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A good concept with good execution. The only reason I am not giving it a full 5 stars is because the story itself feels a little rushed, however I am sure it is not as much the author's fault and it's just the fact that it's well... Yujiro Hanma. Man's a beast. Besides that keep up the good work.👍🏻
The author mediocrely knows not only the world of Baki but also the character of Hanma Yujiro. And if you don’t pay attention to this, then the story about this manhwa for 4 balls.
This has potential but doesn't reach it due to how rushed most parts are written in the fic. And to the spammers of 5 stars, I understand that you like the story but you are only coming of as addicts looking for their next fix. Sorry if this actually offends anyone but it's the truth.
development is too fast whether it's from the plot or the strength steal qi? heck[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
More chapters please . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
honestly im a bit disapointed i expected an overpowered murim guy as an hanma fighting insted we got qi stealing abilty that so op that hanma part becom usles
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Great idea despite the seemingly mediocre writing. Either way, I just wanna ask my fellow WN Readers why most Author's prefer Japanese stuff when there are some Korean Manhwas and Novels that are on par or even better than some Animes or Mangas...
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Liked it. I hope it doesn't fall +_+_+_++_+_+_++++_++_+_+_+_+__+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+__+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_
My God, this is so good. Congratulations, I don't have agr stone, but all I can send here so continue with your constant posting, I will evaluate with the same comment, too lazy to write 140 words
I'm really interested and think that this fanfic has a lot of potential. I like the fact that the first world he is going to is chronicles of the heavenly demon. I've read maybe 100 chapters of that manhwa and it's really great. I hope that he continues to travel to other martial arts worlds that are also interesting. My only concern is how op he is going to be after leaving that world, is there l like a power reset or something when he enters a new world? Cuz if not he is going to be too Op.
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Overall I can only review it as a 'Fic with potential' but I would read from top to bottom only if the author had the decency to atleast edit and proofread before uploading. And the spam with with 5 stars are clearly made some idiots that can't differentiate between a stranger from their own parents. I hear they were such a gullible bunch that they lick and popped a homeless man's D cause he told them it was a lollipop. Idiots!
Boa Fanfic, tem alguns erros na escrita. Mas, pode ser interessante ver um MC muito forte, Com o sangue Hamna, enchendo os figurantes de porrada, e mostrando quem é que manda.
For now I find great enjoyment in reading this and feel that the author understands what he is doing. I don't see any obvious issues in the story or character so thumbs up from me
Good job 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Continue onward.
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I have seen this manhwa being a Korean myself, and I must say you did a splendid job for starters. You weaved the character in well enough, including the interaction between your character and the others. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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A good concept with good execution. The only reason I am not giving it a full 5 stars is because the story itself feels a little rushed, however I am sure it is not as much the author's fault and it's just the fact that it's well... Yujiro Hanma. Man's a beast. Besides that keep up the good work.👍🏻
The author mediocrely knows not only the world of Baki but also the character of Hanma Yujiro. And if you don’t pay attention to this, then the story about this manhwa for 4 balls.
This has potential but doesn't reach it due to how rushed most parts are written in the fic. And to the spammers of 5 stars, I understand that you like the story but you are only coming of as addicts looking for their next fix. Sorry if this actually offends anyone but it's the truth.
development is too fast whether it's from the plot or the strength steal qi? heck[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
More chapters please . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
honestly im a bit disapointed i expected an overpowered murim guy as an hanma fighting insted we got qi stealing abilty that so op that hanma part becom usles
Dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop dont drop[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Great idea despite the seemingly mediocre writing. Either way, I just wanna ask my fellow WN Readers why most Author's prefer Japanese stuff when there are some Korean Manhwas and Novels that are on par or even better than some Animes or Mangas...
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Liked it. I hope it doesn't fall +_+_+_++_+_+_++++_++_+_+_+_+__+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+__+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_
My God, this is so good. Congratulations, I don't have agr stone, but all I can send here so continue with your constant posting, I will evaluate with the same comment, too lazy to write 140 words
I'm really interested and think that this fanfic has a lot of potential. I like the fact that the first world he is going to is chronicles of the heavenly demon. I've read maybe 100 chapters of that manhwa and it's really great. I hope that he continues to travel to other martial arts worlds that are also interesting. My only concern is how op he is going to be after leaving that world, is there l like a power reset or something when he enters a new world? Cuz if not he is going to be too Op.
......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... [img=recommend]
Overall I can only review it as a 'Fic with potential' but I would read from top to bottom only if the author had the decency to atleast edit and proofread before uploading. And the spam with with 5 stars are clearly made some idiots that can't differentiate between a stranger from their own parents. I hear they were such a gullible bunch that they lick and popped a homeless man's D cause he told them it was a lollipop. Idiots!
Boa Fanfic, tem alguns erros na escrita. Mas, pode ser interessante ver um MC muito forte, Com o sangue Hamna, enchendo os figurantes de porrada, e mostrando quem é que manda.
For now I find great enjoyment in reading this and feel that the author understands what he is doing. I don't see any obvious issues in the story or character so thumbs up from me
Good job 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Continue onward.
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I have seen this manhwa being a Korean myself, and I must say you did a splendid job for starters. You weaved the character in well enough, including the interaction between your character and the others. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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