Vampire Devouring System

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Cyclxne

Heya, Cyclxne here. This is my first try at writing a novel like this so there will definitely be flaws, but I am learning and improving as I go. I hope you all enjoy the story! P.S. Thank you to my editor, Gorb. You're the best <3

LV 15

Kitsune_Kurama

caught up on this too fast 😭, need moar. Everything so far is great, from the world building, character development, the other characters feel alive and the world full and vivid. Can't wait to see what happens in the future will our mc turn his sister into his kin, build a vampiric nation or walk a path of blood, can't wait to see what our author-sama has in store for us

LV 5

Mob02

5 stars why? The writing is great in terms of numbers it's 9/10 for me :D The story is interesting :D System? yeh , OP Ability ? Of course IT IS :D Try it bro :D And 5 stars cos a Mecha has been mentioned :D

LV 4

3ddy

don't mind me i am just here waiting for an update

LV 15

Blazzing18

THIS BOOK WAS REALLY GOOD AND I LOVED IT!!! Y DID U STOP WRITING??? SINCE UR NOT GOING TO COME BACK Y DONT U JUST TAKE IT DOWN SO WE R NOT ANTICIPATING U TO COME BACK AND START WRITING AGAIN!!!!

LV 15

Blazzing18

SO I TAKE IT UR DONE WITH THIS BOOK AND 7R NOT COMING BACK!!?

LV 15

Blazzing18

SO UR NOT COMING BACK?? WE THEN U SHOULD TAKE THE BOOK DOWN!!! I LOVE THIS BOOK AND ITS AWESOME BUT IM TIRED OF WAITING FOR U TO COME BACK AND WRITE!!! U SHOULD TELL EVERYONE THAT UR DONE AND DELETE THE BOOK!!!

LV 4

Milsum

auther pls update i need more and dont make it preimuem too early plssssss btw this is a hidden gem too bad it will get locked and as broke reader i dont have accses to my fauvrite books

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Herowolf_Herobrine

The few chapters it has was alot of fun to read i almost thought it would be similar to solo leveling but it is not. i hope there will be more chapters soon.

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Oswaldjosue

Comencé ah verlo hoy xD se ve bueno más capitulos Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm

LV 1

timeawayfromstress

the novel is so cliche. mc brain doesn't work. mc why should a porter help him, give him millions for his sister. it was good at first, then it became a cliche. mc 7 years of humiliation did not darken him. There is 1 more Naruto, say he has a sister In addition, the classic cliche is in a coma, suddenly mc talks to the heroine for him. The subject is very difficult. mc should be nautral evil, or even chaotic evil. If 7 years humiliation was not enough for him, 10 more years should be humiliated.

LV 15

Blazzing18

I like this book so far. there are somethings that I sont get why its written the way it is but over all its really good. I just hope that you dont stop writing this book.