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why no more chaps!?! but everything else is good, especially the slice of life aspect
So, After reading 23 chapters .... here's something I want to say.. . ~It's different yeah & kinda looks like mc is passing time with no ambition... ~but too slow... since it's a slice of life but it also quickly gets boring ..... yeah it has its funny side too... ~golden finger which is a gacha is pretty much useless, as there's not a single useful thing it has given to mc except futon for sleeping .... ~MC lives in a sect but we know nothing about it except it's righteous with some trust issues ~Mc is being brainwashed but the author gives zero f's about it 😂 ~Mc has a strong body but he's afraid of pain... ~Author introduced another transmigrator but as I said mc gives zero f's about it... ~There's not much development in story till now nor much revealed about the world .👍 ..... I mean it's good if you have nothing else to read but a bit laid back if you want something to pump your blood.....
is this harem? I hope it's harem .......a.akqlJddjejdjjcjfkci jdjsjskskidodkdk jeieieididididudududufuddjdjjdkdjsksjdjdjdudjdudjdjdkckcjdkkekdkdkdjdjdkdididjdidididududududududuufjr
I'm a simple man I see ganyu and I click. skskakakksksksmsmsmdmdmsmkdddmdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdkdkdkdkkekekekdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdrjrjrjdj
Okay, like, 39 chapters in, and there's; 1 review of my cover and 1 asking if this is a harem...I'm desperate, so here's my honest review, as objective as I can. I think my writing leaves a lot more to be desired. Even I feel some lines are a bit too forced or incoherent to the whole paragraph/chapter. Update 1 ch/day, won't ever miss since I have many stockpiles. The story I think is pretty good. Maybe pacing is a bit cluttered and out of place sometimes but I feel it's already good for WN standards. My characters' acts are still prone to accommodate the plot, but only sometimes. I've genuinely tried to not make MC and his frenns act for the plot and I think it's pretty successful so far. To be 100% honest, the world is kind of doo doo, and by that, I mean the world isn't the main point of the first volume. 1st volume is mainly about MC's mentality and interactions with others, not building the world, so it leaves a lot to be desired, at least on vol.1. I have nothing to do, and 2 reviews is so sad. So here's the 3rd review, hoping for more real ones to come .3. Here's the current cover's pic if anyone wants it
why no more chaps!?! but everything else is good, especially the slice of life aspect
So, After reading 23 chapters .... here's something I want to say.. . ~It's different yeah & kinda looks like mc is passing time with no ambition... ~but too slow... since it's a slice of life but it also quickly gets boring ..... yeah it has its funny side too... ~golden finger which is a gacha is pretty much useless, as there's not a single useful thing it has given to mc except futon for sleeping .... ~MC lives in a sect but we know nothing about it except it's righteous with some trust issues ~Mc is being brainwashed but the author gives zero f's about it 😂 ~Mc has a strong body but he's afraid of pain... ~Author introduced another transmigrator but as I said mc gives zero f's about it... ~There's not much development in story till now nor much revealed about the world .👍 ..... I mean it's good if you have nothing else to read but a bit laid back if you want something to pump your blood.....
is this harem? I hope it's harem .......a.akqlJddjejdjjcjfkci jdjsjskskidodkdk jeieieididididudududufuddjdjjdkdjsksjdjdjdudjdudjdjdkckcjdkkekdkdkdjdjdkdididjdidididududududududuufjr
I'm a simple man I see ganyu and I click. skskakakksksksmsmsmdmdmsmkdddmdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdkdkdkdkkekekekdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkdkdkkdrjrjrjdj
Okay, like, 39 chapters in, and there's; 1 review of my cover and 1 asking if this is a harem...I'm desperate, so here's my honest review, as objective as I can. I think my writing leaves a lot more to be desired. Even I feel some lines are a bit too forced or incoherent to the whole paragraph/chapter. Update 1 ch/day, won't ever miss since I have many stockpiles. The story I think is pretty good. Maybe pacing is a bit cluttered and out of place sometimes but I feel it's already good for WN standards. My characters' acts are still prone to accommodate the plot, but only sometimes. I've genuinely tried to not make MC and his frenns act for the plot and I think it's pretty successful so far. To be 100% honest, the world is kind of doo doo, and by that, I mean the world isn't the main point of the first volume. 1st volume is mainly about MC's mentality and interactions with others, not building the world, so it leaves a lot to be desired, at least on vol.1. I have nothing to do, and 2 reviews is so sad. So here's the 3rd review, hoping for more real ones to come .3. Here's the current cover's pic if anyone wants it