Starting from One Piece...

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Zekril

The mc is just a fanboy hayzz Having to babysit its boring he just follow luffy and making small changes i rather watch the anime. Its boring as f***

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Jack_Acero

I don't understand why such a low rating, this fanfic can't be the best, but it's not bad either, for someone who is a fan it's well done. Author just keep writing because for now the story is fine, I just hope everything is not exactly the same as canon in the future.

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Adomin1024

A Side Character ML ......….......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Thissmithy_Manga

just another braindead onepiece ff which follows the strawhats, dont waste your time and read the original, lazy. ..........................

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Devang98

yeah, nothing new in this fic same old harem with an all-knowing idiot who has a problem for every solution... . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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JustToMeme

read the manga instead of reading this fic. it's basically just the mc following luffy and changing small things along the way..............

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BoombaTheSaint

It’s just the original story with an additional crew mate. The story is unchanged so you can pretty much see where its heading. The writing is lacking and unimproving, probably because most of the readers are half-brains or unconcerned with helping the author improve. The writing style is amateurish and linear, not so different from a textbook. Too much telling and no showing, an obvious result of limited, if not none at all, exposure to fine literature. Example: “Woah!! We’ve landed!” said Luffy in joy. This is an excellent example of bad story writing. Instead of showing emotions, you instead chose to tell them. Mistakes like these are unforgivable, if not telling. Many people have defaulted to using the excuse of “English isn’t my main language” forgetting that story writing and deciphering is taught in all languages. You all know this. You’ve written exams and tests where questions like: How is “insert name” feeling in this passage? Explain the reason for stating so in the previous question? Elementary, Junior High, and High School. Grammar and tense inconsistency could be excused, anything else? No!!

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CandyChopper

Fanboy

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Nitche

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Stray99th

I'm giving this a 5 stars for reasons some people don't like it. I prefer stories I can watch the series alongside with instead of those with authors who desperately try to come up with their own thing, only to fail miserably, butchering the essense of the source material. It would've been frustrating if this wasn't a One Piece fanfic but an SI following the Strawhats on their journey is always a good thing.

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Lucifer515

Not bad

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A_K_I_N_G83884929

Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

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Eurynomos

System type novel but the humor and MC is pretty consistent with One Piece so I guess it fits. 5 star for me so far - chp. 25 ...............

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Eurynomos

I suggest you delete low star reviews. That's what every morally corrupt author does on this site so I think it's only fair for you to do so as well, because your work is undoubtedly better than theirs. The low star reviews here were made based on preference anyway. They have no credibility whatsover.

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shashank_bhatt

I personally like those one piece ff where MC follows the crew so I am going to support you anyway the story is good it is good to see what changes he makes.

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Pilgrim_Reaper

Nice fanfic I really love it so please update more and don't drop it.💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

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Daoist9083tM

A história é boa, gramática está boa,ele não deu muita atenção ao sistema mas por enquanto a história está boa, com uma taxa de atualização legal, 8,5/10 recomendo muito ler essa história

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Valfren

fun read, balanced, not bad but not the greatest .still has a place on my list, keep up author.

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Wesley_Hylry

in terms of the harem, it is still starting, but some choices are already obvious and in good taste it has its good points and others not so much, but currently I can give it an 8 because I like it and autor-san here you can use this image (I did it on my cell phone app, my notebook is not working.if you want some background modification just tell me, i got the MC's headphone mixed)

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A9B

the author did a good job in most of the characters personality. fun read, keep up <3.