Game Of Throne: Lord of Nature

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A world slowly dies the old gods sacrifice themselves to delay the end, will Adrian be able to save it or will he fail if he fails thousands will fall

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It seems like an interesting story, it's just too illegible with how big the paragraphs are. They form huge screen filling walls of text on the phone. Additionally there is a lot of usage of capslock which makes it a tough read, nor is spoken word seperated from a paragraph to make it more distinctive. This story would do well with proper formatting. As it is tough it's illegible for a dyslexic like me and difficult to read through even for those without it.