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ZoeTinnah

Keep up the good work , nice story Creation and development 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓 Keep up 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

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Frorstyflame

The story idea is good with both love and gangster fml, if you can skip the writing part the whole story has a good potential, you could improve it a lot.

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Rainbow420

Nice story title. I read first chapter. This is amazing. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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_Re_

Nice and intriguing, but still have much room for improvement. Like the punctuations. Aside from that, this could end up as solid story. Keep on writing! the only way forward is to push through and learn!!!!

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Emmanuelboss36_

The mafia families are in a completley different world its and interesting character and I really like Bella's character, its pretty unique

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Rainandstorm

I really do love the story, it somehow catches the attention of the readers, The plot alone says it all, Totally love the plot and the catchy title too😅😅

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Pastpassion

Really nice plot Author has done a great job Great story and all Looking forward for more from this author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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lo_rezi

this shameless author giving herself a 5 star review ..also I want to thank all my readers ♥️ and if you're reading this give this book a try 😊 this is my third book and am looking forward to making it the best of all my books thanks for reading once more

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Sani_Sunny

Quality book, it is 100% worth a read, the plot is good and who doesn't love mafia let's be real here. can't wait for more chapters, Good Luck ! x

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Bella_Jackos

I Love Bella she is a strong girl and doesn't let anyone tell her what to do, this story is amazing I'm glad I read it and will be reading more

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Zherie17

Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to your story. Story wise, this has potential but a little boring and dull, so my advice would be FOCUS on the on improving your English grammar and the other technicalities involved. You do NOT need to capitalize everything, and a prologue would make it more interesting.

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Lu_Shui

Wonderful take on a mafia story with arranged political marriage that ends with romance! Very good job author, do keep writing! 😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Chuzi

Great story, I feel like the story has great promise for success. Keep it up Author. .

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Moonwriting

Hi dear, loves your book and especially the concept. The character's design and the world background are phenomenal. Love to read more from this book.. cheer up dear......

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MisterEnd0821

I love how the story went out in the first chapter. There is a lot of fixing of grammatical issues but it can be fixed by an outstanding author such as yourself. I enjoyed it, good work fellow novelist!

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_Rockbison_

Another arrange marriage story??? Gonna read it in whole😂😂... Always a fan of arrange marriage type of story.... But although there is not many chapters uploaded so can't tell more about it now.... But gonna wait to see what will happened next.... Loved the way Bella called her grandfather GP... Its so cute..... Also well written author....