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Thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and share your thoughts. Unfortunately, it didn't get published, so I have to post it by myself. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
Thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and share your thoughts. Unfortunately, it didn't get published, so I have to post it by myself. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
Hello guys, Author here. I am very grateful to everyone who read and support my novel. It means a lot to me that you enjoyed my story and characters. I want to give a special shout-out to Kiria94, who has been a loyal and supportive fan since the beginning. You are awesome! I also want to apologize for any grammar errors or typos that might have made the reading experience less enjoyable. I am not a native English speaker, so I sometimes struggle with writing correctly. I hope you can forgive me and appreciate the effort I put into this novel. Once again, thank you all, for your patience and support.❤️
The story definitely has potential, but a proofreader is truly recommended. Right now it is a hassle to try reading this piece.
I really like the idea and plot so far, but tbh the auther clearly needs a beta reader.
Honest review after reading 10 chapters. Writing quality isn't best. It made it really hard to read, enjoy and understand what was happening. It was especially annoying when a new character is just mentioned out of nowhere. But, the story has potential. Honestly, just improve the grammar, vocabulary and flow of the story and it won't be so bad. Keep up the work author.
Thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and share your thoughts. Unfortunately, it didn't get published, so I have to post it by myself. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
Thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and share your thoughts. Unfortunately, it didn't get published, so I have to post it by myself. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
Thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and share your thoughts. Unfortunately, it didn't get published, so I have to post it by myself. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!
Hello guys, Author here. I am very grateful to everyone who read and support my novel. It means a lot to me that you enjoyed my story and characters. I want to give a special shout-out to Kiria94, who has been a loyal and supportive fan since the beginning. You are awesome! I also want to apologize for any grammar errors or typos that might have made the reading experience less enjoyable. I am not a native English speaker, so I sometimes struggle with writing correctly. I hope you can forgive me and appreciate the effort I put into this novel. Once again, thank you all, for your patience and support.❤️
The story definitely has potential, but a proofreader is truly recommended. Right now it is a hassle to try reading this piece.
I really like the idea and plot so far, but tbh the auther clearly needs a beta reader.
Honest review after reading 10 chapters. Writing quality isn't best. It made it really hard to read, enjoy and understand what was happening. It was especially annoying when a new character is just mentioned out of nowhere. But, the story has potential. Honestly, just improve the grammar, vocabulary and flow of the story and it won't be so bad. Keep up the work author.
Thank you for the review. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read it and share your thoughts. Unfortunately, it didn't get published, so I have to post it by myself. Thanks again for your support and encouragement!