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This is my first time writing a review and i honestly loved this but wqas really sad it has so few chapters but 100% recomend. Hope the writer gets the drive to continue the story.
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I haven’t read but wukong and tensura deserve a 5/5. I hope you don’t drop. Can anyone recommend other stories with the monkey king in it. J.
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To be honest never thought someone will use a saiyan the way you did some authors will either make him so overpowered that the interest of the story falls shot but with how balanced you have made sun it feels just right. I will be looking forward to more chapters
I love the story so far i hope you continue to update it regularly it would be a great shame for it to be droped like so many others so far great story and amazing character. Keep up the great work
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No offense bruh, but they way you're going about this is unique in a bad way. The Saiyan aspect is creative but the hero egg situation? That's impossible. I mean, have you read the novel? Even self-naming is impossible. Monsters and Demons below a certain strength level can't name themselves, it's impossible. In the novel the only one to ever do that was Guy Crimson, he named himself Guy after accumulating a lot of magicles and then ascending to a demon lord, the second ever was that guy at the end of the light novel, I have forgotten his name. Even OG Rimuru couldn't do that at his birth despite his Soul strength and his being the reincarnation of Veldanava. C'mon bro. At least do a little research before you write. I am an author too. I write Naruto fanfic and I had to do a whole lot of research before putting anything down.
This is my first time writing a review and i honestly loved this but wqas really sad it has so few chapters but 100% recomend. Hope the writer gets the drive to continue the story.
Bringing the saiyan power in this novel is actually very good ----------‐-----‐------------------------------‐-----‐------------------------------‐-----‐-------------------------‐-----
I haven’t read but wukong and tensura deserve a 5/5. I hope you don’t drop. Can anyone recommend other stories with the monkey king in it. J.
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To be honest never thought someone will use a saiyan the way you did some authors will either make him so overpowered that the interest of the story falls shot but with how balanced you have made sun it feels just right. I will be looking forward to more chapters
I love the story so far i hope you continue to update it regularly it would be a great shame for it to be droped like so many others so far great story and amazing character. Keep up the great work
I read and great promises on the intro and new chapters hope this one is not dropped! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
No offense bruh, but they way you're going about this is unique in a bad way. The Saiyan aspect is creative but the hero egg situation? That's impossible. I mean, have you read the novel? Even self-naming is impossible. Monsters and Demons below a certain strength level can't name themselves, it's impossible. In the novel the only one to ever do that was Guy Crimson, he named himself Guy after accumulating a lot of magicles and then ascending to a demon lord, the second ever was that guy at the end of the light novel, I have forgotten his name. Even OG Rimuru couldn't do that at his birth despite his Soul strength and his being the reincarnation of Veldanava. C'mon bro. At least do a little research before you write. I am an author too. I write Naruto fanfic and I had to do a whole lot of research before putting anything down.