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Don't wanna be that guy but isn't this story supposed to be in the female lead section ......................................................
It is very fun to read and is very well made ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….………………………………..
Had to do another review because you restated the story!! I’m honestly loving it just as much as the original!! I still think it’s an awesome take for an DXD fanfic! Looking forward to reading more in the future the only thing I would do is delete the old story so it doesn’t get confusing!! But ignore the hate it’s an great story!!
...but...the first 9chapter...are cano for your story or what??...because I liked them and the change between the two story is too great... it's a good story...a bit to much r*p*, sm*t and similar but the relationship between the goodness and the Fmc was great idea why change it?...😟😟 you will maintain the story other than change the start? like the fight with the 6primordial or what happened between Luna and Ophis?
Pretty great so far with some… cultured scenes *ahem* well not much else to say so far so see ya later Yea yea yup yea yea I yea yea yup yup yea yea yup yea I agree yea yea yup yea
Love it so far. Can't wait for more! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Loving this!!! Can't wait to read more interesting storyline and definitely different take then I have seen before!!! Looking forward to read more!!!
I like the story so far can say much more since there isn't more to say --------------------- ------------------------------------------------------
I love this book and I really hope that you keep updating -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Don't wanna be that guy but isn't this story supposed to be in the female lead section ......................................................
It is very fun to read and is very well made ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….………………………………..
Had to do another review because you restated the story!! I’m honestly loving it just as much as the original!! I still think it’s an awesome take for an DXD fanfic! Looking forward to reading more in the future the only thing I would do is delete the old story so it doesn’t get confusing!! But ignore the hate it’s an great story!!
...but...the first 9chapter...are cano for your story or what??...because I liked them and the change between the two story is too great... it's a good story...a bit to much r*p*, sm*t and similar but the relationship between the goodness and the Fmc was great idea why change it?...😟😟 you will maintain the story other than change the start? like the fight with the 6primordial or what happened between Luna and Ophis?
Pretty great so far with some… cultured scenes *ahem* well not much else to say so far so see ya later Yea yea yup yea yea I yea yea yup yup yea yea yup yea I agree yea yea yup yea
Love it so far. Can't wait for more! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Loving this!!! Can't wait to read more interesting storyline and definitely different take then I have seen before!!! Looking forward to read more!!!
I like the story so far can say much more since there isn't more to say --------------------- ------------------------------------------------------
I love this book and I really hope that you keep updating -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
is this novel dropped or something please say no ;-;