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I went through your book and it seems pretty interesting. Especially your manga type of cover. It literally looks as if the hero and heroine are coming out of the page. May it can actually become a comic as well. I'd enjoy that even.
I can't stop reading this book. The synopsis alone is a thrill to make you jump into the story. Sometimes, at the darkest part of our heart, we find love. I want to see more developments
Wow! This book is so amazing. I have read books but I think this book is different;the story development, vocabularies, author's confidence and the series of interesting scenes are just good. I would not mind, if the author decides to cross 1000 chapters, I would be right here reading every single word. Regards.
This book is lit and it deserve nothing less than a 5-star rating. The character design is unique and fantastic. I am already in love with the character Derek and Aurora. I just can't wait to read how their love would blossom. I hope Derek forgives Aurora's father's debt. Stupendous job author Juu. Kudos💯💯💯💯💯😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great! I am so thrilled already, hopefully I'll get to follow up with the journey of this book. it nice and interesting judging from the blurb.
New to this app and bumping into this story has given me a nice first experience to this genre. I like the author's style of writing and I'm glad I didn't skip this. You should try it too. 🥰🥰🥰
[Reviewed on: 08-09-2022] [Reading status: 3 chapters] [Reviewer: Aysel Inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - Talking about the cover first, please add some cover. Without it the book seems like a dropped or deleted version. - Synopsis seems good, I still suggest to shuffle it. Move the later part of synopsis up and the scene [take from chapter which is placed in synopsis] move it down as second half of synopsis. - Now let's move to the title, I still don't understand what significance it holds. Mind changing it to less poetic and more direct title? Because this one won't catch attention at all, also it's too vague to give anything about the plot. - Let's directly slip to chapter 1, it was interesting, hyped, catchy and intriguing. Good work there. - I grew bored soon in the middle of chapter 2 until the slap scene came in. Good job in putting it as somewhat cliffhanger. - Chapter 3 was great in terms of unfolding more into the plotline and taking us to why the abduction occurred. - I personally loved how the information was split into chunks to make sure the reader would grasp everything and not forget or overlook it. - However, lastly please don't make the paragraphs more than 6 lines It just tire the eyes with the outlook.
No doubt how this book earned an award. The story is amazing! It felt like the emotions of the MC was also the real emotions of the author. It was beautiful and touching. Keep up the good work!
This novel is quite good. very interesting to follow the storyline. Neat characterizations and a strong plot make the reader not easily bored.
wow, the first story is very nice and this one too is such an interesting story.. keep it up, Dear ............................................................
Love the book. The writer's work is impeccable and would love to read more of his work. Though I have something to point out. One of my readers mentioned some time back that when the paragraphs are too long it's hard for someone to concentrate on the book they get distracted easily. Just from the synopsis, I saw that because I didn't see if there were paragraphs it was just one long chapter which might discourage lazy readers. Great work though keep up.
I have read the first ten chapters and I love the story development. I hope Derek realise what his feelings are and accept them soon. Because aurora is having a tough time. Author please keep up the good work. I personally have a thing for this kind of writing.❤️💯
This book is great. It is actually amazing and the characters are kinda interesting but all the same the Author really did a great job in writing the book.
Well written, the plot is great, the Grammar Is okay, the characters are easy to understand especially the main characters, every arch in the novel is perfectly written. What else are you waiting for, this will definitely worth your time.
i am a bit skeptical about mafia/gang stories but this one is different. 20 chapters is not enough! i want more i feel excited to know more about it all unfolds!
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Nice story. I just can't wait for the actions, and I can smell love between the boss(Mr. Dangerous Man) and Rory. I hope things goes well for them.
wow the first story is very nice and this one too is such an interesting story. I like gang story😂😂 I'm looking forward to see a whole lot of mafia actions. keep it up Dear more fire🔥🔥🔥🔥
This book is a little fast paced, but the writing style is excellent. No grammatical errors. I love the descriptions, it makes one able to visualize the characters and the environment. The plot is good, but there is room for improvement. I got captivated in the first chapter though. Well done author, you'd go far.
I went through your book and it seems pretty interesting. Especially your manga type of cover. It literally looks as if the hero and heroine are coming out of the page. May it can actually become a comic as well. I'd enjoy that even.
