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The first chapter has No bad grammar, the story development is a 5/5 the character design is good the world background has not been shown yet but I expect it to be good all in all a 5/5 story.
This fanfic is what I like to call Dream tier, because it's such a good fanfic that there's a high chance of it being dropped like many Dream Tiers. Everything from the story development to the world background is just amazing and I highly recommend to read it for yourself. I just hope that the author doesn't abandon it like many other very good fanfics out there left to rot while the the bad ones keeps getting updated.
Thanks!! ............................................................................................................................... ...............................................................
There are very few stories I keep in mind to re read (I find re reading boring most of the time), this one has made it on that list. I’m not gonna wax poetic or nuthin’ but this one was amazing. There’s some slight Issues in typos every odd chapter but the way the characters and their motivations are done, is great. Huge respect to the author for finishing this.
This author is amazing! Giving Naruto Johan LIebert vibes especially because he imitated a certain scene involving a former cop and a wine bottle multiple times~
Reading this, I can say that the author has a very interesting mind. Been quite a while since a novel made me cry. But honestly, this is undoubtedly one of the best novels I've read in a few years .
I read quite a few chapters so I think I'm eligible for giving a review. Overall the fanfic was good quality. At least before I dropped it since I have no clue how it's doing now. The few gripes I had with this story was the illogical decisions made by the characters which resulted in Naruto being in prison before he goes completely bonkers. My memory is not clear but I think he gets arrested for killing Itachi and Izumi through the ploys of Orochimaru but because the characters lack no common sense in the story, he goes to prison instead of a yamanaka confirming his story. Another gripe was the fact that this story tried too hard to be like the Joker.
Revelar spoiler
one of the best ff. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
This book is really, really good. An AU where Naruto's parents survived but in turn had twins after him. The effects of such events imagined. . You just have to read.
One of THE BEST stories I've ever read. The MC Naruto Namikaze is like a love child between THANOS & THE JOKER and the best part is that it's not even forced. The story flows so naturally, the only thing I couldn't understand is that why was everyone so against the MC but then at end it all makes sense. In other words it's a small but EPIC STORY.
Just wow, a great reading experience, literally like a breath of fresh air in this app, author you just gained a fan. I hope I can read something more with this quality
I have read my share of novels or fanfics but I was also the who didn't liked short novels but this one is something else I can't say this is the best novel but this novel gives me similar feelings I got from only some novels but those were of of thousand of hundereds of chapters but this one gave the same feeling from them in only less than 50 chapters in short I just love it ❤❤
one of the best i've ever read .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
The book is simply a master piece but I feel that if I keep reading it will change my view of the world not the shinobi world my world it’s a literal insane master piece
Sorry author, it's too dark for me, I'll have to leave it, I wish you luck [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
wow , it's too remarkable but I'm sorry I can't bear to read it anymore Naruto neglected by parents were a thing that really saddened me,thank you author for such hearth breaking novel
Revelar spoiler
Read this on ff.net One of my favourites .,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,xzczxzczczczczcz.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.
Honestly an amazing work but it's not for everyone out there. You will see the absolute dark in this work. If you do not like that type of work just don't bother reading it. For people who do like this particular genre, it is absolutely something you should read.
This fanfic reminds of the relationship joker had with Harley Quinn but this time, Naruto will truly trust Ino just because she was willing to die for him
The story so far has shown so much content that it is difficult to say everything in a paragraph, it has had action, mystery, comedy, tragedy (a lot) and philosophy. The author is creating a story in the world of Naruto and uses elements from the DC Universe by giving many Joker traits to the MC. It's very entertaining to read if you like all the dark and macabre treatment it's taking, but that just makes it even more interesting and fun to read. My level of English is not very high but at least I have not found any grammatical errors so far, so the reading is very fluid. The only negative point that it has in my opinion so far is the small number of chapters and the very possible abandonment, because fans as good as this one are almost always abandoned for some reason. For the author when you read this, I love this story don't leave it! I'm not a review expert but I did my best.
