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I’m giving myself a 5-star rating! If you enjoyed my other work, 'I Transmigrated into One Piece World with a Gift Pack', you’re sure to love this one as well. I hope you enjoy this Fanfic!
This Novel is Pretty good and creative,with the author creating “Nature Breathing” And having “Nature Mode” just like “Sage Mode” with the MCs who seemed to be likely to have Kanae as a love interest and having the three tomoe sharingan and tekkai is good and doesn't make the MC too overpowered in the beginning but I'd be good if the mc could take Kanae as his “partner” though
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A good story, I took one star off the Story Development and World Background because of the other transmigrants thing, if it hadn't been for the note about editing the story and removing them when he changed worlds, I would have dropped it. The rest of the story is well developed, as are the characters. The story in Naruto was also going well as far as I read (the last chapter that came out at the moment is 103). Unlike other readers, the romance didn't seem forced to me, some might say that he changed his personality when he met Kanae, but up until that point he had very little interaction with other characters for his personality to be known. I would recommend completely removing the other transmigrants thing from the story, only in that chapter where they appeared, many readers dropped the story despite how interesting and well developed it was up until that point. English is not my native language and I translated this review using the translator so if you see parts where I don't explain myself well it's because of that.
Revelar spoiler
Like it keep at it, make the naruto arc more longer please as there are many techniques which can be created win the existence of chakra. But all in all I like it
this is all good until chapter 54 because the next chapter is meh i drop this the author made a mistake by making such a new concept
Before reading this novel, you guys should note the following points: 1. Author is very good at setting premises. He made MC well with good power and balance. 2. But author is best at disappointing his readers. Story would be going good, he will drop several disappointments here and there and eventually he dropped a nuke. 3. He follows plot too much and it is not even a valid reason. I tried defending him at first but it was a mistake. This guy wrote dumbest plots: * MC's love sequence with Kanae came out of nowhere and his personality suddenly changed into Sanji or Zenitsu without any insinuation. * This guy is strong but absolutely useless. the canon will not change even a little bit But usually other authors won't write a plot where this issue comes to us. Usually they will use time skip or something like trapped trope to get around but this guy is putting it in headlight. * He made MC meet First Moon in a mansion where they went to search for Muzan. There they met Kokushibo then they fought until sunrise and he didn't use his full strength as he didn't want to alert Muzan It is okay until now but when First Moon could have been killed by sunlight as fight stretched till sunrise he simply could have stalled him with the strength he shown at the time, but when the First Moon retreated this fu**ing MC let him go. But be real, if you are going to do all this bullshit, you could have simply made MC skip that mansion all together. Why is there need for this plot? it doesn't change anything in story. * Also this guy stretched the plot too much. 4. Also guys, he broke the hidden code to not write multiple reincarnators in novel without mentioning it at first & this guy wrote it without even warning. It came out of nowhere."
This was a sick read, and I really liked the spin where they added other people from Earth, it made the story really unique and wish it continued into the 2nd world. Really miss the updates man, I hope you pick this back up, and I'd like to see you add your original flair again
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
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The 55th chapter completely ruined the whole story. it's an unnecessary development
Love the story o hope the next world he goes to is one piece as I am very curious on how you will the story but since one piece isn’t finished yet mha fanfics are usually fire.
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This story is well written and extremely well thought out. I loved that in the demon slayer world, the Mc didn't interfere with the story too much, but still managed to make an integral part of it. I liked the character dynamics with the other characters, especially with Kanae . I also love the fast pace, as it provides you with an exhilarating reading experience which doesn't bore you, even if you read the story in one go. Anyway, I loved this book and would suggest you to give it a read if you are a big demon slayer fan like me. I hope the Naruto arc performs even better :)
Nice story the first arc of demon slayer was very good i liked it .I even read the previous story "I transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack". good read and am looking forward to the next arc.
