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Lasted 37 chapters. And people who want to read it better not fall for the title.........................................................................................................................................................
honestly dude is this guy gonna become a villain or even have a romance for that matter because it gives me some vibes telling me he is gonna become a villain
excellent character development, refined plot... I recommend everyone to at least read 30 chapters. I'm sure you'l love this masterpiece.
Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 3/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 4/5
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I kinda have been following Naruto/Boruto since start, well story is well written by the fact character development is good, but Mc starting to fight at the age of 3 was little too early, it was the time for everyone to develop their emotions rather than fighting, as he also died young in his last world, the emotional bonding is missing
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Pretty good kinda sad that the other fan fic was dropped tho F but this is kinda banger lol __________________________________________\\\\\\\\
I would have given you a 5/5 had it not been for that shadow energy and Flashbacks from his past life, he would have been much better an ordinary person from our world. Instead you sent someone with abilities. Thus making his skills have a lousy development and his effort less valuable. A guy who masters everything just because instead of a talented one who has been forging his skills from scratch. You have good writing, I like it, but I dislike the resources you use. This story could have been better and I think it can improve a lot, if so I will edit this comment and give you the grade you deserve. Remember that my rating is based on personal taste, and I hate SI's who have to be "special" in their previous life. And by the way, I'm an idiot, don't let me discourage you, you are a much better writer than I am.
What's a Boruto? some type of ramen? Doesn't ring any bells .........................................................................................
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author make him the real Arthur leywin not some knock off it will be simpler more effective and interesting
Lasted 37 chapters. And people who want to read it better not fall for the title.........................................................................................................................................................
honestly dude is this guy gonna become a villain or even have a romance for that matter because it gives me some vibes telling me he is gonna become a villain
excellent character development, refined plot... I recommend everyone to at least read 30 chapters. I'm sure you'l love this masterpiece.
Writing Quality 5/5 Stability of Updates 3/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 4/5
u deserve it, hope to read more of it. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I kinda have been following Naruto/Boruto since start, well story is well written by the fact character development is good, but Mc starting to fight at the age of 3 was little too early, it was the time for everyone to develop their emotions rather than fighting, as he also died young in his last world, the emotional bonding is missing
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Pretty good kinda sad that the other fan fic was dropped tho F but this is kinda banger lol __________________________________________\\\\\\\\
I would have given you a 5/5 had it not been for that shadow energy and Flashbacks from his past life, he would have been much better an ordinary person from our world. Instead you sent someone with abilities. Thus making his skills have a lousy development and his effort less valuable. A guy who masters everything just because instead of a talented one who has been forging his skills from scratch. You have good writing, I like it, but I dislike the resources you use. This story could have been better and I think it can improve a lot, if so I will edit this comment and give you the grade you deserve. Remember that my rating is based on personal taste, and I hate SI's who have to be "special" in their previous life. And by the way, I'm an idiot, don't let me discourage you, you are a much better writer than I am.
What's a Boruto? some type of ramen? Doesn't ring any bells .........................................................................................
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
author make him the real Arthur leywin not some knock off it will be simpler more effective and interesting