Revelar spoiler
The story is full of holes and illogical. First, and one of the biggest holes is that Naruto did not use FTG effectively first in his fights, he only used it once in any fight that appeared, for example, against Orochimaru the first time he almost did not use it, although from my point of view and many consider that FTG if used effectively can certainly beat Orochimaru. Secondly, Naruto clearly sayed that he was worried about Itachi, his girlfriend and his family but didn't even think to tag them with FTG mark?? He could always go right in and save Izumi and even confirm his sister's position as an intelligent person he could at least do it but no he didn't. Then there is the whole accusation part. Yamanka can see the memory of a dead body even after its death but they can't check the Hokage's son's memory to confirm his claims?? And the torture part also with Minato as Hokage, the supreme leader in the village. Can't he sit a guard from the ANBU to his son under the excuse of guarding?? Wasn't he able to use this torture as an excuse to move him to another place?? There is a lot that this story misses and you could have made Naruto a villain in easier ways relying on that his reality based only on the books but you got yourself into a illogical drama in order to maximize the effect just sorry but you failed. As a final note, I'm not against Naruto as a villain, but this story went in the wrong direction
I usually don't read fictions with a chapter count lower than 30, but I coincidently made an exception today, and what a good decision it was. The story is good, the writing is better, and the chapters are long enough. I also didn't expect the direction the story took (even though it was heavily foreshadowed) since I haven't read this type of MC in a while. I was also too absorbed to care about what might happen in the future, among other things. It's that good. At this point, I'm addicted.
I thought naruto neglext fics died out because the fics content gave their own authors cancer. Ive only read the first chapter, but I was happy to see non of the usual tropes that would've given me aids. Based on the first chapter, it seems pretty bueno. but author, can you tell me what this is? I saw a bunch of folks talking about it, and I just wanna know, ya know?
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I thought I would see a villain Naruto but all I see is an overly humble attitude even when he's neglected but overall it's good keep up the good work author-san (sorry if my English is bad as it's my 3rd language)
Good so far slightly. Dislike the MCS lack of hatred towards his parents but overall it's a good story and I hope you don't drop this so it is currently a 5.0 for me
I, like every 'normal' human being, give myself five stars. I hope you enjoy this story and every review and comment is appreciated! Please give this fanfic a chance :)
The first chapter has No bad grammar, the story development is a 5/5 the character design is good the world background has not been shown yet but I expect it to be good all in all a 5/5 story.
This fanfic is what I like to call Dream tier, because it's such a good fanfic that there's a high chance of it being dropped like many Dream Tiers. Everything from the story development to the world background is just amazing and I highly recommend to read it for yourself. I just hope that the author doesn't abandon it like many other very good fanfics out there left to rot while the the bad ones keeps getting updated.
Thanks!! ............................................................................................................................... ...............................................................
There are very few stories I keep in mind to re read (I find re reading boring most of the time), this one has made it on that list. I’m not gonna wax poetic or nuthin’ but this one was amazing. There’s some slight Issues in typos every odd chapter but the way the characters and their motivations are done, is great. Huge respect to the author for finishing this.
This author is amazing! Giving Naruto Johan LIebert vibes especially because he imitated a certain scene involving a former cop and a wine bottle multiple times~
Reading this, I can say that the author has a very interesting mind. Been quite a while since a novel made me cry. But honestly, this is undoubtedly one of the best novels I've read in a few years .
I read quite a few chapters so I think I'm eligible for giving a review. Overall the fanfic was good quality. At least before I dropped it since I have no clue how it's doing now. The few gripes I had with this story was the illogical decisions made by the characters which resulted in Naruto being in prison before he goes completely bonkers. My memory is not clear but I think he gets arrested for killing Itachi and Izumi through the ploys of Orochimaru but because the characters lack no common sense in the story, he goes to prison instead of a yamanaka confirming his story. Another gripe was the fact that this story tried too hard to be like the Joker.
Revelar spoiler one of the best ff. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
This book is really, really good. An AU where Naruto's parents survived but in turn had twins after him. The effects of such events imagined. . You just have to read.
One of THE BEST stories I've ever read. The MC Naruto Namikaze is like a love child between THANOS & THE JOKER and the best part is that it's not even forced. The story flows so naturally, the only thing I couldn't understand is that why was everyone so against the MC but then at end it all makes sense. In other words it's a small but EPIC STORY.