I can't describe how unpleasant everything suddenly became. I went from enjoying each chapter to simply deleting it from my reading list. The issue of the transmigrated is totally unnecessary...
Got to 55 and ofter transmigrators show up outta nowhere insta dropped. It's not a bad idea just stupidly abrupt and honestly not my cup of tea honestly kinda abit raw about it. Was like someone taking a dump in my cereal was really enjoying this, criticism aside this is a really good read and I'm sure people will like the change but not me all respect.
it's a great story but as of chapter 56 it had gone on different path by adding other transmigrates, for me that ruins it as it just screams a author that can't commit to what the fanfic is supposed to be as going from one anime world to the next. The author seems to have forgotten that or has picked a fanfic that they cannot make.
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Just giving a review after the latest chapter. Everything before that was 5/5. We were waiting for mc to travel to other worlds, now there are other transmigrated people out of nowhere, so I think it quite deserves this rating.
One of the best fanfic. Hope you can continue, keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Don't expect things to make sense. MC is somehow breathing underwater while holding his breath?
honestly this is the best demon slayer fic on this app. it's writing is peak. the mc is not a side character and he's both overpowered and smart , honestly a great fic . i do hope it continues to be a great fic after the demon slayer arc tho. The romance with kanae is really great but idk how you'll continue it after he leaves the verse , will she go with him or will he have the power to return whenever he wants ? that's honestly a worry of mine.
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These is the one of best fanfic i read so far writing style is good and updates are steady story is progressing in smooth way . Quite entertaining to read in most of fangic like to see more worlds like Akame ga kil , code geass , Arifureta, Naruto , Attack on titan , Tensura it will be fabulous to see different story in your writing style
I have read the author previous work: 'I transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack' and I honestly enjoyed it very much. So I can already know that in this story the grammar would be excellent as well, and the story itself would also be good. I only hope the author would first finish his previous work before he moves on to this one. At least then I could start reading the new story without worrying if the author would drop both his stories midway... Anyway, I will obviously give a five star ahead.
I’m giving myself a 5-star rating! If you enjoyed my other work, 'I Transmigrated into One Piece World with a Gift Pack', you’re sure to love this one as well. I hope you enjoy this Fanfic!
This Novel is Pretty good and creative,with the author creating “Nature Breathing” And having “Nature Mode” just like “Sage Mode” with the MCs who seemed to be likely to have Kanae as a love interest and having the three tomoe sharingan and tekkai is good and doesn't make the MC too overpowered in the beginning but I'd be good if the mc could take Kanae as his “partner” though
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A good story, I took one star off the Story Development and World Background because of the other transmigrants thing, if it hadn't been for the note about editing the story and removing them when he changed worlds, I would have dropped it. The rest of the story is well developed, as are the characters. The story in Naruto was also going well as far as I read (the last chapter that came out at the moment is 103). Unlike other readers, the romance didn't seem forced to me, some might say that he changed his personality when he met Kanae, but up until that point he had very little interaction with other characters for his personality to be known. I would recommend completely removing the other transmigrants thing from the story, only in that chapter where they appeared, many readers dropped the story despite how interesting and well developed it was up until that point. English is not my native language and I translated this review using the translator so if you see parts where I don't explain myself well it's because of that.
