Reviews of Naruto : I received a system shop!! by Dao_Master_Penguin - Webnovel

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Baby421

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Hayate_Ayasaki_

esto ya cayo? ......................................................................................................................

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!! I love how MC (Zasu) not afraid to change the plot.. I also don't mind the harem, but please let Hinata be with Naruto... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁😁👍👍👍

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A9B
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early but, good potential keep up.

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Infinitesimal

Nice, more please the history is very good full,ando Legendary moment, the webnovel, bro You inspered a me ................................,............

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Gabichu_Yeah

POV: When you finally find a fanfic where the MC isn't afraid to change the plot, but it turns out the MC is disappointing ..............................................................................................

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Tron16

Love the fanfic man keep it up ...............................................................................................

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DaoistoSXxRV

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Ezzaldien_s

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Shane_Town

it's pretty cool so far a system shop seems well you all know lol but it hasn't gone off the deep end yet so give it a shot there's not a ton to be said since it's only at five chapters but I has promise

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Dao_Master_Penguin

Hello I’m here for a shameless review! Plus I wanted to inform those that review my fanfic about honesty. I don’t mind negative reviews As long as it’s truthful. With that being said if you have any negative views about the fanfic please give explanations on why you do. So that I can work on them and try to fix it going forward. I won’t delete any reviews unless they are verbally hurtful or someone obviously trolling! Please no bot reviews, positive or negative. It isn’t fair to authors who are genuinely trying to write a story! Thank you to everyone who reviews the fanfic! Positive or negative!

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Baby421

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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Hayate_Ayasaki_

esto ya cayo? ......................................................................................................................

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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great Naruto fanfiction!!! I love how MC (Zasu) not afraid to change the plot.. I also don't mind the harem, but please let Hinata be with Naruto... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁😁👍👍👍

2yr
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A9B
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early but, good potential keep up.

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Infinitesimal

Nice, more please the history is very good full,ando Legendary moment, the webnovel, bro You inspered a me ................................,............

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Gabichu_Yeah

POV: When you finally find a fanfic where the MC isn't afraid to change the plot, but it turns out the MC is disappointing ..............................................................................................

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Tron16

Love the fanfic man keep it up ...............................................................................................

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DaoistoSXxRV

It's a nice book ___________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _________________________________

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Ezzaldien_s

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Gd_Sys

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Shane_Town

it's pretty cool so far a system shop seems well you all know lol but it hasn't gone off the deep end yet so give it a shot there's not a ton to be said since it's only at five chapters but I has promise

2yr
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Dao_Master_Penguin

Hello I’m here for a shameless review! Plus I wanted to inform those that review my fanfic about honesty. I don’t mind negative reviews As long as it’s truthful. With that being said if you have any negative views about the fanfic please give explanations on why you do. So that I can work on them and try to fix it going forward. I won’t delete any reviews unless they are verbally hurtful or someone obviously trolling! Please no bot reviews, positive or negative. It isn’t fair to authors who are genuinely trying to write a story! Thank you to everyone who reviews the fanfic! Positive or negative!

2yr
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