Just wow, a great reading experience, literally like a breath of fresh air in this app, author you just gained a fan. I hope I can read something more with this quality
I have read my share of novels or fanfics but I was also the who didn't liked short novels but this one is something else I can't say this is the best novel but this novel gives me similar feelings I got from only some novels but those were of of thousand of hundereds of chapters but this one gave the same feeling from them in only less than 50 chapters in short I just love it ❤❤
one of the best i've ever read .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
The book is simply a master piece but I feel that if I keep reading it will change my view of the world not the shinobi world my world it’s a literal insane master piece
Sorry author, it's too dark for me, I'll have to leave it, I wish you luck [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
wow , it's too remarkable but I'm sorry I can't bear to read it anymore Naruto neglected by parents were a thing that really saddened me,thank you author for such hearth breaking novel
Revelar spoiler Read this on ff.net One of my favourites .,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,xzczxzczczczczcz.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.
Honestly an amazing work but it's not for everyone out there. You will see the absolute dark in this work. If you do not like that type of work just don't bother reading it. For people who do like this particular genre, it is absolutely something you should read.
This fanfic reminds of the relationship joker had with Harley Quinn but this time, Naruto will truly trust Ino just because she was willing to die for him
The story so far has shown so much content that it is difficult to say everything in a paragraph, it has had action, mystery, comedy, tragedy (a lot) and philosophy. The author is creating a story in the world of Naruto and uses elements from the DC Universe by giving many Joker traits to the MC. It's very entertaining to read if you like all the dark and macabre treatment it's taking, but that just makes it even more interesting and fun to read. My level of English is not very high but at least I have not found any grammatical errors so far, so the reading is very fluid. The only negative point that it has in my opinion so far is the small number of chapters and the very possible abandonment, because fans as good as this one are almost always abandoned for some reason. For the author when you read this, I love this story don't leave it! I'm not a review expert but I did my best.
Revelar spoiler The story is full of holes and illogical. First, and one of the biggest holes is that Naruto did not use FTG effectively first in his fights, he only used it once in any fight that appeared, for example, against Orochimaru the first time he almost did not use it, although from my point of view and many consider that FTG if used effectively can certainly beat Orochimaru. Secondly, Naruto clearly sayed that he was worried about Itachi, his girlfriend and his family but didn't even think to tag them with FTG mark?? He could always go right in and save Izumi and even confirm his sister's position as an intelligent person he could at least do it but no he didn't. Then there is the whole accusation part. Yamanka can see the memory of a dead body even after its death but they can't check the Hokage's son's memory to confirm his claims?? And the torture part also with Minato as Hokage, the supreme leader in the village. Can't he sit a guard from the ANBU to his son under the excuse of guarding?? Wasn't he able to use this torture as an excuse to move him to another place?? There is a lot that this story misses and you could have made Naruto a villain in easier ways relying on that his reality based only on the books but you got yourself into a illogical drama in order to maximize the effect just sorry but you failed. As a final note, I'm not against Naruto as a villain, but this story went in the wrong direction
I usually don't read fictions with a chapter count lower than 30, but I coincidently made an exception today, and what a good decision it was. The story is good, the writing is better, and the chapters are long enough. I also didn't expect the direction the story took (even though it was heavily foreshadowed) since I haven't read this type of MC in a while. I was also too absorbed to care about what might happen in the future, among other things. It's that good. At this point, I'm addicted.
I thought naruto neglext fics died out because the fics content gave their own authors cancer. Ive only read the first chapter, but I was happy to see non of the usual tropes that would've given me aids. Based on the first chapter, it seems pretty bueno. but author, can you tell me what this is? I saw a bunch of folks talking about it, and I just wanna know, ya know?
More more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
I thought I would see a villain Naruto but all I see is an overly humble attitude even when he's neglected but overall it's good keep up the good work author-san (sorry if my English is bad as it's my 3rd language)
Good so far slightly. Dislike the MCS lack of hatred towards his parents but overall it's a good story and I hope you don't drop this so it is currently a 5.0 for me
I, like every 'normal' human being, give myself five stars. I hope you enjoy this story and every review and comment is appreciated! Please give this fanfic a chance :)