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As far as i can tell it is a good story. No major errors in Grammar or story, no real plotholes that are obvious. Not for me, but if you like the Tags give it a read.
The story is good. Not a lot of problems in grammer and story, The character design seems to be the best. The problem is with the updates. The author seems to rarely posts these days. Like, can I get a reply to when the next (non filler chapter) is gonna come by? I mean you should actually make the filler a part of the story, cuz it good . The posting schedule used to be 1 chapter per day but now it is like 1 chapter a month. The rest is perfect, I've been reading since the 11th chapter and gonna continue till the end.
After reading the first 3 chapters, in my opinion, it didn’t show a good introduction to the story and what is going on.
The story is pretty solid, It was really good, there are two problems i would like to address 1:Consistency[img=update] 2:Pacing this is all
As far as i can tell it is a good story. No major errors in Grammar or story, no real plotholes that are obvious. Not for me, but if you like the Tags give it a read.
The story is good. Not a lot of problems in grammer and story, The character design seems to be the best. The problem is with the updates. The author seems to rarely posts these days. Like, can I get a reply to when the next (non filler chapter) is gonna come by? I mean you should actually make the filler a part of the story, cuz it good . The posting schedule used to be 1 chapter per day but now it is like 1 chapter a month. The rest is perfect, I've been reading since the 11th chapter and gonna continue till the end.
After reading the first 3 chapters, in my opinion, it didn’t show a good introduction to the story and what is going on.
The story is pretty solid, It was really good, there are two problems i would like to address 1:Consistency[img=update] 2:Pacing this is all
