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"My Destined One" • Tensura X Arifureta

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Autor: VOIDKING

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Two Brothers who got summon in another world will they succeed in getting back home join them on their adventure on this new Fan-Fic.

please note that I don't own any of the characters That's are included in this Fan fic all right are reserved for their respective author

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AllenCross

Well. In general: Rimuru's unclear goals, since we are shown in the initial chapters that he got bored and wants to visit other worlds, then we find out that he is looking for the soul of his beloved and is matting by measures. The plot is not clear and everything is mixed up in some trash. Very dry, if not to say not at all, any interactions between the persanages, and even more so between the Rimuru and Hajime brothers. Ciel is just disguised knowledge about the canon (as for me it is generally superfluous). The plot is moving at the moment with the filing of Ciel according to the canon, with the frills of memories and the goals of Rimuru. The addition of the third main character (wife, girlfriend) Chloe (nothing is clear with her at all), while the author does not seem to be able to process the main two..... In general, at the moment, the rails of the canon keep this story afloat, and jumping with dubious memories and distorted goals only aggravate Rimuru. Conclusion: this is only my subjective opinion, as for me it was necessary to add everything dosed, otherwise it turns out some kind of dubious (torn) plot.

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VOIDKING

HELLO EVERYONE AUTHOR HERE HOPE YOU GUYS ARE HAVING A GOOD TIME THANKS FOR READING.

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Takshak_Bodade

Sir you are really amazing and using other anime character so properly I love that so much . And I am excited for rimuru's harem keep it up.

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Nicolas_Bahamondes

bad idea carried out badly. Putting two protagonists that move together is stupid since one will be filler and the other will stand out more. up to here the story goes back to arifureta's novel which is stupid considering that they have a being that can travel between worlds whenever it wants

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Takshak_Bodade

It's very good I like how story devlopment I am excited for luminous valentine's and kurumi , shiraori's entry new members in rimuru's harem keep it up and please don't drop this

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Melitia_Snek

Writing Quality - ⭐⭐⭐ Story Development - ⭐ Character Design - ⭐⭐ Updating Stability - ⭐⭐⭐ World Background - ⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Mafahl

you know what this looks fun, ima start reading it real quick.

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Abyss_Edge

2 MC? Brothers at that? Recipe for a writer's block..... You have a lot of bots for reviewers I see.

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Lordium

I’m going to be honest, the story is decent and it’s clear that the author spared a lot of efforts in creating this book, but there are quiet a few downsides. First of all, any person that even remotely knows how strong Rimuru is by the end of the story, will be severely disappointed by the fact that he was nerfed by a fair amount. The issue is clearly in the fact that the author simply does not posses the necessary knowledge or simply does not understand his power to a certain extent. Also, the grammar is decent, at most.

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Spirit_Rimuru

daam I can't wait for more chapter I wonder what will happened to Hinata.

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SKY_K1NG

Good story and I can't wait for more specialy that this is the first time I saw a fanfiction that reach this far in ARIFURETA novels

