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ugh I would have left this fic alone but I saw someone make a review because it was none harem.so I make this to cancel it out ,.
this is a good story. it brings interesting ideas and it doesn't feel like it's leaving other characters behind like other fics I have to say the only thing that kinda irks me is how far your pushing the concept of space powers. I mean manipulating space energy to cut kurogiri. the rest is fine but that seemed a bit out their.
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ugh I would have left this fic alone but I saw someone make a review because it was none harem.so I make this to cancel it out
Bro, this is fantastic fanfic with a great world and character development. I have been looking for a hiraishin fanfic for a long time, and yours is the first one I have seen or read in a ridiculously long time. Keep it up, and I will keep giving you support.
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Could you please shift this fic to scribblehub? I was loving it, very unique take and a refreshing version of MHA, but then the new webnovel policy hit and I cant read it here anymore. I'm sure a lot of readers want to continue enjoying your work, please consider at least crossposting if you shifting entirely.
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Hmm pretty good ngl. The updates are slower than a few other fics on this site and I dont think it deserves a 4.93, maybe a 4.8, but who am I to ruin the author's day? 5 stars.
One of the major concerns I had going forward into this fanfic was the lack of offensive power of the quirk. Since if you just see the surface level use for teleportation tags, there is hardly any offensive power here against people like with physical enhancement quirks. But the Author handled it well and made full use of his abilities to add offensive power to the quirk. In my opinion, one of the few MHA fanfics on Webnovel which makes full use of the given quirk without making the readers feel frustrated. So, 5 stars from me, writing quality is great, pacing seems fine so far and the best thing is character development of not only heroes but the villains too which is a plus point for me. Good work Author!
this is one of the best mha fanfic I have ever read. the mc quirk is like flying thunder god Jutsu minato use. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
OK! imma give my honest review. at first, I just added this fanfic because of the quirk and I thought that the story will be bland and rushed, how happy I am to be wrong. This is 100% Above average fanfic right here, the interaction were not forced and somehow realistic. The author is not following cannon plot (THANK YOU BTW) and the plot the author made is actually amazing. There is no romance yet which im thankful for, the mc should focus on his hero career first (and i hope no harem). The mc although Op in a sense, he's not unbeatable (trust me, this is good, Always winning fights without any drawbacks will ruin this fanfic) I highly recommend this to people who wants good/amazing MHA fanfic. it's just somewhat a bummer that the update is 2 times a week (?) well, that's all really, read this and you won't regret it.
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IT was good, Mc is powerful but not overpowered. And i like the character development, mainly The mc and shinso. keep it up author sama! 😊😊 mc should have his ability level up soon.
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I really like how the story is progressing so far and hope that it will go on for a long time and I would definitely recommend giving it a try for anyone interested in MHA fanfics and even if you are not
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Oh man this is a 10/10 fanfic, versatile quirk, great pacing, and very cool mc. I hope u do more fanfic cuz the way u wrote this one is great 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Good quality of writing, along with everything and the diversity of the quirk, I liked this story, but I would like to see how the character develops.
This is so good I love it. The mc is not overpowered to the point where he overshadows everyone. The pace is good and the plot is also good soo far overall I love it. Plz update more give as more chapters
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So when is the battle of Minato(Kazuya) Vs Obito(Mirio)? Writing Quality: Cool! Stability of Updates: Would love to have 2 chapters or 3 Chapters per week Story Development: We will see it next chapters since we already know what will happen and excited what'll he change in the story. Character Design: Cool kid and loner type but the best friend to have in your life. World Background: I hope to see the adults of the mc and his class All in all it is pretty cool for the chapters since it already have 10 chapters so we need more chapters to add a new review. You author just gained a new follower!
very good story, with a very versatile ability that honestly I couldn't think of even half of all the movements he does, very well written and very addictive, my only complaint is that I wish he would update more often that I can't stand the wait!
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pretty cool very enjoyable ff - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - what are looking for👀
Fun fanfiction, the MC is quite interesting and the use of powers is neat. The plot change from canon is welcome, it's a good decision making the villains more dangerous, although some canon characters act OOC but so far it's okay.
ugh I would have left this fic alone but I saw someone make a review because it was none harem.so I make this to cancel it out ,.
this is a good story. it brings interesting ideas and it doesn't feel like it's leaving other characters behind like other fics I have to say the only thing that kinda irks me is how far your pushing the concept of space powers. I mean manipulating space energy to cut kurogiri. the rest is fine but that seemed a bit out their.
