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I have yet to read it, but I can tell it will be interesting from the title and the cover. There are flames and I like flames so this is a solid one for me.
This is a great story with potential. It might even become one of the very best hope you can keep us updated author. I would love to read next chapter Best of luck
You can tell a lot of thought and time went into this book, from ch 1 I could tell it had potential. I don’t a lot of novels like these in WN so a fresh idea was refreshing
I like this book! The storyline and plot is good. I like that the mo from the blaze kingdom as I like fire! I hope I can be with him while he would have a wholesome journey!
So far im enjoying reading this book, its only been three chapters, but i love it soon much, you deserve a 🌺 and a 💪🏽 for all your hard work
The storyline seems good, as does the plot. The world building is unique but I have seen this concept a few times. There has been slight development in the story which is good. Character design is great, the basic character personality is displayed. Overall this story is good. Though the first chapter is bland and the grammar and punctuation need fixing. Also maybe try giving your character a realistic personality rather than a happy or determined one, that has been seen in protagonists a lot. Good book though.
I love the characters and the world-building. Octavious is my favorite character so far. Keep up the good work author, and I can't wait for what the future holds :)
Revelar spoiler
The story has lots of potential, i like the way it first lets us know about the world and its background and gives us context about the kingdoms and their relations. one thing i think could be worked on a big is grammar, there are places where different words replace ones that the author actually meant to use. this is an easy fix via getting an editor or double checking. but anyways good book and great beginning looking forward to seeing where Alex goes
I love the part where the story is informative and has a unique way to tell the story of the 4 elements, though it needs a bit of polishing, the story itself is interesting. I do hope you get to work on the other chapters
I'm really enjoying this historical background! There are some run-on sentences and the occasional grammar issue, but clearly a lot of thought has been put into how this world runs. I'm interested to see what happens next!
I read the prologue, i can tell you put some thought and effort into it, but the quality is a bit lacking, i can notice some repetitive phrases and places where there should be a comma but there isnt. There was quite some world-building which i think will be used in the future of the work. The mc is a bit bland, revenge driven, but that isn’t any issue. You just have to make him feel real and everyone will grow to like him. Overall i think this work will go to good places!!
The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
from the look of the book I believe it is going to be interesting that is why I gave it 5 stars. I don't have anything to say anymore so💖💖💖💖💖💖
It's hard to judge so early, but I believe this novel will turn out great! Certainly has a good plot despite its spelling errors, it's well written!
The world-building is good and the story has intrigue...fuelled by revenge. I will keep an eye on it, and look forward to new chapters. There are small issues such as 'show don't tell' in a few scenarios and you need to control info dumping. But it is good overall
Lovely story, I think it has an element to become a great story but only thing that was slightly off was the separation between each paragraph and sentences.
I have yet to read it, but I can tell it will be interesting from the title and the cover. There are flames and I like flames so this is a solid one for me.
This is a great story with potential. It might even become one of the very best hope you can keep us updated author. I would love to read next chapter Best of luck
You can tell a lot of thought and time went into this book, from ch 1 I could tell it had potential. I don’t a lot of novels like these in WN so a fresh idea was refreshing
I like this book! The storyline and plot is good. I like that the mo from the blaze kingdom as I like fire! I hope I can be with him while he would have a wholesome journey!
So far im enjoying reading this book, its only been three chapters, but i love it soon much, you deserve a 🌺 and a 💪🏽 for all your hard work
The storyline seems good, as does the plot. The world building is unique but I have seen this concept a few times. There has been slight development in the story which is good. Character design is great, the basic character personality is displayed. Overall this story is good. Though the first chapter is bland and the grammar and punctuation need fixing. Also maybe try giving your character a realistic personality rather than a happy or determined one, that has been seen in protagonists a lot. Good book though.
I love the characters and the world-building. Octavious is my favorite character so far. Keep up the good work author, and I can't wait for what the future holds :)
Revelar spoiler The story has lots of potential, i like the way it first lets us know about the world and its background and gives us context about the kingdoms and their relations. one thing i think could be worked on a big is grammar, there are places where different words replace ones that the author actually meant to use. this is an easy fix via getting an editor or double checking. but anyways good book and great beginning looking forward to seeing where Alex goes
I love the part where the story is informative and has a unique way to tell the story of the 4 elements, though it needs a bit of polishing, the story itself is interesting. I do hope you get to work on the other chapters
I'm really enjoying this historical background! There are some run-on sentences and the occasional grammar issue, but clearly a lot of thought has been put into how this world runs. I'm interested to see what happens next!
I read the prologue, i can tell you put some thought and effort into it, but the quality is a bit lacking, i can notice some repetitive phrases and places where there should be a comma but there isnt. There was quite some world-building which i think will be used in the future of the work. The mc is a bit bland, revenge driven, but that isn’t any issue. You just have to make him feel real and everyone will grow to like him. Overall i think this work will go to good places!!
The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
from the look of the book I believe it is going to be interesting that is why I gave it 5 stars. I don't have anything to say anymore so💖💖💖💖💖💖
It's hard to judge so early, but I believe this novel will turn out great! Certainly has a good plot despite its spelling errors, it's well written!
The world-building is good and the story has intrigue...fuelled by revenge. I will keep an eye on it, and look forward to new chapters. There are small issues such as 'show don't tell' in a few scenarios and you need to control info dumping. But it is good overall
Lovely story, I think it has an element to become a great story but only thing that was slightly off was the separation between each paragraph and sentences.