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Volumen 1

  1. 1
    Prologue: 2 years ago
  2. 2
    Ch.1:Invocation 2 years ago
  3. 3
    Ch.2:Tortus 2 years ago
  4. 4
    Ch.3 Status: 2 years ago
  5. 5
    Ch.4:The Slime Demon Lord 2 years ago
  6. 6
    Ch.5:Orcus Labyrinth 2 years ago
  7. 7
    Ch.6:Trap & Idiot 2 years ago
  8. 8
    Ch.7: The Monster of the Abyss 2 years ago
  9. 9
    Ch.8: The Heroes vs The Demon Lord 2 years ago
  10. 10
    Ch.9:Rimuru's Heart 2 years ago
  11. 11
    Ch.10: Yue 2 years ago
  12. 12
    Ch.11: Hydra 2 years ago
  13. 13
    Bonus Story: 2 years ago
  14. 14
    Ch.12: Overcoming the Past 2 years ago
  15. 15
    Ch 13:The Emperor and the Reaper 2 years ago
  16. 16
    Ch.14: Chloe Õ Bell 2 years ago
  17. 17
    Ch.15:The Wretched Rabbit 2 years ago
  18. 18
    Ch.16:Haulia 2 years ago
  19. 19
    Ch 17:The Haltina Forest 2 years ago
  20. 20
    Ch.18:Haulia was Shameless as Expected 2 years ago
  21. 21
    Ch 19:Training 2 years ago
  22. 22
    Ch 20: Protection of Haulia. 2 years ago
  23. 23
    Ch 21: Brook's City 2 years ago
  24. 24
    Ch 22: Miledy Raisen. 2 years ago
  25. 25
    Ch 23: Another Girl & Gravity Magic 2 years ago
  26. 26
    Ch 24: Fhuren and Ilwa. 2 years ago
  27. 27
    Ch 25: Chloe and Rimuru 2 years ago
  28. 28
    Ch 26: Unexpected Reunion! 2 years ago
  29. 29
    Ch 27: Search 2 years ago
  30. 30
    Ch 28: Tio Klaurus 2 years ago
  31. 31
    Ch 29: Battle or Massacre? 2 years ago
  32. 32
    Ch 30: Hajime became Papa 2 years ago
  33. 33
    Ch 31: Demons 2 years ago
  34. 34
    Ch 32: Rescue 2 years ago
  35. 35
    Ch 33: Reunion 2 years ago
  36. 36
    Ch 34: Confession 2 years ago
  37. 37
    Ch 35: The Unbearable Kouki 2 years ago
  38. 38
    Ch 36: White village 2 years ago
  39. 39
    Ch 37: The story of the reapers 2 years ago
  40. 40
    Ch 38: The best night for some is the most shameful for others 2 years ago
  41. 41
    Ch 39: The salvation of the reapers 2 years ago
  42. 42
    Ch 40: The Seven Archangels 2 years ago
  43. 43
    Ch 41: Saving the Angels 2 years ago
  44. 44
    Ch 42: Dialogues and the other fainted man 2 years ago
  45. 45
    Ch 43: The Duchy of Ancadi 2 years ago
  46. 46
    Ch 44: Guryen Volcano 2 years ago
  47. 47
    Ch 45: The apostle of demons 2 years ago
  48. 48
    Ch 46: Akame of the murasame 2 years ago
  49. 49
    Ch 47: Erisen 2 years ago
  50. 50
    Ch 48: Enjoying the beach and the easy Calaboose 2 years ago
  51. 51
    Ch 49: Unexpected Encounter 2 years ago
  52. 52
    Ch 50: Before the Confrontation. 2 years ago
  53. 53
    Ch 51: Traitor 2 years ago
  54. 54
    Ch 52: The Battle for Howard 2 years ago
  55. 55
    Ch 53: Demons vs Gods 2 years ago
  56. 56
    Ch 54: The True Purpose of the Gods. 2 years ago
  57. 57
    Ch 55: After the Battle 2 years ago
  58. 58
    Ch 56: Resting 2 years ago
  59. 59
    Ch 57: The Haulia reappear 2 years ago
  60. 60
    Ch 58: White and The Nightmare 2 years ago
  61. 61
    Ch 59: War Declaration. 2 years ago
  62. 62
    Ch 60: The Empire 2 years ago
  63. 63
    Ch 61: Infiltrating The Castle 2 years ago
  64. 64
    Ch 62: Start of War Part 1 2 years ago
  65. 65
    Ch 63: Start of War part 2 2 years ago
  66. 66
    CH 64: Dream 2 years ago
  67. 67
    Ch 65: War Continue and Another War? 2 years ago
  68. 68
    Ch 66: Imperial Castle – Part 1 2 years ago
  69. 69
    Ch 67: Imperial Castle – The Finale 2 years ago
  70. 70
    Ch 68: Invasion I 2 years ago
  71. 71
    Ch 69: Invasion II 2 years ago
  72. 72
    Ch 70: Welcome and Engagement Party 2 years ago
  73. 73
    Ch 71: HAURIA VS EMPIRE - PART 1 2 years ago
  74. 74
    Ch 72: Date and Confession I 2 years ago
  75. 75
    Ch 73: Date and Confession II 2 years ago
  76. 76
    Ch 74: Kurumi and Shiraori vs 4 Celestials 2 years ago
  77. 77
    Ch 75: Black Progenitor vs Sinful king of Lust 2 years ago
  78. 78
    Ch 76: New City and Arrival at Tortus 2 years ago
  79. 79
    Ch 77: Challenge of The Labyrinth 2 years ago
  80. 80
    Ch 78: The Conqueror of Flames 2 years ago
  81. 81
    Ch 79: Ideal World 2 years ago
  82. 82
    Ch 80: Awakening I 2 years ago
  83. 83
    Ch 81: Awakening II 2 years ago
  84. 84
    Ch 82: Reunion I 2 years ago
  85. 85
    Ch 83: Reunion II 2 years ago
  86. 86
    Ch 84: Shea Date 1 years ago
  87. 87
    Ch 85: Feelings that can't be Tell 1 years ago
  88. 88
    Ch 86: Back to the Kingdom 1 years ago
  89. 89
    Ch 87: Visiting Myu 1 years ago
  90. 90
    Ch 88: The Seven Endless Spirit 1 years ago
  91. 91
    Ch 89: Blessing of the Endless 1 years ago
  92. 92
    Ch 90: Remembering the past 1 years ago
  93. 93
    Ch 91: Departure and Fragments of the Past 1 years ago
  94. 94
    Ch 92: The Frost Caravans 1 years ago
  95. 95
    Ch 93: Annoying Labyrinth 1 years ago
  96. 96
    Ch 94: The Creators 1 years ago

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