Battle Across The Omniverse

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ClearSkySage

Another excellent Chapter, and now things are finally starting to pick up the pace even more. I can't wait to see Jayr in a Gold cloth, maybe he will upgrade his own cloth, or will he steal some from Hades or Poseidon and "Purify) them... Or make a new one from zero... I don't know but I am pretty excited to find out. Continue with the excellent work man, I definitely appreciate it. Just the fact you are doing something more original, even using very different worlds for your history is already a pretty good thing. I am loving it. Heck, I even went searching for some Saint Seya fics around and found literally nothing interesting. So you are currently the frigging best saint Seya writer around. Congratulations!! :)

LV 5

DvD_007

honestly this was really enjoyable at the beginning, I loved the saint seiya arc but then we got to arifureta the very next world and my god I hate it. mc gets rāpēd and he goes acting as if nothing, and it was by such annoying character, Eri. like dude I'd rather mc get no waifus at all then make him be with trashy characters like that

LV 6

Odyin

Author Review: Well with some shame, I'll review my own work, hoping to support it and that more people pick it up. Writing Quality: I'll say it is quite good, I always check for grammar errors, before posting, while some things can always escape my sight, I always correct them when someone makes me notice it. Stability of Updates: I'm always on time, when I say that I'll post a chapter, it will happen, I also post bonus almost every week. Story Development: A bit slow, I'm trying to not rush through the scenes, and I'm still at the beginning of the story as I'm writing this review, but I make sure to frequentily check the flow of it, and make sure to not create plot hole. Character Design: On this nothing to original or over the top, but in the case of the non-OC characters, I always make sure to not distort their personalities, at least not without just cause, ie: MC did something, as well try to make them as fleshed out as I can at the moment. Talking of the MC, he is a good guy, while he will be able to kill his opponents he will only reclutantely do so, his background is that of an idealistic doctor, so if he can save a life he will do anything possible to do so. While the other OC, I planned to make them as varied and different from each other as possible, World Background: Well this is a Multiverse one, but I try to study in deep every world I write about and if I add something to it, I make sure that is credible, and coerent with the rest. All in all, I think I'm doing a good job for now, and I feel that I'm improving every chapter I write, and while the world of the MC isn't the most popular one, it is still something not so much explored on this site and does that did so give up soon after writing a few chapters, so a good challenge, and for those that pick it up but are worried that I'll drop it, can take it easy as I'll finish this story... Like always have fun reading, Ciao.

LV 1

xXI_Like_swordsXx

playing elder ring first quarter of the time he has went and completely shutdown...... man I love this book, the first chapters are amazing, can't wait for more, please keep writing

LV 1

JMC1508

I was happy to be reminded of Saint Seiya. The MC is a 'Hero' type but not a naive person nor an idealist. And i like 'hero' type or the kind of anti-hero like Die Hard trilogy. Flawed, but a desire to do the right thing when it count. The Story flow is fast enough to be very entertaining but writting is 'light' enough to be pleasant to follow. I'm not a fan of politics and drama but it's necessary and here these elements are used with subtelty like a spice on a dish. I like this. I want to thank author for his hard work. PS: for the anti-harem sect go check solo polarmory and keep in mind that this one exist in real life. Makes me wonder if some people support and defend this what is so intolerable about harems. Trolololl?! :)~

LV 4

Zero_Speed

I was a huge fan of your last work hopefully this one has more original content, haven't read it yet will change review after wdghddgvdsrgvdrtgfdgjgfdgbjjfffdyhvfryhhgftyujhgfty

LV 4

CaveSquirrel

I don't know what is happening.Can someone explain it?

LV 4

ClearSkySage

Form I, Shii-Cho, taught the basics of the sword and how to read the flow of the Force. Form II, Makashi, added weak point targeting, footwork, and feints. Form III, Soresu, added linked, stance-based maneuvers and Force Precognition for defense against multiple blasters. Form IV, Ataru, added Force Valor, along with jumping, controlled falling, and spinning maneuvers along all three axes of flipping, spinning, and side-rolling. Form V, Shien, taught how to deflect a blaster attack towards the shooter, while Form V, Djem So taught how to use the Force to increase the strength of your attacks. Form VI, Niman, added Force Push and Force Pull to combat and taught how to integrate them into attacking and defense while creating your own style through personalized assimilation of the previous styles.

LV 4

ClearSkySage

Never saw a Saint Seya novel just for that you already have my full gratitude. And it is extremely well written, loved every chapter of this one and I hope you can give us some more in the future. I just wish the training parts were longer and a little more detailed, but that is just my preference, and I have always been a sucker for training arcs. Overall an excellent work and something I definitely recommend to anyone who is a fan. PS: Cosmos is incredible OP. And I can't wait to see all the incredible things you will show us :)

LV 1

Tasha_Williams_0673

People are going to hate, but I love this ff.

LV 4

Lizrock

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Raventan

Very good but I think fighting scenes a bit too long such as Yugioh duel, GurenVsAnispiral it bit more than necessity make it little boring please keep going everything is good already

LV 4

Nob7

Author how many chapters do you think this fic will have? Please answer me..

LV 4

Lizrock

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LV 3

STRELOK474

Great story!Please continue!..........................................................................................................................

LV 5

MorningWood_Dao

don't know why, it feels uncomfortable to read. other than that, it's a good novel. ndidbxjsjsjsjsjsjbsisjsbiskznkzbzjzbzixbxjxbxjxhxbxixbxj

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Shin_6996

Good novel a bit of errors in spelling rest alright.[img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

ClearSkySage

“This, this is teacher’s Dragon Emperor Demonic Rupture! Elder brother is able to use this soul skill. No wonder he did not want to use his fifth soul skill when he sparred against us. It’s actually the Dragon Emperor Demonic Rupture! With Sovereign’s Descent as its foundation, and with the Golden Holy Dragon martial soul as its source, it’s able to destroy everything! Furthermore, it will evolve as one’s cultivation improves. It’s a powerful soul skill representative of a true Titled Douluo, or even a Transcendent Douluo, or even an Ultimate Douluo!”