In Naruto with the Arc of Embodiment

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Getsucced

Bro this is peak wish fulfillment and I like it. But change that cover pic to a better one. Btw why only one seal, if you use more wouldnt it be more efficient or is it because you felt it would make it op too fast?(if so i dont mind a slow but calculating mc is better and even if he doesnt become a shinobi i feel its better but dont let him blow his cover easily)

For Naruto fanfic the MC is too overpowered. Btw, add Shion to Mc's poke-*cough* Harem. Hanabi is hot!🥵

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Thehighesthol1

I suggest you read a few chapters and you will fall in love with this story, maybe the story is a bit fast and I like that he is not too close to the main character Which eventually makes him a plot dog. But here the character of mc really suits my taste. So five stars for you🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

LV 4

Yamata_no_Orochi

The Mc as a Character/human/person is boring and simpleminded. The story is as Flat as a sheet of paper and the world background is very weak. The writing quality is basic but the stability of updates is there. The Development of the Story is as clear as it is unclear. There is not a clear cut direktion for the story on its self.

LV 4

RedBoy07

The story is good for me but when I saw the #weaktostrong and #overpowered, I was like . . . . . .. . .

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manny0101

It's like a person speaking continuously without taking a single breath. The paragraphs are just big sentences and it's abhoring to try and read something like this. Bro, you are Canadian. Canada is an english speaking country. At the very least, use punctuations and periods.

LV 13

Infinitesimal

Interesting, I hype mode and pervert mode active, like history original and please battle in history. ( Very good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Savitar_12

I hope u keep going ........................................................................................................................

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LINKyt

Bro this is good keep going and sont make him ninja/shinobi [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 14

Thananos

Awesome fic! Hope you continue soon! Also, hope you're doing alright irl.

LV 13

Ibrahim_NiR

Pues que se puede decir que sea entretenida y buena para pasar el tiempo pero si estás buscando una novela sería no es algo que recomendaría para leer mucha gente se molestaría y comenzaría criticarla así que si no me quieres pasar el rato y dejar que tu cabeza fluya pues esta es una buena opción para divertirte un rato y relajarte y no buscar una historia que diga eso estoy muy urgido por más capítulos pero si es lo suficientemente estar tenido como para no dejarla de lado

LV 11

GodLiGHT

Story is good with an overpowered Mc and all....But ur chapter update is very slow🐌.......other things are all good 😇.............................

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DaoistPHfxL0

creepy imba, well, I like it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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david_cuenca

wooo esto parece interesante jeje , ojalá se actualice todos los días y además que este Tsunade en el harém y que sea la principal jeje zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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LightJons

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