Revelar spoiler Like it keep at it, make the naruto arc more longer please as there are many techniques which can be created win the existence of chakra. But all in all I like it
this is all good until chapter 54 because the next chapter is meh i drop this the author made a mistake by making such a new concept
Before reading this novel, you guys should note the following points: 1. Author is very good at setting premises. He made MC well with good power and balance. 2. But author is best at disappointing his readers. Story would be going good, he will drop several disappointments here and there and eventually he dropped a nuke. 3. He follows plot too much and it is not even a valid reason. I tried defending him at first but it was a mistake. This guy wrote dumbest plots: * MC's love sequence with Kanae came out of nowhere and his personality suddenly changed into Sanji or Zenitsu without any insinuation. * This guy is strong but absolutely useless. the canon will not change even a little bit But usually other authors won't write a plot where this issue comes to us. Usually they will use time skip or something like trapped trope to get around but this guy is putting it in headlight. * He made MC meet First Moon in a mansion where they went to search for Muzan. There they met Kokushibo then they fought until sunrise and he didn't use his full strength as he didn't want to alert Muzan It is okay until now but when First Moon could have been killed by sunlight as fight stretched till sunrise he simply could have stalled him with the strength he shown at the time, but when the First Moon retreated this fu**ing MC let him go. But be real, if you are going to do all this bullshit, you could have simply made MC skip that mansion all together. Why is there need for this plot? it doesn't change anything in story. * Also this guy stretched the plot too much. 4. Also guys, he broke the hidden code to not write multiple reincarnators in novel without mentioning it at first & this guy wrote it without even warning. It came out of nowhere."
This was a sick read, and I really liked the spin where they added other people from Earth, it made the story really unique and wish it continued into the 2nd world. Really miss the updates man, I hope you pick this back up, and I'd like to see you add your original flair again
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
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The 55th chapter completely ruined the whole story. it's an unnecessary development
Love the story o hope the next world he goes to is one piece as I am very curious on how you will the story but since one piece isn’t finished yet mha fanfics are usually fire.
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This story is well written and extremely well thought out. I loved that in the demon slayer world, the Mc didn't interfere with the story too much, but still managed to make an integral part of it. I liked the character dynamics with the other characters, especially with Kanae . I also love the fast pace, as it provides you with an exhilarating reading experience which doesn't bore you, even if you read the story in one go. Anyway, I loved this book and would suggest you to give it a read if you are a big demon slayer fan like me. I hope the Naruto arc performs even better :)
Nice story the first arc of demon slayer was very good i liked it .I even read the previous story "I transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack". good read and am looking forward to the next arc.
I can't describe how unpleasant everything suddenly became. I went from enjoying each chapter to simply deleting it from my reading list. The issue of the transmigrated is totally unnecessary...
Got to 55 and ofter transmigrators show up outta nowhere insta dropped. It's not a bad idea just stupidly abrupt and honestly not my cup of tea honestly kinda abit raw about it. Was like someone taking a dump in my cereal was really enjoying this, criticism aside this is a really good read and I'm sure people will like the change but not me all respect.
it's a great story but as of chapter 56 it had gone on different path by adding other transmigrates, for me that ruins it as it just screams a author that can't commit to what the fanfic is supposed to be as going from one anime world to the next. The author seems to have forgotten that or has picked a fanfic that they cannot make.
Revelar spoiler Just giving a review after the latest chapter. Everything before that was 5/5. We were waiting for mc to travel to other worlds, now there are other transmigrated people out of nowhere, so I think it quite deserves this rating.
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Don't expect things to make sense. MC is somehow breathing underwater while holding his breath?
honestly this is the best demon slayer fic on this app. it's writing is peak. the mc is not a side character and he's both overpowered and smart , honestly a great fic . i do hope it continues to be a great fic after the demon slayer arc tho. The romance with kanae is really great but idk how you'll continue it after he leaves the verse , will she go with him or will he have the power to return whenever he wants ? that's honestly a worry of mine.
Is this your original fic or no? whats the mtl or raw title? 🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆
These is the one of best fanfic i read so far writing style is good and updates are steady story is progressing in smooth way . Quite entertaining to read in most of fangic like to see more worlds like Akame ga kil , code geass , Arifureta, Naruto , Attack on titan , Tensura it will be fabulous to see different story in your writing style
I have read the author previous work: 'I transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack' and I honestly enjoyed it very much. So I can already know that in this story the grammar would be excellent as well, and the story itself would also be good. I only hope the author would first finish his previous work before he moves on to this one. At least then I could start reading the new story without worrying if the author would drop both his stories midway... Anyway, I will obviously give a five star ahead.