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Sure enough, I love this. But is not any more updates🥺 any ways, keep going author. Support this and recommended...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I'm giving this book five stars because the author deserves it, I'm not usually a fan of this kind of book but yours was different, I really enjoyed it and hope the author keeps it up.
Autor-nim... You made me loose my mind here... I meann Wow 👏🏼👏🏼 I really enjoyed each and every part of the book. Wonderful way of writing... I need more and more 🥳
Everything is perfect, I love the way it is beautifully written. Keep up the good work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
love the story so far👍! still waiting for the next chapters😁![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Amazing work, great character development. enjoy the story from every step and it was an enjoyable read . Writer did an outstanding work with the story
Great story so far, however I suggest author to improve the writing skills in terms of vocabulary since the flow is quite disturbed when it comes to reading. With keeping that in mind, thing have been described very elaborately and the plot is intriguing as well. I wish author best of luck for the upcoming chapters[img=recommend]
I'm loving this story right from the beginning. I enjoy how you're really enthusiastic in bringing out a flow to your plot. Keep writing, I'll be here to support you. You're with no doubt a very candid author. I recommend it to all authors and readers.😊❤️
Great for the first chapter, keep up the hard work popystyko I’l be here to watch you become na amazing author :) keep up the good luck bro
Honestly, I just like playing League of Legends and Legends of Runeterra and don't know the history of the world or the story behind the characters. Because there are only 4 chapters, there is not much to comment on, but I want to ask, is he still on earth now? Because I'm a little confused about what's going on. Because at first, I thought he was in Zaun, and all the assassination plots and events made it plausible that he wasn't on earth anymore. Then he met a grandma who could use qi? Whatever it is, maybe my brain is the problem because I haven't slept all night.
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Your novel has grabbed me from the first moment, I can't wait to see more chapters and enjoy them. I hadn't read in this App for a while, but now I know what to entertain myself with.
5/5 ! That was amazing!! .. Gotta add it into my reading list.. Will be looking forward to the upcoming chapters╰(⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝)╯ I liked the way you described the setting of the plot! Good work!!
The narrative is easy to understand with no grammar errors and stable updates so far. I like content with great synopsis and the character development is superb anyone could completely feel that they are real in how the author portrayed them. Great work author
this story has the potential to be great, i'm looking forward to a good plot as i read more into it, good job author [img=recommend], you're doing amazing
amazing Dope .. keep the cool author I'm loving this Book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice plot... I like the writting of author... It seems like very interesting story... So please upload more so that l can read more🤭🤭 Keep going... You are doing well
good for the first chapter, but there's a lot of information that are missing, but if iits overed soon then good, expecting good novel. NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM.
Im gonna put 5 stars cause why not? no i'm joking, I think my writing is pretty good but not that amazing, probably needs a little bit of editing here and there, but it's alright i'm sure my writing will improve soon as I write more chapters. . . I hope you will enjoy my fanfic of Arcane, if so, please write a review and tell me what you think thankyou[img=recommend][img=recommend], and thank you for the readers who supported me on my first chapter, that gave me a motivation to continue this, so once again thank you
Sure enough, I love this. But is not any more updates🥺 any ways, keep going author. Support this and recommended...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I'm giving this book five stars because the author deserves it, I'm not usually a fan of this kind of book but yours was different, I really enjoyed it and hope the author keeps it up.
Autor-nim... You made me loose my mind here... I meann Wow 👏🏼👏🏼 I really enjoyed each and every part of the book. Wonderful way of writing... I need more and more 🥳
Everything is perfect, I love the way it is beautifully written. Keep up the good work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
love the story so far👍! still waiting for the next chapters😁![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Amazing work, great character development. enjoy the story from every step and it was an enjoyable read . Writer did an outstanding work with the story
Great story so far, however I suggest author to improve the writing skills in terms of vocabulary since the flow is quite disturbed when it comes to reading. With keeping that in mind, thing have been described very elaborately and the plot is intriguing as well. I wish author best of luck for the upcoming chapters[img=recommend]
I'm loving this story right from the beginning. I enjoy how you're really enthusiastic in bringing out a flow to your plot. Keep writing, I'll be here to support you. You're with no doubt a very candid author. I recommend it to all authors and readers.😊❤️
Great for the first chapter, keep up the hard work popystyko I’l be here to watch you become na amazing author :) keep up the good luck bro
Honestly, I just like playing League of Legends and Legends of Runeterra and don't know the history of the world or the story behind the characters. Because there are only 4 chapters, there is not much to comment on, but I want to ask, is he still on earth now? Because I'm a little confused about what's going on. Because at first, I thought he was in Zaun, and all the assassination plots and events made it plausible that he wasn't on earth anymore. Then he met a grandma who could use qi? Whatever it is, maybe my brain is the problem because I haven't slept all night.
Revelar spoiler Your novel has grabbed me from the first moment, I can't wait to see more chapters and enjoy them. I hadn't read in this App for a while, but now I know what to entertain myself with.
5/5 ! That was amazing!! .. Gotta add it into my reading list.. Will be looking forward to the upcoming chapters╰(⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝)╯ I liked the way you described the setting of the plot! Good work!!
The narrative is easy to understand with no grammar errors and stable updates so far. I like content with great synopsis and the character development is superb anyone could completely feel that they are real in how the author portrayed them. Great work author
this story has the potential to be great, i'm looking forward to a good plot as i read more into it, good job author [img=recommend], you're doing amazing
amazing Dope .. keep the cool author I'm loving this Book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice plot... I like the writting of author... It seems like very interesting story... So please upload more so that l can read more🤭🤭 Keep going... You are doing well
good for the first chapter, but there's a lot of information that are missing, but if iits overed soon then good, expecting good novel. NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM, NO HAREM.
Im gonna put 5 stars cause why not? no i'm joking, I think my writing is pretty good but not that amazing, probably needs a little bit of editing here and there, but it's alright i'm sure my writing will improve soon as I write more chapters. . . I hope you will enjoy my fanfic of Arcane, if so, please write a review and tell me what you think thankyou[img=recommend][img=recommend], and thank you for the readers who supported me on my first chapter, that gave me a motivation to continue this, so once again thank you