I can't stop reading this book. The synopsis alone is a thrill to make you jump into the story. Sometimes, at the darkest part of our heart, we find love. I want to see more developments
Wow! This book is so amazing. I have read books but I think this book is different;the story development, vocabularies, author's confidence and the series of interesting scenes are just good. I would not mind, if the author decides to cross 1000 chapters, I would be right here reading every single word. Regards.
This book is lit and it deserve nothing less than a 5-star rating. The character design is unique and fantastic. I am already in love with the character Derek and Aurora. I just can't wait to read how their love would blossom. I hope Derek forgives Aurora's father's debt. Stupendous job author Juu. Kudos💯💯💯💯💯😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Great! I am so thrilled already, hopefully I'll get to follow up with the journey of this book. it nice and interesting judging from the blurb.
New to this app and bumping into this story has given me a nice first experience to this genre. I like the author's style of writing and I'm glad I didn't skip this. You should try it too. 🥰🥰🥰
[Reviewed on: 08-09-2022] [Reading status: 3 chapters] [Reviewer: Aysel Inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - Talking about the cover first, please add some cover. Without it the book seems like a dropped or deleted version. - Synopsis seems good, I still suggest to shuffle it. Move the later part of synopsis up and the scene [take from chapter which is placed in synopsis] move it down as second half of synopsis. - Now let's move to the title, I still don't understand what significance it holds. Mind changing it to less poetic and more direct title? Because this one won't catch attention at all, also it's too vague to give anything about the plot. - Let's directly slip to chapter 1, it was interesting, hyped, catchy and intriguing. Good work there. - I grew bored soon in the middle of chapter 2 until the slap scene came in. Good job in putting it as somewhat cliffhanger. - Chapter 3 was great in terms of unfolding more into the plotline and taking us to why the abduction occurred. - I personally loved how the information was split into chunks to make sure the reader would grasp everything and not forget or overlook it. - However, lastly please don't make the paragraphs more than 6 lines It just tire the eyes with the outlook.
No doubt how this book earned an award. The story is amazing! It felt like the emotions of the MC was also the real emotions of the author. It was beautiful and touching. Keep up the good work!
This novel is quite good. very interesting to follow the storyline. Neat characterizations and a strong plot make the reader not easily bored.
wow, the first story is very nice and this one too is such an interesting story.. keep it up, Dear ............................................................
Love the book. The writer's work is impeccable and would love to read more of his work. Though I have something to point out. One of my readers mentioned some time back that when the paragraphs are too long it's hard for someone to concentrate on the book they get distracted easily. Just from the synopsis, I saw that because I didn't see if there were paragraphs it was just one long chapter which might discourage lazy readers. Great work though keep up.
I have read the first ten chapters and I love the story development. I hope Derek realise what his feelings are and accept them soon. Because aurora is having a tough time. Author please keep up the good work. I personally have a thing for this kind of writing.❤️💯
This book is great. It is actually amazing and the characters are kinda interesting but all the same the Author really did a great job in writing the book.
Well written, the plot is great, the Grammar Is okay, the characters are easy to understand especially the main characters, every arch in the novel is perfectly written. What else are you waiting for, this will definitely worth your time.
i am a bit skeptical about mafia/gang stories but this one is different. 20 chapters is not enough! i want more i feel excited to know more about it all unfolds!
Hi there, this is Sharon here, FL Content Editor from Webnovel. This is regarding your WPC 295 Bronze win rewards. Kindly reach out to me on Discord at sharonyap#0439 please. Thanks!
Nice story. I just can't wait for the actions, and I can smell love between the boss(Mr. Dangerous Man) and Rory. I hope things goes well for them.
wow the first story is very nice and this one too is such an interesting story. I like gang story😂😂 I'm looking forward to see a whole lot of mafia actions. keep it up Dear more fire🔥🔥🔥🔥
This book is a little fast paced, but the writing style is excellent. No grammatical errors. I love the descriptions, it makes one able to visualize the characters and the environment. The plot is good, but there is room for improvement. I got captivated in the first chapter though. Well done author, you'd go far.