Revelar spoiler ugh I would have left this fic alone but I saw someone make a review because it was none harem.so I make this to cancel it out
Bro, this is fantastic fanfic with a great world and character development. I have been looking for a hiraishin fanfic for a long time, and yours is the first one I have seen or read in a ridiculously long time. Keep it up, and I will keep giving you support.
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Could you please shift this fic to scribblehub? I was loving it, very unique take and a refreshing version of MHA, but then the new webnovel policy hit and I cant read it here anymore. I'm sure a lot of readers want to continue enjoying your work, please consider at least crossposting if you shifting entirely.
It's fine, but the dialogue is very cringy and unrealistic at times ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Hmm pretty good ngl. The updates are slower than a few other fics on this site and I dont think it deserves a 4.93, maybe a 4.8, but who am I to ruin the author's day? 5 stars.
One of the major concerns I had going forward into this fanfic was the lack of offensive power of the quirk. Since if you just see the surface level use for teleportation tags, there is hardly any offensive power here against people like with physical enhancement quirks. But the Author handled it well and made full use of his abilities to add offensive power to the quirk. In my opinion, one of the few MHA fanfics on Webnovel which makes full use of the given quirk without making the readers feel frustrated. So, 5 stars from me, writing quality is great, pacing seems fine so far and the best thing is character development of not only heroes but the villains too which is a plus point for me. Good work Author!
this is one of the best mha fanfic I have ever read. the mc quirk is like flying thunder god Jutsu minato use. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
OK! imma give my honest review. at first, I just added this fanfic because of the quirk and I thought that the story will be bland and rushed, how happy I am to be wrong. This is 100% Above average fanfic right here, the interaction were not forced and somehow realistic. The author is not following cannon plot (THANK YOU BTW) and the plot the author made is actually amazing. There is no romance yet which im thankful for, the mc should focus on his hero career first (and i hope no harem). The mc although Op in a sense, he's not unbeatable (trust me, this is good, Always winning fights without any drawbacks will ruin this fanfic) I highly recommend this to people who wants good/amazing MHA fanfic. it's just somewhat a bummer that the update is 2 times a week (?) well, that's all really, read this and you won't regret it.
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IT was good, Mc is powerful but not overpowered. And i like the character development, mainly The mc and shinso. keep it up author sama! 😊😊 mc should have his ability level up soon.
keep on working ....................................................................................................................................................................................
I really like how the story is progressing so far and hope that it will go on for a long time and I would definitely recommend giving it a try for anyone interested in MHA fanfics and even if you are not
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Oh man this is a 10/10 fanfic, versatile quirk, great pacing, and very cool mc. I hope u do more fanfic cuz the way u wrote this one is great 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Good quality of writing, along with everything and the diversity of the quirk, I liked this story, but I would like to see how the character develops.
This is so good I love it. The mc is not overpowered to the point where he overshadows everyone. The pace is good and the plot is also good soo far overall I love it. Plz update more give as more chapters
Pretty Nice to read ...........................................................................................................................
................................................................................ hhbjiuujjjeieosjdjeieiejeheuidjwheurheken3urofjriwjdhfi3kediwiej
So when is the battle of Minato(Kazuya) Vs Obito(Mirio)? Writing Quality: Cool! Stability of Updates: Would love to have 2 chapters or 3 Chapters per week Story Development: We will see it next chapters since we already know what will happen and excited what'll he change in the story. Character Design: Cool kid and loner type but the best friend to have in your life. World Background: I hope to see the adults of the mc and his class All in all it is pretty cool for the chapters since it already have 10 chapters so we need more chapters to add a new review. You author just gained a new follower!
very good story, with a very versatile ability that honestly I couldn't think of even half of all the movements he does, very well written and very addictive, my only complaint is that I wish he would update more often that I can't stand the wait!
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pretty cool very enjoyable ff - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - what are looking for👀
Fun fanfiction, the MC is quite interesting and the use of powers is neat. The plot change from canon is welcome, it's a good decision making the villains more dangerous, although some canon characters act OOC but so far it's okay.