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Es muy corto. Pero muy llamativo, los personajes, muy atractivos, el tema principal se explota bien🥵🥵. Un poco forzado pero atrapante. La falta de capítulos es lamentable. Pero al menos el último lo dejo con un final abiento a las fantasías y pensamiento. Y no queda mal para este cierre.
this is just soooooo awesome !!!!! author please please update!!!! I love your novels!!!!
Very good. Hope you continue. First time I see an exhibitionist system and with Gwen Stacy too. Perfection. You could have her do some daring things and then have the system give her the option that law enforcement and people that don't like exhibitionism will ignore her and not arrest her. Which might make her become even more daring.
Please continue this author, don't drop this. MoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMore.
please continue this author, this is a work of art that should be spread to all, for research purposes of course. .
More more more more more more more more. When will you next update author? Btw, nice work on this.👌 /////////////////////////////////////
this is good maybe have peter parker as husband and have magik as her girlfriend since she is hot and is on the top fifty strongest mutants.
Hello, I see YURI here, it's yuri only? as a guy, I don't really wanna read a story from the point of view of a girl that like guys, but if it's yuri, I don't mind at all, please tell ;) good luck with this story!
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Es muy corto. Pero muy llamativo, los personajes, muy atractivos, el tema principal se explota bien🥵🥵. Un poco forzado pero atrapante. La falta de capítulos es lamentable. Pero al menos el último lo dejo con un final abiento a las fantasías y pensamiento. Y no queda mal para este cierre.
this is just soooooo awesome !!!!! author please please update!!!! I love your novels!!!!
Very good. Hope you continue. First time I see an exhibitionist system and with Gwen Stacy too. Perfection. You could have her do some daring things and then have the system give her the option that law enforcement and people that don't like exhibitionism will ignore her and not arrest her. Which might make her become even more daring.
Please continue this author, don't drop this. MoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMoreMore.
please continue this author, this is a work of art that should be spread to all, for research purposes of course. .
More more more more more more more more. When will you next update author? Btw, nice work on this.👌 /////////////////////////////////////
this is good maybe have peter parker as husband and have magik as her girlfriend since she is hot and is on the top fifty strongest mutants.
Hello, I see YURI here, it's yuri only? as a guy, I don't really wanna read a story from the point of view of a girl that like guys, but if it's yuri, I don't mind at all, please tell ;) good luck with this story!
good story 🐱😁 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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