huge potential perspects for future development . Would have been a minimum 4 stars but it got ruined by the writing quality . Like more like a mtl novel rather than a webnovel
......................................................................................................................................................
[img=empfehlen] _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hate being rude because I can tell this is probably a decent fanfic but the writing quality is atrocious I honestly think that the autor should just write it in their primary language and then MTL it. You can get someone to edit it from there.
amazing story ,,,............................................... please finish the story.................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
The book is quite interesting as it presents the topic of pure blood differently than the rest of the novels. In this, the Mc tries to change the pure blood into good guys. Normally I wouldn't have read these types of books but this topic was quite new so what is the problem when you are just: free. It's a Translation. Only translated and Edited by me.
good story but the translation was horrible, try translating the foreign slang that will help quite a bit........................................................................................................
L'hsitoire est vraiment prometeur avec le protagoniste qui veut redorer l'image des sangs pures dans le monde sorcier. Domage que la mise a jour soit nul et que depuis 1 an l'auteur a arrêté d'écrire.
How do you meet luna and just decided that you will marry her and plan things already and they are just 11 and 10 the mc should have a little childishness
If you want to post MTL here make sure to add a note in the synopsis that this is a transition of "Raw Name Here". And fix the grammar, story flow, and character name. It's a plus if you change the Chinese slang to its equivalent in whatever culture inside the story. Otherwise, your repost here is just useless spam.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Siuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp ...................................................................................................................................................... [img=empfehlen] _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ amazing story ,,,............................................... please finish the story.................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Can someone please tell me the original Chinese name? Or name on MTL? Thank you! Can someone please tell me the original Chinese name? Or name on MTL? Thank you!
raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?raw link ?
Quite an interesting and intriguing book especially with way that OC had motivated and inspired people with his speech almost in a way like the charismatic Grindlewald or the charming Tom Riddle with the way that they used their swift tongue so to speak to get people to believe and follow them not just that but way how u had set up this book with OC getting his wand that is quite special to the fortune he has not just that but way he has been able to control Malfoy and Slytherin House overall enjoyed reading all of this book and look forward to getting the chance to read more of this book wonder what will happen next can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
i quite enjoy this whole concept, changing the image of pure bloods. but it would have been more interesting without the system. read at your own risk (translation hurts my eyes) 🐖
Siuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
The plot and story developement is good enough . A unique perspective and huge potential perspects for future development . Would have been a minimum 4 stars but it got ruined by the writing quality . Like more like a mtl novel rather than a webnovel
......................................................................................................................................................
[img=empfehlen] _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hate being rude because I can tell this is probably a decent fanfic but the writing quality is atrocious I honestly think that the autor should just write it in their primary language and then MTL it. You can get someone to edit it from there.
amazing story ,,,............................................... please finish the story.................mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
The book is quite interesting as it presents the topic of pure blood differently than the rest of the novels. In this, the Mc tries to change the pure blood into good guys. Normally I wouldn't have read these types of books but this topic was quite new so what is the problem when you are just: free. It's a Translation. Only translated and Edited by me.
good story but the translation was horrible, try translating the foreign slang that will help quite a bit........................................................................................................